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小试牛刀
假如你是李华，你校英文报正在以“My Growth”为题，面向全校学生开展征文活动。请你根据下表内容描述一段帮助你成长的经历，以及这次经历对你的影响。
【要求】（1）须包含上表所有要点，可适当拓展；（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息；（3）80词左右。首句已给出，不计入总词数。
My Growth
Everyone wants to grow to be a better person.
假如你是李华，你校英文报正在以“My Growth”为题，面向全校学生开展征文活动。请你根据下表内容描述一段帮助你成长的经历，以及这次经历对你的影响。
【要求】（1）须包含上表所有要点，可适当拓展；（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息；（3）80词左右。首句已给出，不计入总词数。
My Growth
Everyone wants to grow to be a better person.
答案
【小试牛刀】
My Growth
Everyone wants to grow to be a better person.For me, growth means facing challenges and accepting myself.
I used to be bad at maths when I was in junior high.I felt sad and even began to doubt myself.My maths teacher noticed this and helped me.I started to study harder and did more maths exercises.I also asked my teacher for help when I had questions.After a few weeks,I got a good score in the maths exam for the first time.I was so happy and proud of myself.
This experience has taught me to accept that I may need to spend more time achieving results.But I believe nothing is impossible as long as I never give up easily and stick to it.(共118词)
My Growth
Everyone wants to grow to be a better person.For me, growth means facing challenges and accepting myself.
I used to be bad at maths when I was in junior high.I felt sad and even began to doubt myself.My maths teacher noticed this and helped me.I started to study harder and did more maths exercises.I also asked my teacher for help when I had questions.After a few weeks,I got a good score in the maths exam for the first time.I was so happy and proud of myself.
This experience has taught me to accept that I may need to spend more time achieving results.But I believe nothing is impossible as long as I never give up easily and stick to it.(共118词)
解析
【分析】
本次题目要求以“My Growth”为题写英文征文，需包含表格中所有要点（困难：数学成绩差、感到难过、自我怀疑；解决办法：更努力学习、做练习、可拓展请教老师等；影响：接受自己、不轻易放弃），首句已给出，80词左右。解题思路：先承接首句引出自身成长经历，接着描述遇到的困难，再说明解决困难的具体做法，最后阐述这次经历带来的影响，确保所有要点都覆盖，适当拓展细节，语言通顺，符合字数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 承接给定首句，点明成长与面对挑战、接纳自己相关；2. 描述困难：过去数学不好，感到难过甚至自我怀疑；3. 写解决办法：更努力学习，做更多练习，遇到问题请教老师；4. 写结果与影响：第一次考出好成绩，学会接纳自己，明白不轻易放弃的道理；注意控制字数，避免真实信息，语言简洁流畅。
【答案】
My Growth
Everyone wants to grow to be a better person.For me, growth means facing challenges and accepting myself.
I used to be bad at maths when I was in junior high.I felt sad and even began to doubt myself.My maths teacher noticed this and helped me.I started to study harder and did more maths exercises.I also asked my teacher for help when I had questions.After a few weeks,I got a good score in the maths exam for the first time.I was so happy and proud of myself.
This experience has taught me to accept that I may need to spend more time achieving results.But I believe nothing is impossible as long as I never give up easily and stick to it.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、要点整合、英语表达连贯
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，全面覆盖表格所有要点，逻辑清晰，情感真实，适当补充了请教老师的细节，语言流畅自然，符合征文要求，很好地体现了成长的主题。
【难度系数】
0.3
本次题目要求以“My Growth”为题写英文征文，需包含表格中所有要点（困难：数学成绩差、感到难过、自我怀疑；解决办法：更努力学习、做练习、可拓展请教老师等；影响：接受自己、不轻易放弃），首句已给出，80词左右。解题思路：先承接首句引出自身成长经历，接着描述遇到的困难，再说明解决困难的具体做法，最后阐述这次经历带来的影响，确保所有要点都覆盖，适当拓展细节，语言通顺，符合字数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 承接给定首句，点明成长与面对挑战、接纳自己相关；2. 描述困难：过去数学不好，感到难过甚至自我怀疑；3. 写解决办法：更努力学习，做更多练习，遇到问题请教老师；4. 写结果与影响：第一次考出好成绩，学会接纳自己，明白不轻易放弃的道理；注意控制字数，避免真实信息，语言简洁流畅。
【答案】
My Growth
Everyone wants to grow to be a better person.For me, growth means facing challenges and accepting myself.
I used to be bad at maths when I was in junior high.I felt sad and even began to doubt myself.My maths teacher noticed this and helped me.I started to study harder and did more maths exercises.I also asked my teacher for help when I had questions.After a few weeks,I got a good score in the maths exam for the first time.I was so happy and proud of myself.
This experience has taught me to accept that I may need to spend more time achieving results.But I believe nothing is impossible as long as I never give up easily and stick to it.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、要点整合、英语表达连贯
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，全面覆盖表格所有要点，逻辑清晰，情感真实，适当补充了请教老师的细节，语言流畅自然，符合征文要求，很好地体现了成长的主题。
【难度系数】
0.3
