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七、书面表达(满分 25 分)
你校英语社团计划开展“守护长江，绿色未来”主题活动。请根据以下提示，以社团负责人李华的身份写一篇英文倡议书，呼吁全校师生参与环保行动。
现状与挑战：
江面塑料污染、过度捕捞破坏生态系统 (ecosystem) 等问题。
具体倡议：
1. 个人行动：减少塑料制品使用，……；
2. 校园行动：两岸植树，……；
3. 科技助力：AI 智能监测，…… 。
要求：
1. 词数：不少于 100 词，开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数；
2. 倡议书内容必须包括以上要点，可适当发挥；
3. 段落分明，语意通顺，书写规范；
4. 不得出现真实姓名、校名及地名等信息。
Dear teachers and classmates,
The Yangtze River, our mother river, is facing serious challenges.
Remember: every little thing we do brings us closer to a green future. Come and join us today!
你校英语社团计划开展“守护长江，绿色未来”主题活动。请根据以下提示，以社团负责人李华的身份写一篇英文倡议书，呼吁全校师生参与环保行动。
现状与挑战：
江面塑料污染、过度捕捞破坏生态系统 (ecosystem) 等问题。
具体倡议：
1. 个人行动：减少塑料制品使用，……；
2. 校园行动：两岸植树，……；
3. 科技助力：AI 智能监测，…… 。
要求：
1. 词数：不少于 100 词，开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数；
2. 倡议书内容必须包括以上要点，可适当发挥；
3. 段落分明，语意通顺，书写规范；
4. 不得出现真实姓名、校名及地名等信息。
Dear teachers and classmates,
The Yangtze River, our mother river, is facing serious challenges.
Remember: every little thing we do brings us closer to a green future. Come and join us today!
答案
Dear teachers and classmates,
The Yangtze River, our mother river, is facing serious challenges. Plastic pollution is everywhere on the river surface, and overfishing has broken the balance of its ecosystem. It’s time for us to take action to protect it.
First, let’s start with personal actions. We should reduce the use of plastic products, such as bringing reusable bags when shopping and refusing disposable tableware. Every small step can cut down plastic waste entering the river.
Second, we can organize campus activities. Planting trees along both sides of the Yangtze River can prevent soil erosion and provide a better living environment for aquatic organisms. We can also hold river-cleaning activities on weekends to collect rubbish by the river.
Third, we can use technology to help. With AI intelligent monitoring systems, we can track the situation of plastic pollution and illegal fishing in real time. This can help relevant departments take timely measures to stop harmful behaviours.
Remember: every little thing we do brings us closer to a green future. Come and join us today!
The Yangtze River, our mother river, is facing serious challenges. Plastic pollution is everywhere on the river surface, and overfishing has broken the balance of its ecosystem. It’s time for us to take action to protect it.
First, let’s start with personal actions. We should reduce the use of plastic products, such as bringing reusable bags when shopping and refusing disposable tableware. Every small step can cut down plastic waste entering the river.
Second, we can organize campus activities. Planting trees along both sides of the Yangtze River can prevent soil erosion and provide a better living environment for aquatic organisms. We can also hold river-cleaning activities on weekends to collect rubbish by the river.
Third, we can use technology to help. With AI intelligent monitoring systems, we can track the situation of plastic pollution and illegal fishing in real time. This can help relevant departments take timely measures to stop harmful behaviours.
Remember: every little thing we do brings us closer to a green future. Come and join us today!
解析
【分析】
首先，明确写作身份是英语社团负责人李华，文体为英文倡议书，核心主题是“守护长江，绿色未来”。解题思路如下：
1. 承接给定开头，先清晰阐述长江面临的两大核心问题：江面塑料污染、过度捕捞破坏生态系统，以此引发师生对长江现状的重视，自然引出环保行动的必要性。
2. 按照题目要求的三个倡议维度展开：
个人行动：围绕“减少塑料制品使用”，补充具体可操作的做法，如自带购物袋、拒绝一次性餐具等，说明小行动对减少入河塑料垃圾的作用；
校园行动：在“两岸植树”基础上，补充校园可开展的实际活动，如周末清河行动，同时点明植树的生态意义（防止水土流失、改善水生生物生存环境）；
科技助力：结合“AI智能监测”，说明其具体功能，如实时追踪塑料污染、非法捕捞行为，助力相关部门及时处置，体现科技在环保中的作用。
3. 注意语言要符合倡议书的号召性，段落分明，保证词数达标，且不出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 现状阐述：承接开头，用“Plastic pollution is everywhere on the river surface, and overfishing has broken the balance of its ecosystem.”点明长江面临的两大挑战，并用“It’s time for us to take action to protect it.”引出行动倡议，过渡自然。
2. 个人行动倡议：用“First, let’s start with personal actions.”引出，具体举例“We should reduce the use of plastic products, such as bringing reusable bags when shopping and refusing disposable tableware.”，并补充“Every small step can cut down plastic waste entering the river.”说明行动意义，增强说服力。
3. 校园行动倡议：以“Second, we can organize campus activities.”引领，先说明植树的作用“Planting trees along both sides of the Yangtze River can prevent soil erosion and provide a better living environment for aquatic organisms.”，再补充校园可开展的拓展活动“We can also hold river-cleaning activities on weekends to collect rubbish by the river.”，丰富内容。
4. 科技助力倡议：用“Third, we can use technology to help.”开启，具体说明AI监测的功能“With AI intelligent monitoring systems, we can track the situation of plastic pollution and illegal fishing in real time. This can help relevant departments take timely measures to stop harmful behaviours.”，体现科技赋能环保的特点。
5. 整体语言正式且富有号召力，段落清晰，符合倡议书的文体要求，且内容覆盖所有要点，词数达标。
【答案】
Dear teachers and classmates,
The Yangtze River, our mother river, is facing serious challenges. Plastic pollution is everywhere on the river surface, and overfishing has broken the balance of its ecosystem. It’s time for us to take action to protect it.
