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今天的英语课上，老师组织学生分组讨论“What Should Today's Teenagers Be like?”。你和你的小组成员积极参与讨论，以下是你记录的一些要点：
请参考以上要点，写一篇英语短文，代表你的小组做汇报演讲。
要求:1.需包含上述所有提示，可适当发挥;2.词数80左右，短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
What Should Today's Teenagers Be Like?
Good morning, everyone. Today I'd like to share my ideas about what today's teenagers should be like.
In a word, if we keep these qualities in mind, we will surely have a brighter future.
Thank you!
请参考以上要点，写一篇英语短文，代表你的小组做汇报演讲。
要求:1.需包含上述所有提示，可适当发挥;2.词数80左右，短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
What Should Today's Teenagers Be Like?
Good morning, everyone. Today I'd like to share my ideas about what today's teenagers should be like.
First of all, we should be responsible. It is our duty to take everything seriously, whether at home or at school. We should care for our family, study hard and keep our promises.
Besides, we ought to be persistent. Life is full of challenges, so we should face difficulties and failures bravely. Only by keeping trying can we achieve our dreams.
What's more, teenagers should be kind, creative and confident. We should respect others, help people in need and never lose hope. It is important for us to grow up both healthily and happily.
In a word, if we keep these qualities in mind, we will surely have a brighter future.
Thank you!
答案
第七课时 Writing
标准提分版：
What Should Today's Teenagers Be Like?
Good morning, everyone. Today I'd like to share my ideas about what today's teenagers should be like.
First of all, we should be responsible. It is our duty to take everything seriously, whether at home or at school. We should care for our family, study hard and keep our promises.
Besides, we ought to be persistent. Life is full of challenges, so we should face difficulties and failures bravely. Only by keeping trying can we achieve our dreams.
What's more, teenagers should be kind, creative and confident. We should respect others, help people in need and never lose hope. It is important for us to grow up both healthily and happily.
In a word, if we keep these qualities in mind, we will surely have a brighter future. Thank you!
进阶优化版：
What Should Today's Teenagers Be Like?
Good morning, everyone. Today I'd like to share my ideas about what today's teenagers should be like.
First, we should be responsible. We should take everything seriously, study hard and care about our family and friends. Second, we should be persistent. When we face difficulties and failures, we should keep trying instead of losing heart. Only in this way can we make progress and achieve our dreams. What's more, it's necessary for us to be active and warm-hearted. We can take part in meaningful activities and help people in need.
Only by learning hard and behaving well can we grow into better people. We should also set clear goals and work towards them step by step. It's our duty to become useful people for our country.
In a word, if we keep these qualities in mind, we will surely have a brighter future. Thank you!
标准提分版：
What Should Today's Teenagers Be Like?
Good morning, everyone. Today I'd like to share my ideas about what today's teenagers should be like.
First of all, we should be responsible. It is our duty to take everything seriously, whether at home or at school. We should care for our family, study hard and keep our promises.
Besides, we ought to be persistent. Life is full of challenges, so we should face difficulties and failures bravely. Only by keeping trying can we achieve our dreams.
What's more, teenagers should be kind, creative and confident. We should respect others, help people in need and never lose hope. It is important for us to grow up both healthily and happily.
In a word, if we keep these qualities in mind, we will surely have a brighter future. Thank you!
进阶优化版：
What Should Today's Teenagers Be Like?
Good morning, everyone. Today I'd like to share my ideas about what today's teenagers should be like.
First, we should be responsible. We should take everything seriously, study hard and care about our family and friends. Second, we should be persistent. When we face difficulties and failures, we should keep trying instead of losing heart. Only in this way can we make progress and achieve our dreams. What's more, it's necessary for us to be active and warm-hearted. We can take part in meaningful activities and help people in need.
Only by learning hard and behaving well can we grow into better people. We should also set clear goals and work towards them step by step. It's our duty to become useful people for our country.
In a word, if we keep these qualities in mind, we will surely have a brighter future. Thank you!
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作主题是“当代青少年应具备的品质”，需包含题目给出的两个核心要点：be responsible（认真对待职责）、be persistent（勇敢面对困难与失败），同时可适当补充1-2个合理的品质（如友善、乐于助人等），词数控制在80左右，开头结尾已给出，只需补充中间段落。写作时用First、Besides、What's more等连接词串联内容，将提示要点转化为通顺的英语句子，适当添加细节使内容完整，符合演讲稿的语气。
【解析】
1. 用“First of all”引出“be responsible”：结合提示“take our duties seriously”，补充细节如在家照顾家人、在校努力学习、信守承诺，使内容具体；
2. 用“Besides”引出“be persistent”：结合提示“face difficulties and failures bravely”，补充“生活充满挑战，只有不断尝试才能实现梦想”等内容；
3. 用“What's more”适当补充其他品质，如友善、乐于助人，丰富内容；
4. 确保词数符合要求，语句通顺，符合演讲稿的正式但亲切的语气。
【答案】
What Should Today's Teenagers Be Like?
Good morning, everyone. Today I'd like to share my ideas about what today's teenagers should be like.
First of all, we should be responsible. It is our duty to take everything seriously, whether at home or at school. We should care for our family, study hard and keep our promises.
Besides, we ought to be persistent. Life is full of challenges, so we should face difficulties and failures bravely. Only by keeping trying can we achieve our dreams.
What's more, teenagers should be kind, creative and confident. We should respect others, help people in need and never lose hope. It is important for us to grow up both healthily and happily.
In a word, if we keep these qualities in mind, we will surely have a brighter future. Thank you!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、要点式写作、演讲稿写作
【点评】
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求结合给定要点完成一篇关于青少年品质的演讲稿，考查学生对英语词汇、句式的运用能力及内容组织能力，需紧扣提示要点并适当拓展，符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确写作主题是“当代青少年应具备的品质”，需包含题目给出的两个核心要点：be responsible（认真对待职责）、be persistent（勇敢面对困难与失败），同时可适当补充1-2个合理的品质（如友善、乐于助人等），词数控制在80左右，开头结尾已给出，只需补充中间段落。写作时用First、Besides、What's more等连接词串联内容，将提示要点转化为通顺的英语句子，适当添加细节使内容完整，符合演讲稿的语气。
【解析】
1. 用“First of all”引出“be responsible”：结合提示“take our duties seriously”，补充细节如在家照顾家人、在校努力学习、信守承诺，使内容具体；
2. 用“Besides”引出“be persistent”：结合提示“face difficulties and failures bravely”，补充“生活充满挑战，只有不断尝试才能实现梦想”等内容；
3. 用“What's more”适当补充其他品质，如友善、乐于助人，丰富内容；
4. 确保词数符合要求，语句通顺，符合演讲稿的正式但亲切的语气。
【答案】
What Should Today's Teenagers Be Like?
Good morning, everyone. Today I'd like to share my ideas about what today's teenagers should be like.
First of all, we should be responsible. It is our duty to take everything seriously, whether at home or at school. We should care for our family, study hard and keep our promises.
Besides, we ought to be persistent. Life is full of challenges, so we should face difficulties and failures bravely. Only by keeping trying can we achieve our dreams.
What's more, teenagers should be kind, creative and confident. We should respect others, help people in need and never lose hope. It is important for us to grow up both healthily and happily.
In a word, if we keep these qualities in mind, we will surely have a brighter future. Thank you!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、要点式写作、演讲稿写作
【点评】
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求结合给定要点完成一篇关于青少年品质的演讲稿，考查学生对英语词汇、句式的运用能力及内容组织能力，需紧扣提示要点并适当拓展，符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
