Project 写作实践
【主题句子仿写】
1. 昨天晚上,我害怕独自在黑暗中行走。
(scared of)

2. 即使感到疲惫,他也没有放弃练习篮球。
(give up)

3. 去年我表哥为了进入他最喜欢的中学而努力学习。(get into)

4. 虽然我很紧张,但还是决定在歌唱活动中试一试。(give it a go)

5. 露西小的时候梦想成为一名摄影师。
(dream of)

1. Yesterday evening,I was scared of walking alone
in the dark.
2. He didn't give up practising basketball even when
he felt tired.
3. My cousin studied hard to get into his favourite
middle school last year.
4. Although I was nervous,I decided to give it a go
in the singing event.
5. Lucy dreamed of becoming a photographer when
she was young.

【分析】
这是指定短语提示的汉译英仿写题，解题思路可以按三步走：第一步先抓取句中的时间标志词，确定整句的时态，本题所有句子的时间都是过去的时间点，统一用一般过去时；第二步把题干给出的指定核心短语先提取出来，回忆该短语的固定搭配规则，比如介词后要接动名词形式；第三步把剩余的句子成分按英语语序补充完整，涉及让步、时间状语的部分调整到符合英语表达习惯的位置，避免逐字直译的错误。
【解析】
1. 时间状语“昨天晚上”对应Yesterday evening，时态为一般过去时；主语I搭配be动词的过去式was，“害怕做某事”用指定短语be scared of，介词of后接动名词，“独自行走”译为walking alone，“在黑暗中”译为in the dark，组合后得到通顺句子。
2. 句子描述过去发生的事，用一般过去时；主语He，否定形式借助助动词didn't，“放弃做某事”用指定短语give up，后接动名词，“练习篮球”译为practising basketball；“即使感到疲惫”用even when引导让步状语从句，译为even when he felt tired。
3. 时间状语“去年”对应last year，时态为一般过去时；主语My cousin，“努力学习”译为studied hard，用不定式表目的，指定短语get into放在to后，“进入他最喜欢的中学”译为get into his favourite middle school，调整语序得到通顺句子。
4. “虽然”用Although引导让步状语从句，“我很紧张”译为I was nervous；时态为一般过去时，“决定做某事”用decided to do，指定短语give it a go放在to后，“在歌唱活动中”译为in the singing event。
5. 时间状语“露西小的时候”用when she was young作时间状语，时态为一般过去时；指定短语dream of后接动名词，“成为一名摄影师”译为becoming a photographer，dream的过去式为dreamed，组合后得到通顺句子。
【答案】
1. Yesterday evening,I was scared of walking alone in the dark.
2. He didn't give up practising basketball even when he felt tired.
3. My cousin studied hard to get into his favourite middle school last year.
4. Although I was nervous,I decided to give it a go in the singing event.
5. Lucy dreamed of becoming a photographer when she was young.
【知识点】
固定短语搭配，一般过去时，状语从句
【点评】
本题侧重考察初中阶段核心动词短语的用法和基础时态的应用，给出指定短语降低了翻译难度，需要学生特别注意介词后接动名词的规则，避免出现搭配错误，同时注意中英语序的差异，调整状语位置让句子更符合英语表达习惯。
【难度系数】
0.7

【主题写作实践】
(2025长沙一模改编)在繁忙的生活中,
爱好如同一盏明灯,照亮我们的前路,给我们
带来无尽的快乐和满足感。假如你是李华,你
们班老师很重视同学们的爱好,决定开展主题
为"My Hobby Makes Me Better"的个人爱好
分享会。请你根据以下内容提示,和大家分享
一下吧。
内容包括:
1.你的爱好是什么?
2.人为什么要有爱好?-(1)有利于健康;
(2)有利于自我提升;
(3)……
注意:
(1)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息;
(2)写作词数为80左右。
写作提纲:

规范作文:

My Hobby Makes Me Better
My hobby is reading. It's a wonderful journey
that takes me to different worlds.
There are several reasons why hobbies are
special. Firstly,they're good for our health. Reading,
for example, helps me relax and reduce stress.
Secondly, hobbies can help us improve ourselves.
Reading can open my eyes, showing me different
cultures and thoughts. Last but not least, hobbies
can build connections. I can communicate with other
book lovers,share ideas, and make new friends.
In a word, hobbies light up our lives and make
us better.

【分析】
这是一篇校园主题分享类英语短文写作，解题时要紧扣给定的思维导图和写作要求梳理行文逻辑：第一步开篇直接点明自己的爱好是阅读，对应提示里的核心内容，开门见山适配分享会的场景；第二步主体部分按照题干给出的三个理由逐一展开，每个理由搭配和阅读相关的具体实例，让内容不空洞，分别对应有益健康、自我提升、建立人际联结三个方向；最后用总结句收尾呼应主题，全程注意规避真实个人信息，控制总词数在要求范围内，保证行文连贯通顺。
【解析】
1. 开篇段：直接点题，说明自己的爱好是阅读，补充描述阅读是能带自己去往不同世界的奇妙旅程，快速切入分享主题。
2. 主体段：用总起句引出爱好有特殊意义的几个原因，分三点依次阐述：① 说明爱好对健康有益，举例阅读可以帮助自己放松、缓解压力；② 说明爱好能帮助自我提升，举例阅读可以开阔眼界，了解不同的文化与思想；③ 说明爱好能搭建人际联结，举例自己可以和其他爱读书的人交流想法、结交新朋友。
3. 结尾段：用总结句收尾，点明爱好点亮生活、让我们变得更好，呼应全文主题，完成写作。
【答案】
My Hobby Makes Me Better
My hobby is reading. It's a wonderful journey that takes me to different worlds.
There are several reasons why hobbies are special. Firstly,they're good for our health. Reading,for example, helps me relax and reduce stress. Secondly, hobbies can help us improve ourselves. Reading can open my eyes, showing me different cultures and thoughts. Last but not least, hobbies can build connections. I can communicate with other book lovers,share ideas, and make new friends.
In a word, hobbies light up our lives and make us better.
【知识点】
英语话题写作，谋篇布局，爱好类表达
【点评】
本篇习作完全覆盖题干所有写作要点，严格对应给定的思维导图框架，采用总分总的清晰结构，每一个论点都搭配了贴合阅读爱好的具体实例，内容充实逻辑顺畅，语言表达自然得体，符合班级分享会的语境要求，词数符合规定，没有出现违规的个人信息，是一篇合格的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.7