51. 动物是我们的朋友,它们和我们共享一个地球,但有一些野生动物已濒临灭绝。假如你是李明,你们学校的校报正在征集以“保护野生动物”为主题的文章,请你以“Save Wild Animals”为题,根据以下要点和要求,写一篇英语短文进行投稿,呼吁大家保护野生动物。
要点:
(1)野生动物的现状;
(2)野生动物濒临灭绝的原因;
(3)保护野生动物的建议。
要求:
(1)文中不得出现学生的真实姓名和校名;
(2)语句连贯,词数80左右。
参考词汇:protect 保护;in danger 处于危险之中;nature reserve 自然保护区
Save Wild Animals
要点:
(1)野生动物的现状;
(2)野生动物濒临灭绝的原因;
(3)保护野生动物的建议。
要求:
(1)文中不得出现学生的真实姓名和校名;
(2)语句连贯,词数80左右。
参考词汇:protect 保护;in danger 处于危险之中;nature reserve 自然保护区
Save Wild Animals
答案
51. 参考范文:
Save Wild Animals
Animals are our friends, but some of them are in danger. People cut down trees in the mountains. Some wild animals have little food to eat and no place to live in. Besides, some people kill them for their meat and fur. So they need our help a lot. First, we should stop cutting down trees. Second, we should stop hunting and killing wild animals. Third, we can set up some nature reserves to protect them.
All in all, let's take action to help wild animals together!
Save Wild Animals
Animals are our friends, but some of them are in danger. People cut down trees in the mountains. Some wild animals have little food to eat and no place to live in. Besides, some people kill them for their meat and fur. So they need our help a lot. First, we should stop cutting down trees. Second, we should stop hunting and killing wild animals. Third, we can set up some nature reserves to protect them.
All in all, let's take action to help wild animals together!
解析
【分析】
这是一篇以“Save Wild Animals”为题的英语校报投稿短文,需围绕“保护野生动物”主题完成。解题思路分三步:1. 开篇点明野生动物现状(部分野生动物处于危险中);2. 分析濒危原因:人类砍树导致它们失去食物和栖息地,还有猎杀行为;3. 提出保护建议:停止砍树、停止猎杀、建立自然保护区;最后发出呼吁,确保语句连贯,词数约80,不出现真实信息。
【解析】
写作遵循“现状-原因-建议-呼吁”的结构:① 开头直接点题,说明动物是朋友但部分濒危;② 阐述原因:人类砍伐树木使野生动物失去食物和住所,还有人为猎杀;③ 给出三条具体保护建议,运用参考词汇“nature reserve”;④ 结尾总结呼吁大家行动,整体符合词数要求,语句通顺,覆盖所有要点。
【答案】
Save Wild Animals
Animals are our friends, but some of them are in danger. People cut down trees in the mountains. Some wild animals have little food to eat and no place to live in. Besides, some people kill them for their meat and fur. So they need our help a lot. First, we should stop cutting down trees. Second, we should stop hunting and killing wild animals. Third, we can set up some nature reserves to protect them.
All in all, let's take action to help wild animals together!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、野生动物保护英语表达
【点评】
本文紧扣“保护野生动物”主题,覆盖所有要求要点,结构清晰(现状-原因-建议-呼吁),语句连贯流畅,运用了参考词汇,词数符合要求,未出现真实信息,结尾呼吁明确,符合校报投稿的文体要求。
【难度系数】
0.4
这是一篇以“Save Wild Animals”为题的英语校报投稿短文,需围绕“保护野生动物”主题完成。解题思路分三步:1. 开篇点明野生动物现状(部分野生动物处于危险中);2. 分析濒危原因:人类砍树导致它们失去食物和栖息地,还有猎杀行为;3. 提出保护建议:停止砍树、停止猎杀、建立自然保护区;最后发出呼吁,确保语句连贯,词数约80,不出现真实信息。
【解析】
写作遵循“现状-原因-建议-呼吁”的结构:① 开头直接点题,说明动物是朋友但部分濒危;② 阐述原因:人类砍伐树木使野生动物失去食物和住所,还有人为猎杀;③ 给出三条具体保护建议,运用参考词汇“nature reserve”;④ 结尾总结呼吁大家行动,整体符合词数要求,语句通顺,覆盖所有要点。
【答案】
Save Wild Animals
Animals are our friends, but some of them are in danger. People cut down trees in the mountains. Some wild animals have little food to eat and no place to live in. Besides, some people kill them for their meat and fur. So they need our help a lot. First, we should stop cutting down trees. Second, we should stop hunting and killing wild animals. Third, we can set up some nature reserves to protect them.
All in all, let's take action to help wild animals together!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、野生动物保护英语表达
【点评】
本文紧扣“保护野生动物”主题,覆盖所有要求要点,结构清晰(现状-原因-建议-呼吁),语句连贯流畅,运用了参考词汇,词数符合要求,未出现真实信息,结尾呼吁明确,符合校报投稿的文体要求。
【难度系数】
0.4
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