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五、书面表达。（30 分）
假设你和你的三个朋友 John、Kate、Paul 分别在四个不同的城市，请你根据表格信息写一篇短文，词数 70 词左右。
要求：必须包括表格内的所有信息，可适当拓展。
假设你和你的三个朋友 John、Kate、Paul 分别在四个不同的城市，请你根据表格信息写一篇短文，词数 70 词左右。
要求：必须包括表格内的所有信息，可适当拓展。
答案
One possible version:
I have three friends—John, Kate and Paul. John is in London. It's foggy today. John is wearing a shirt and pants and he is eating in the restaurant now. Kate is in Sydney and it's sunny and hot there. She is wearing a T-shirt and a pair of shorts. And she is playing beach volleyball with her friends now. Paul is in Moscow and it's snowing and cold there. Paul is wearing a coat and a scarf and he is making a snowman with his brother.
I'm in Shanghai and it's winter now. So it's really cold but it's not snowy. It's windy. I am wearing a coat and a pair of gloves. And I'm playing in the park with my family.
I have three friends—John, Kate and Paul. John is in London. It's foggy today. John is wearing a shirt and pants and he is eating in the restaurant now. Kate is in Sydney and it's sunny and hot there. She is wearing a T-shirt and a pair of shorts. And she is playing beach volleyball with her friends now. Paul is in Moscow and it's snowing and cold there. Paul is wearing a coat and a scarf and he is making a snowman with his brother.
I'm in Shanghai and it's winter now. So it's really cold but it's not snowy. It's windy. I am wearing a coat and a pair of gloves. And I'm playing in the park with my family.
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求：根据表格信息写一篇70词左右的短文，必须包含表格内所有信息，可适当拓展。解题思路：1. 梳理表格中John、Kate、Paul及“我”的关键信息（姓名、所在城市、天气、穿着、活动）；2. 搭建文章结构：总起介绍朋友→分述三位朋友的情况→介绍自己的情况；3. 选择合适时态：描述当前状态用一般现在时，描述正在进行的动作用现在进行时，让内容更贴合场景；4. 将表格信息转化为通顺的英语句子，补充合理细节（如活动同伴），控制词数，确保语法正确。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 总起：用“I have three friends—John, Kate and Paul.”引出写作对象；
2. 介绍John：对应表格信息，组织句子“John is in London. It's foggy today. He is wearing a shirt and pants and eating in the restaurant now.”；
3. 介绍Kate：对应表格信息，补充合理拓展（如活动同伴），组织句子“Kate is in Sydney. It's sunny and hot. She is wearing a T-shirt and shorts, playing beach volleyball with her friends.”；
4. 介绍Paul：对应表格信息，补充合理拓展，组织句子“Paul is in Moscow. It's snowy. He is wearing a coat and a scarf, making a snowman with his brother.”；
5. 介绍自己：对应表格中上海的天气，补充合理穿着和活动，组织句子“I'm in Shanghai. It's windy and cold. I'm wearing a coat and gloves, playing in the park with my family.”；
最后检查是否涵盖所有表格信息，词数符合要求，语法正确。
【答案】
One possible version:
I have three friends—John, Kate and Paul. John is in London. It's foggy today. John is wearing a shirt and pants and he is eating in the restaurant now. Kate is in Sydney and it's sunny and hot there. She is wearing a T-shirt and a pair of shorts. And she is playing beach volleyball with her friends now. Paul is in Moscow and it's snowing and cold there. Paul is wearing a coat and a scarf and he is making a snowman with his brother.
I'm in Shanghai and it's winter now. So it's really cold but it's not snowy. It's windy. I am wearing a coat and a pair of gloves. And I'm playing in the park with my family.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；时态运用；信息整合
【点评】
本题为信息类书面表达题，考查学生整合表格信息、运用英语描述日常场景的能力，要求兼顾信息完整性与内容丰富性，是初中英语常见写作题型，能有效锻炼学生的语言输出能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确题目要求：根据表格信息写一篇70词左右的短文，必须包含表格内所有信息，可适当拓展。解题思路：1. 梳理表格中John、Kate、Paul及“我”的关键信息（姓名、所在城市、天气、穿着、活动）；2. 搭建文章结构：总起介绍朋友→分述三位朋友的情况→介绍自己的情况；3. 选择合适时态：描述当前状态用一般现在时，描述正在进行的动作用现在进行时，让内容更贴合场景；4. 将表格信息转化为通顺的英语句子，补充合理细节（如活动同伴），控制词数，确保语法正确。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 总起：用“I have three friends—John, Kate and Paul.”引出写作对象；
2. 介绍John：对应表格信息，组织句子“John is in London. It's foggy today. He is wearing a shirt and pants and eating in the restaurant now.”；
3. 介绍Kate：对应表格信息，补充合理拓展（如活动同伴），组织句子“Kate is in Sydney. It's sunny and hot. She is wearing a T-shirt and shorts, playing beach volleyball with her friends.”；
4. 介绍Paul：对应表格信息，补充合理拓展，组织句子“Paul is in Moscow. It's snowy. He is wearing a coat and a scarf, making a snowman with his brother.”；
5. 介绍自己：对应表格中上海的天气，补充合理穿着和活动，组织句子“I'm in Shanghai. It's windy and cold. I'm wearing a coat and gloves, playing in the park with my family.”；
最后检查是否涵盖所有表格信息，词数符合要求，语法正确。
【答案】
One possible version:
I have three friends—John, Kate and Paul. John is in London. It's foggy today. John is wearing a shirt and pants and he is eating in the restaurant now. Kate is in Sydney and it's sunny and hot there. She is wearing a T-shirt and a pair of shorts. And she is playing beach volleyball with her friends now. Paul is in Moscow and it's snowing and cold there. Paul is wearing a coat and a scarf and he is making a snowman with his brother.
I'm in Shanghai and it's winter now. So it's really cold but it's not snowy. It's windy. I am wearing a coat and a pair of gloves. And I'm playing in the park with my family.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；时态运用；信息整合
【点评】
本题为信息类书面表达题，考查学生整合表格信息、运用英语描述日常场景的能力，要求兼顾信息完整性与内容丰富性，是初中英语常见写作题型，能有效锻炼学生的语言输出能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
