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四、书面表达
随着时代的变迁，青少年的娱乐方式也在发生着变化，学校Teens英语报社就此话题进行了征稿。请你参考下面的表格，用英语向报社投稿，谈谈身边娱乐方式的变化以及你的观点和倡议。
注意事项：
1. 稿件须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 词数80左右，稿件的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Nowadays, teenagers have different ways for fun from the past.
In the past,
随着时代的变迁，青少年的娱乐方式也在发生着变化，学校Teens英语报社就此话题进行了征稿。请你参考下面的表格，用英语向报社投稿，谈谈身边娱乐方式的变化以及你的观点和倡议。
注意事项：
1. 稿件须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 词数80左右，稿件的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Nowadays, teenagers have different ways for fun from the past.
In the past,
teenagers chose to play outdoors. They would climb mountains or play balls with friends on weekends. These activities were good for their body and mind and could help them get close to nature.
However, many teenagers like to stay at home today. They play computer games or chat online. But these activities are bad for their eyes and health.
I hope they can put down their phones and try an outdoor activity. They will find the outdoor world is full of fun.
答案
One possible version:
Nowadays, teenagers have different ways for fun from the past.
In the past, teenagers chose to play outdoors. They would climb mountains or play balls with friends on weekends. These activities were good for their body and mind and could help them get close to nature.
However, many teenagers like to stay at home today. They play computer games or chat online. But these activities are bad for their eyes and health.
I hope they can put down their phones and try an outdoor activity. They will find the outdoor world is full of fun.
(80 words)
Nowadays, teenagers have different ways for fun from the past.
In the past, teenagers chose to play outdoors. They would climb mountains or play balls with friends on weekends. These activities were good for their body and mind and could help them get close to nature.
However, many teenagers like to stay at home today. They play computer games or chat online. But these activities are bad for their eyes and health.
I hope they can put down their phones and try an outdoor activity. They will find the outdoor world is full of fun.
(80 words)
解析
【分析】
这是一篇话题类英语书面表达，解题时需先明确写作要求：需涵盖表格中过去、现在青少年娱乐方式的特点、举例，还要加入个人观点与倡议，词数控制在80左右，且已有开头句。
思考步骤：
1. 承接开头，先描述过去青少年的娱乐方式：围绕“户外”特点，列举爬山、球类运动的例子，并点明这类活动的益处；
2. 用转折词过渡到现在的情况，描述“宅在家里”的特点，举例打游戏、网上聊天，说明这类活动的弊端；
3. 最后提出个人观点，发出回归户外的倡议，让文章结构完整，符合征稿的要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇承接给定开头，先写过去的娱乐：用“teenagers chose to play outdoors”点明特点，接着用“They would climb mountains or play balls with friends on weekends.”举例，再用“These activities were good for their body and mind and could help them get close to nature.”说明这类活动的好处，内容紧扣表格；
2. 用转折词“However”过渡到现在的情况，用“many teenagers like to stay at home today.”点明特点，举例“They play computer games or chat online.”，并指出弊端“But these activities are bad for their eyes and health.”；
3. 最后提出倡议“I hope they can put down their phones and try an outdoor activity. They will find the outdoor world is full of fun.”，明确个人观点，完成写作任务，词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Nowadays, teenagers have different ways for fun from the past.
In the past, teenagers chose to play outdoors. They would climb mountains or play balls with friends on weekends. These activities were good for their body and mind and could help them get close to nature.
However, many teenagers like to stay at home today. They play computer games or chat online. But these activities are bad for their eyes and health.
I hope they can put down their phones and try an outdoor activity. They will find the outdoor world is full of fun.
(80 words)
【知识点】
对比类书面表达、话题类应用文写作
【点评】
本文结构清晰，通过过去与现在的对比，清晰呈现青少年娱乐方式的变化，观点明确，倡议合理；语言通顺自然，衔接恰当，符合词数要求，很好地完成了征稿任务。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇话题类英语书面表达，解题时需先明确写作要求：需涵盖表格中过去、现在青少年娱乐方式的特点、举例，还要加入个人观点与倡议，词数控制在80左右，且已有开头句。
思考步骤：
1. 承接开头，先描述过去青少年的娱乐方式：围绕“户外”特点，列举爬山、球类运动的例子，并点明这类活动的益处；
2. 用转折词过渡到现在的情况，描述“宅在家里”的特点，举例打游戏、网上聊天，说明这类活动的弊端；
3. 最后提出个人观点，发出回归户外的倡议，让文章结构完整，符合征稿的要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇承接给定开头，先写过去的娱乐：用“teenagers chose to play outdoors”点明特点，接着用“They would climb mountains or play balls with friends on weekends.”举例，再用“These activities were good for their body and mind and could help them get close to nature.”说明这类活动的好处，内容紧扣表格；
2. 用转折词“However”过渡到现在的情况，用“many teenagers like to stay at home today.”点明特点，举例“They play computer games or chat online.”，并指出弊端“But these activities are bad for their eyes and health.”；
3. 最后提出倡议“I hope they can put down their phones and try an outdoor activity. They will find the outdoor world is full of fun.”，明确个人观点，完成写作任务，词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Nowadays, teenagers have different ways for fun from the past.
In the past, teenagers chose to play outdoors. They would climb mountains or play balls with friends on weekends. These activities were good for their body and mind and could help them get close to nature.
However, many teenagers like to stay at home today. They play computer games or chat online. But these activities are bad for their eyes and health.
I hope they can put down their phones and try an outdoor activity. They will find the outdoor world is full of fun.
(80 words)
【知识点】
对比类书面表达、话题类应用文写作
【点评】
本文结构清晰，通过过去与现在的对比，清晰呈现青少年娱乐方式的变化，观点明确，倡议合理；语言通顺自然，衔接恰当，符合词数要求，很好地完成了征稿任务。
【难度系数】
0.7
