九、书面表达
假如你是李华，暑假期间你外出旅游了。请你根据下面的要点提示，用英语写一篇短文讲述你的暑期之旅，然后在本周的英语角活动中和大家分享。
要点提示：
1. Where did you go?
2. What did you do there?
3. How did you feel?
要求：
1. 内容应包括所有的要点提示；
2. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；
3. 词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Summer Vacation
I'm Li Hua. I had an interesting sum-
mer vacation.

One possible version：
My Summer Vacation
I'm Li Hua. I had an interesting summer vacation. I went to Shanghai on vacation with my family. We took a plane there. We stayed there for two days. Everything was great.
We visited Shanghai Museum. I learned a lot about Chinese history. We went to Shanghai People's Park. We took a walk along the lake and visited Shanghai Museum of Contemporary Art. We took many photos. We also ate lots of delicious food like Soup Dumplings.
My vacation there was really exciting. I hope to go there again.

【分析】这是一篇关于暑期旅行的英语书面表达，需覆盖三个核心要点：旅行地点、在当地的活动、个人感受。首先确定旅行地点，围绕地点设计具体活动，使用一般过去时，保证语句通顺连贯，词数符合要求，结合开头补充内容，满足英语角分享的语境。
【解析】首先明确旅行地点为上海，与家人同行；接着描述行程：乘坐飞机前往，停留两天，参观上海博物馆了解中国历史，逛上海人民公园沿湖散步，参观上海当代艺术馆，拍摄照片，品尝美食；最后表达感受，称旅行令人兴奋，希望再次前往。全程使用一般过去时，内容具体，符合要求。
【答案】My Summer Vacation
I'm Li Hua. I had an interesting summer vacation. I went to Shanghai on vacation with my family. We took a plane there. We stayed there for two days. Everything was great.
We visited Shanghai Museum. I learned a lot about Chinese history. We went to Shanghai People's Park. We took a walk along the lake and visited Shanghai Museum of Contemporary Art. We took many photos. We also ate lots of delicious food like Soup Dumplings.
My vacation there was really exciting. I hope to go there again.
【知识点】英语书面表达、一般过去时
【点评】该范文完整涵盖所有要点，时态运用准确，语句连贯自然，内容贴合旅行主题，符合英语角分享的语境，词数合适。
【难度系数】0.6