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Last night, I had a strange dream. I dreamed that Earth is so crowed that everybody would like to live on Mars. Therefore, I had moved to Mars with my family. In my dream, I could climb over a large rock very easily because of the microgravity. I studied at an online school and I needn't leave home. I used Mars currencies to buy a lot of cheap and nice things. I hope that my dream can come true one day.
Last night, I had a strange dream. I dreamed that Earth is so crowed that everybody would like to live on Mars. Therefore, I had moved to Mars with my family. In my dream, I could climb over a large rock very easily because of the microgravity. I studied at an online school and I needn't leave home. I used Mars currencies to buy a lot of cheap and nice things. I hope that my dream can come true one day.
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【分析】本题要求围绕“移居火星的梦境”这一话题写一篇英语短文，需结合核心要素（地球拥挤、移居火星、微重力、在线学校、火星货币等），采用一般过去时描述梦境，按照“引入梦境—描述梦境内容—表达愿望”的结构组织语言，确保语句通顺、语法正确。
【解析】1. 开头点明梦境：用“Last night, I had a strange dream.”引出话题；2. 说明移居火星的原因：“I dreamed that Earth is so crowed that everybody would like to live on Mars. Therefore, I had moved to Mars with my family.”；3. 具体描述火星上的经历：微重力下爬岩石容易、上在线学校不用出门、用火星货币购买物品；4. 结尾表达愿望：“I hope that my dream can come true one day.”。注意时态统一，词汇搭配符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】Last night, I had a strange dream. I dreamed that Earth is so crowed that everybody would like to live on Mars. Therefore, I had moved to Mars with my family. In my dream, I could climb over a large rock very easily because of the microgravity. I studied at an online school and I needn't leave home. I used Mars currencies to buy a lot of cheap and nice things. I hope that my dream can come true one day.
【知识点】英语话题写作
【点评】本题为话题作文，内容贴近学生想象力，核心要素明确，考查学生的英语表达与话题拓展能力，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 开头点明梦境：用“Last night, I had a strange dream.”引出话题；2. 说明移居火星的原因：“I dreamed that Earth is so crowed that everybody would like to live on Mars. Therefore, I had moved to Mars with my family.”；3. 具体描述火星上的经历：微重力下爬岩石容易、上在线学校不用出门、用火星货币购买物品；4. 结尾表达愿望：“I hope that my dream can come true one day.”。注意时态统一，词汇搭配符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】Last night, I had a strange dream. I dreamed that Earth is so crowed that everybody would like to live on Mars. Therefore, I had moved to Mars with my family. In my dream, I could climb over a large rock very easily because of the microgravity. I studied at an online school and I needn't leave home. I used Mars currencies to buy a lot of cheap and nice things. I hope that my dream can come true one day.
【知识点】英语话题写作
【点评】本题为话题作文，内容贴近学生想象力，核心要素明确，考查学生的英语表达与话题拓展能力，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.5
