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六、书面表达。
中国地大物博，名胜古迹遍布大江南北。现在某旅游网站正在进行“最美家乡”征文活动，请你根据以下要点，以“An Amazing Place in My Hometown”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍家乡最美的地方。
要点提示：
1. Where is it?
2. How large/high/deep is it?
3. What is special about it?
4. What are your suggestions for traveling?
写作要求：
1. 文中须包含以上要点提示，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现本人的真实姓名或校名；
3. 词数70个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
An Amazing Place in My Hometown
My hometown is famous for many amazing places. But I think
中国地大物博，名胜古迹遍布大江南北。现在某旅游网站正在进行“最美家乡”征文活动，请你根据以下要点，以“An Amazing Place in My Hometown”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍家乡最美的地方。
要点提示：
1. Where is it?
2. How large/high/deep is it?
3. What is special about it?
4. What are your suggestions for traveling?
写作要求：
1. 文中须包含以上要点提示，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现本人的真实姓名或校名；
3. 词数70个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
An Amazing Place in My Hometown
My hometown is famous for many amazing places. But I think
答案
An Amazing Place in My Hometown
My hometown is famous for many amazing places. But I think Suzhou Gardens are the most famous. Suzhou Gardens are in Suzhou city, Jiangsu Province. These gardens are usually small, covering one to two square kilometers. Though they are not big, the perfect design of these gardens shows the wisdom of Chinese people.
In the Zhuozheng Garden, you can walk along the paths and enjoy the beautiful views. You can also meet friends and drink tea there. Spring and autumn are the best time to visit Suzhou Gardens. Many visitors go there in these two seasons every year.
My hometown is famous for many amazing places. But I think Suzhou Gardens are the most famous. Suzhou Gardens are in Suzhou city, Jiangsu Province. These gardens are usually small, covering one to two square kilometers. Though they are not big, the perfect design of these gardens shows the wisdom of Chinese people.
In the Zhuozheng Garden, you can walk along the paths and enjoy the beautiful views. You can also meet friends and drink tea there. Spring and autumn are the best time to visit Suzhou Gardens. Many visitors go there in these two seasons every year.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，任务是介绍家乡最美的地方，需紧扣四个指定要点（位置、规模/面积、特色、旅行建议）展开。解题思路：1. 先选定一个具体的家乡景点（如参考答案中的苏州园林）；2. 依次对应四个要点组织语言：说明景点位置、描述其规模、突出特色、给出旅行建议；3. 控制词数（70左右），避免出现真实个人信息，语言需通顺符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，点明介绍的景点：But I think Suzhou Gardens are the most famous.
2. 回答位置：Suzhou Gardens are in Suzhou city, Jiangsu Province.
3. 回答规模：These gardens are usually small, covering one to two square kilometers.
4. 回答特色：Though they are not big, the perfect design of these gardens shows the wisdom of Chinese people.
5. 回答旅行建议：In the Zhuozheng Garden, you can walk along the paths and enjoy the beautiful views. You can also meet friends and drink tea there. Spring and autumn are the best time to visit Suzhou Gardens. Many visitors go there in these two seasons every year.
【答案】
An Amazing Place in My Hometown
My hometown is famous for many amazing places. But I think Suzhou Gardens are the most famous. Suzhou Gardens are in Suzhou city, Jiangsu Province. These gardens are usually small, covering one to two square kilometers. Though they are not big, the perfect design of these gardens shows the wisdom of Chinese people.
In the Zhuozheng Garden, you can walk along the paths and enjoy the beautiful views. You can also meet friends and drink tea there. Spring and autumn are the best time to visit Suzhou Gardens. Many visitors go there in these two seasons every year.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、要点式短文写作、家乡介绍类英语作文
【点评】
本题为初中英语常见书面表达题型，主题贴近学生生活，要求涵盖指定要点，考查学生英语组织与表达能力，难度适中，学生掌握要点展开方法即可完成。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达题，任务是介绍家乡最美的地方，需紧扣四个指定要点（位置、规模/面积、特色、旅行建议）展开。解题思路：1. 先选定一个具体的家乡景点（如参考答案中的苏州园林）；2. 依次对应四个要点组织语言：说明景点位置、描述其规模、突出特色、给出旅行建议；3. 控制词数（70左右），避免出现真实个人信息，语言需通顺符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，点明介绍的景点：But I think Suzhou Gardens are the most famous.
2. 回答位置：Suzhou Gardens are in Suzhou city, Jiangsu Province.
3. 回答规模：These gardens are usually small, covering one to two square kilometers.
4. 回答特色：Though they are not big, the perfect design of these gardens shows the wisdom of Chinese people.
5. 回答旅行建议：In the Zhuozheng Garden, you can walk along the paths and enjoy the beautiful views. You can also meet friends and drink tea there. Spring and autumn are the best time to visit Suzhou Gardens. Many visitors go there in these two seasons every year.
【答案】
An Amazing Place in My Hometown
My hometown is famous for many amazing places. But I think Suzhou Gardens are the most famous. Suzhou Gardens are in Suzhou city, Jiangsu Province. These gardens are usually small, covering one to two square kilometers. Though they are not big, the perfect design of these gardens shows the wisdom of Chinese people.
In the Zhuozheng Garden, you can walk along the paths and enjoy the beautiful views. You can also meet friends and drink tea there. Spring and autumn are the best time to visit Suzhou Gardens. Many visitors go there in these two seasons every year.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、要点式短文写作、家乡介绍类英语作文
【点评】
本题为初中英语常见书面表达题型，主题贴近学生生活，要求涵盖指定要点，考查学生英语组织与表达能力，难度适中，学生掌握要点展开方法即可完成。
【难度系数】
0.6
