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六、书面表达。（满分20分）
成长是一场终身的自我提升之旅。请以“A Lifelong Journey of Self-improvement”为题,写
一篇英语短文,谈谈你将如何在学习和生活中提升自我,成为更好的自己。
写作要点：
1. 健康生活方式(如坚持锻炼、合理作息)；
2. 责任与独立(如自主完成作业、分担家务)；
3. 面对挑战的态度(如勇敢解决问题、培养兴趣爱好)。
参考短语：
1. be respoursible for 4. run away from
2. depend on 5. in the face of
3. take up 6. be interested in
要求：
1. 请根据以上提示信息,结合实际情况叙述,可适当发挥；
2. 文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
3. 词数 80 左右。
A Lifelong Journey of Self-improvement
Life is like a lifelong learning journey,
成长是一场终身的自我提升之旅。请以“A Lifelong Journey of Self-improvement”为题,写
一篇英语短文,谈谈你将如何在学习和生活中提升自我,成为更好的自己。
写作要点：
1. 健康生活方式(如坚持锻炼、合理作息)；
2. 责任与独立(如自主完成作业、分担家务)；
3. 面对挑战的态度(如勇敢解决问题、培养兴趣爱好)。
参考短语：
1. be respoursible for 4. run away from
2. depend on 5. in the face of
3. take up 6. be interested in
要求：
1. 请根据以上提示信息,结合实际情况叙述,可适当发挥；
2. 文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
3. 词数 80 左右。
A Lifelong Journey of Self-improvement
Life is like a lifelong learning journey,
答案
六、One possible version:
A Lifelong Journey of Self-improvement
Life is like a lifelong learning journey,
and self-improvement helps me grow
better. I'll exercise for an hour daily—
staying indoors playing games too long
harms health and study. I'll be
responsible and independent, finishing
homework on my own and helping with
chores instead of relying on parents.
Facing challenges, I'll courageously
solve them instead of running away. I'll
develop interests like basketball and the
violin to enrich my life. Also, I'll
improve communication skills and be a
good team player.
Sticking to these habits, I'm sure
I'll become a healthy, responsible, and
well-rounded person, leading a happy
and fulfilling life.
A Lifelong Journey of Self-improvement
Life is like a lifelong learning journey,
and self-improvement helps me grow
better. I'll exercise for an hour daily—
staying indoors playing games too long
harms health and study. I'll be
responsible and independent, finishing
homework on my own and helping with
chores instead of relying on parents.
Facing challenges, I'll courageously
solve them instead of running away. I'll
develop interests like basketball and the
violin to enrich my life. Also, I'll
improve communication skills and be a
good team player.
Sticking to these habits, I'm sure
I'll become a healthy, responsible, and
well-rounded person, leading a happy
and fulfilling life.
解析
【分析】
首先审题确定主题为“终身自我提升之旅”，需围绕三个写作要点展开：健康生活方式、责任与独立、面对挑战的态度。接着规划结构：开头点题说明自我提升的意义，中间对应三个要点分述做法，结尾总结呼应主题。写作时要紧扣要点，运用参考短语，控制词数，避免真实信息，结合实际适当发挥。
【解析】
1. 开头：用“Life is like a lifelong learning journey, and self-improvement helps me grow better.”直接点题，引出自我提升的核心；
2. 健康生活部分：明确每天锻炼一小时，避免长时间玩游戏影响健康与学习，紧扣“健康生活方式”要点；
3. 责任与独立部分：提到自主完成作业、分担家务，不依赖父母，运用参考短语“depend on”体现“责任与独立”；
4. 面对挑战部分：说明勇敢解决问题而非逃避，培养篮球、小提琴等兴趣，运用参考短语“run away from”体现“面对挑战的态度”；
5. 结尾：总结坚持这些习惯会成为健康、负责、全面发展的人，升华主题。
【答案】
A Lifelong Journey of Self-improvement
Life is like a lifelong learning journey, and self-improvement helps me grow better. I'll exercise for an hour daily—staying indoors playing games too long harms health and study. I'll be responsible and independent, finishing homework on my own and helping with chores instead of relying on parents. Facing challenges, I'll courageously solve them instead of running away. I'll develop interests like basketball and the violin to enrich my life. Also, I'll improve communication skills and be a good team player. Sticking to these habits, I'm sure I'll become a healthy, responsible, and well-rounded person, leading a happy and fulfilling life.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文、常用短语运用
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，全面覆盖所有写作要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言通顺自然，合理运用参考短语，内容积极向上，符合书面表达规范，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先审题确定主题为“终身自我提升之旅”，需围绕三个写作要点展开：健康生活方式、责任与独立、面对挑战的态度。接着规划结构：开头点题说明自我提升的意义，中间对应三个要点分述做法，结尾总结呼应主题。写作时要紧扣要点，运用参考短语，控制词数，避免真实信息，结合实际适当发挥。
【解析】
1. 开头：用“Life is like a lifelong learning journey, and self-improvement helps me grow better.”直接点题，引出自我提升的核心；
2. 健康生活部分：明确每天锻炼一小时，避免长时间玩游戏影响健康与学习，紧扣“健康生活方式”要点；
3. 责任与独立部分：提到自主完成作业、分担家务，不依赖父母，运用参考短语“depend on”体现“责任与独立”；
4. 面对挑战部分：说明勇敢解决问题而非逃避，培养篮球、小提琴等兴趣，运用参考短语“run away from”体现“面对挑战的态度”；
5. 结尾：总结坚持这些习惯会成为健康、负责、全面发展的人，升华主题。
【答案】
A Lifelong Journey of Self-improvement
Life is like a lifelong learning journey, and self-improvement helps me grow better. I'll exercise for an hour daily—staying indoors playing games too long harms health and study. I'll be responsible and independent, finishing homework on my own and helping with chores instead of relying on parents. Facing challenges, I'll courageously solve them instead of running away. I'll develop interests like basketball and the violin to enrich my life. Also, I'll improve communication skills and be a good team player. Sticking to these habits, I'm sure I'll become a healthy, responsible, and well-rounded person, leading a happy and fulfilling life.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文、常用短语运用
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，全面覆盖所有写作要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言通顺自然，合理运用参考短语，内容积极向上，符合书面表达规范，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
