【写作主题】本单元的话题是“规则”，要求学生学会运用本单元所学知识及语法写一篇关于现代生活新事物的规则清单的文章。
【范文赏析】
In modern life, online shopping is very popular. It brings us great convenience.（现代生活中网上购物的现状）Here are some important rules to follow.（引出下文）
First, when choosing a shopping website, we must make sure it’s reliable. Don’t buy from unknown websites easily, or you might get into trouble. Second, protect your private information. Never share your password with others. If you’re careless, you may be cheated and lose money. Also, be aware of fake products. Don’t be fooled by low prices.（网上购物需要遵守的规则）
By following these rules, we can enjoy safe and happy online shopping.（书写结语）
☑体裁： ☑人称： ☑时态：
☑佳词佳句积累：
1. 给某人带来便利 2. 确保
3. 陷入麻烦 4. 私人信息
5. 和某人分享某物 6. 意识到；知道
7. 被……欺骗 8. 遵守规则
9. 不要轻易从不知名的网站购物，否则你可能会陷入麻烦。
10. 通过遵守这些规则，我们可以享受安全又愉快的网上购物。
☑写作提升：使用所给短语并参考其在范文中的句子，根据中文提示，翻译句子。
1. 移动支付给人们带来了极大的便利。（bring sb convenience）

2. 对司机来说，在马路上遵守规则很重要。（follow rules）

1. bring sb convenience
2. make sure
3. get into trouble
4. private information
5. share sth with sb
6. be aware of
7. be fooled by
8. follow rules
9. Don't buy from unknown websites easily, or you might get into trouble.
10. By following these rules, we can enjoy safe and happy online shopping.
写作提升：
1. Mobile payments bring people great convenience.
2. It's important for drivers to follow rules on the road.

【分析】
本题围绕单元话题“规则”设置，包含范文赏析的体裁、人称、时态填空，佳词佳句积累，写作提升翻译三部分。解题思路：1. 体裁需根据范文介绍网上购物规则的文体属性判断；人称结合范文所用代词确定；时态依据范文动词时态判断；2. 佳词部分匹配中文对应的固定英语短语，确保搭配准确；3. 写作提升需运用指定短语，遵循英语常用句式，保证句子语法正确、语义通顺。
【解析】
1. 体裁：范文是介绍网上购物规则的说明性文章，故为说明文；2. 人称：范文以第三人称指代网购相关事物，偶尔用第一人称we，故为第三人称；3. 时态：范文多用一般现在时（如is、brings等），故为一般现在时；4. 佳词部分：依次匹配中文对应的固定英语短语；5. 写作提升：第1题用指定短语“bring sb convenience”，主语“移动支付”译为Mobile payments，整句为Mobile payments bring people great convenience；第2题用指定短语“follow rules”，采用“It's important for sb to do sth”句型，地点状语“on the road”放句末，整句为It's important for drivers to follow rules on the road。
【答案】
体裁：说明文；人称：第三人称；时态：一般现在时；1. bring sb convenience；2. make sure；3. get into trouble；4. private information；5. share sth with sb；6. be aware of；7. be fooled by；8. follow rules；9. Don't buy from unknown websites easily, or you might get into trouble；10. By following these rules, we can enjoy safe and happy online shopping；写作提升：1. Mobile payments bring people great convenience. 2. It's important for drivers to follow rules on the road.
【知识点】
英语固定短语搭配、英语常用句型运用、汉译英
【点评】
本题紧扣单元“规则”主题，既考查范文基本要素，又通过佳词积累和翻译练习强化核心短语的掌握与运用，贴合单元写作要求，能有效巩固学生英语基础。
【难度系数】
0.3

假设你是李华，你在旅游期间发现部分游客做出一些不文明的行为，与美景格格不入。请你给某英文报旅游栏目的编辑写一封邮件反映这个问题。要点如下：
（1）列举游客不文明的行为；
（2）发表你对这些行为的看法，并提出建议；
（3）发出呼吁。
注意: (1) 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
(2) 语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
【巧列提纲】(以下Tips部分仅供参考，希望同学们可以多开动脑筋、发散思维)

【实战演练】
Dear editor,
I was shocked to see some uncivilised behaviours during my holiday trip.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作评价】(评分原则与方法可参考本书最后一页)

分项 自评分 互评分 老师评分
内容分 游客不文明的行为（2分）
你对这些行为的看法和建议（4分）
呼吁（1分）
语言分（8分）
总分（15分）

One possible version:
Dear editor,
I was shocked to see some uncivilised behaviours during my holiday trip. Some visitors threw rubbish everywhere and left plastic bags flying around. Some picked flowers without permission to take photos so that they could show off online. And some climbed trees for fun. It was dangerous and might result in serious accidents.
I think it's wrong to enjoy oneself at the cost of others. Visitors are supposed to protect the environment, like throwing rubbish into proper bins. They should cherish flowers and trees. And they should be careful not to cause trouble to the locals and keep away from danger.
If every visitor can follow the rules, a greener, cleaner and more civilised new tourist attraction will be there for us all to enjoy.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以李华的身份给英文报旅游栏目的编辑写邮件，反映旅游中的不文明行为，需涵盖三个核心要点：列举不文明行为、发表看法并提建议、发出呼吁。解题思路：1. 沿用给定的邮件开头和结尾，补充中间内容；2. 列举具体的不文明行为（如乱扔垃圾、摘花拍照、爬树等）；3. 针对行为表达看法（损害环境、存在安全隐患），提出合理建议（遵守规则、爱护环境等）；4. 发出文明旅游的呼吁，注意控制词数（80左右），语言连贯，避免出现真实信息。
【解析】
写作时，先承接开头点明看到的不文明行为，具体列举乱扔垃圾、摘花拍照、爬树等行为；接着表达看法，指出这类行为以损害环境和安全为代价，是错误的；然后提出建议，如将垃圾扔进垃圾桶、爱护花草树木、注意安全等；最后发出呼吁，号召游客遵守规则，共同营造文明的旅游环境，确保语句连贯、符合邮件格式、词数达标。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear editor,
I was shocked to see some uncivilised behaviours during my holiday trip. Some visitors threw rubbish everywhere and left plastic bags flying around. Some picked flowers without permission to take photos so that they could show off online. And some climbed trees for fun. It was dangerous and might result in serious accidents.
I think it's wrong to enjoy oneself at the cost of others. Visitors are supposed to protect the environment, like throwing rubbish into proper bins. They should cherish flowers and trees. And they should be careful not to cause trouble to the locals and keep away from danger.
If every visitor can follow the rules, a greener, cleaner and more civilised new tourist attraction will be there for us all to enjoy.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、话题写作（文明旅游）
【点评】
本题围绕“文明旅游”话题，考查英语邮件写作能力，要求学生紧扣要点准确表达观点，同时渗透文明出行的意识，是常见的英语写作题型，难度适中，能有效考查学生的语言运用和逻辑表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.5