First, let’s start with personal actions. We should reduce the use of plastic products, such as bringing reusable bags when shopping and refusing disposable tableware. Every small step can cut down plastic waste entering the river.
Second, we can organize campus activities. Planting trees along both sides of the Yangtze River can prevent soil erosion and provide a better living environment for aquatic organisms. We can also hold river-cleaning activities on weekends to collect rubbish by the river.
Third, we can use technology to help. With AI intelligent monitoring systems, we can track the situation of plastic pollution and illegal fishing in real time. This can help relevant departments take timely measures to stop harmful behaviours.
Remember: every little thing we do brings us closer to a green future. Come and join us today!
【知识点】
英文倡议书写作、环保主题词汇运用、段落结构组织
【点评】
本文紧扣“守护长江，绿色未来”的核心主题，结构清晰明了：先点明长江面临的生态危机，再从个人、校园、科技三个维度提出具体可行的环保倡议，每个倡议都补充了实际做法与对应意义，内容充实且有说服力。语言正式得体，富有号召力，符合倡议书的文体要求，同时严格遵循题目所有要求，词数达标，段落分明，能有效呼吁全校师生参与长江环保行动。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先，明确写作身份是英语社团负责人李华，文体为英文倡议书，核心主题是“守护长江，绿色未来”。解题思路如下：
1. 承接给定开头，先清晰阐述长江面临的两大核心问题：江面塑料污染、过度捕捞破坏生态系统，以此引发师生对长江现状的重视，自然引出环保行动的必要性。
2. 按照题目要求的三个倡议维度展开：
个人行动：围绕“减少塑料制品使用”，补充具体可操作的做法，如自带购物袋、拒绝一次性餐具等，说明小行动对减少入河塑料垃圾的作用；
校园行动：在“两岸植树”基础上，补充校园可开展的实际活动，如周末清河行动，同时点明植树的生态意义（防止水土流失、改善水生生物生存环境）；
科技助力：结合“AI智能监测”，说明其具体功能，如实时追踪塑料污染、非法捕捞行为，助力相关部门及时处置，体现科技在环保中的作用。
3. 注意语言要符合倡议书的号召性，段落分明，保证词数达标，且不出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 现状阐述：承接开头，用“Plastic pollution is everywhere on the river surface, and overfishing has broken the balance of its ecosystem.”点明长江面临的两大挑战，并用“It’s time for us to take action to protect it.”引出行动倡议，过渡自然。
2. 个人行动倡议：用“First, let’s start with personal actions.”引出，具体举例“We should reduce the use of plastic products, such as bringing reusable bags when shopping and refusing disposable tableware.”，并补充“Every small step can cut down plastic waste entering the river.”说明行动意义，增强说服力。
3. 校园行动倡议：以“Second, we can organize campus activities.”引领，先说明植树的作用“Planting trees along both sides of the Yangtze River can prevent soil erosion and provide a better living environment for aquatic organisms.”，再补充校园可开展的拓展活动“We can also hold river-cleaning activities on weekends to collect rubbish by the river.”，丰富内容。
4. 科技助力倡议：用“Third, we can use technology to help.”开启，具体说明AI监测的功能“With AI intelligent monitoring systems, we can track the situation of plastic pollution and illegal fishing in real time. This can help relevant departments take timely measures to stop harmful behaviours.”，体现科技赋能环保的特点。
5. 整体语言正式且富有号召力，段落清晰，符合倡议书的文体要求，且内容覆盖所有要点，词数达标。
【答案】
Dear teachers and classmates,
The Yangtze River, our mother river, is facing serious challenges. Plastic pollution is everywhere on the river surface, and overfishing has broken the balance of its ecosystem. It’s time for us to take action to protect it.
First, let’s start with personal actions. We should reduce the use of plastic products, such as bringing reusable bags when shopping and refusing disposable tableware. Every small step can cut down plastic waste entering the river.
Second, we can organize campus activities. Planting trees along both sides of the Yangtze River can prevent soil erosion and provide a better living environment for aquatic organisms. We can also hold river-cleaning activities on weekends to collect rubbish by the river.
Third, we can use technology to help. With AI intelligent monitoring systems, we can track the situation of plastic pollution and illegal fishing in real time. This can help relevant departments take timely measures to stop harmful behaviours.
Remember: every little thing we do brings us closer to a green future. Come and join us today!
【知识点】
英文倡议书写作、环保主题词汇运用、段落结构组织
【点评】
本文紧扣“守护长江，绿色未来”的核心主题，结构清晰明了：先点明长江面临的生态危机，再从个人、校园、科技三个维度提出具体可行的环保倡议，每个倡议都补充了实际做法与对应意义，内容充实且有说服力。语言正式得体，富有号召力，符合倡议书的文体要求，同时严格遵循题目所有要求，词数达标，段落分明，能有效呼吁全校师生参与长江环保行动。
【难度系数】
0.6
