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Ⅶ.书面表达(满分17分)
亲爱的同学,你生活中有烦恼,学习中有压力吗?那我们应该如何正确面对烦恼,有效缓解心理压力呢?请根据以下提示,以“How to Deal with Our Stress”为题写一篇80词左右的短文。
提示:1.积极参加体育锻炼,有一个健康的身体。
2.多与老师、家长和朋友交谈,说出自己的烦恼。
3.多听音乐,多看书。
4.尽自己最大努力学习,勇敢面对自己的成绩。
5.如果经常感到压力太大,可以去看医生。
How to Deal with Our Stress
亲爱的同学,你生活中有烦恼,学习中有压力吗?那我们应该如何正确面对烦恼,有效缓解心理压力呢?请根据以下提示,以“How to Deal with Our Stress”为题写一篇80词左右的短文。
提示:1.积极参加体育锻炼,有一个健康的身体。
2.多与老师、家长和朋友交谈,说出自己的烦恼。
3.多听音乐,多看书。
4.尽自己最大努力学习,勇敢面对自己的成绩。
5.如果经常感到压力太大,可以去看医生。
How to Deal with Our Stress
答案
How to Deal with Our Stress
We all have some problems and stress in our lives. How should we solve them?
Firstly, we should take part in physical exercise. Sports can help us have a healthier body and study better. Secondly, we need to talk with our teachers, parents and friends, and try to tell them our trouble. They may give us some useful advice. Thirdly, we can also listen to music and read books. They are good ways to relax ourselves. Fourthly, we should try our best to study hard and learn to face our grades bravely. Fifthly, if we often have too much stress, we'd better see a doctor.
If you follow my advice above, I think you can deal with your stress successfully.
We all have some problems and stress in our lives. How should we solve them?
Firstly, we should take part in physical exercise. Sports can help us have a healthier body and study better. Secondly, we need to talk with our teachers, parents and friends, and try to tell them our trouble. They may give us some useful advice. Thirdly, we can also listen to music and read books. They are good ways to relax ourselves. Fourthly, we should try our best to study hard and learn to face our grades bravely. Fifthly, if we often have too much stress, we'd better see a doctor.
If you follow my advice above, I think you can deal with your stress successfully.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“How to Deal with Our Stress”为题，围绕“如何应对压力”的话题，结合给定的5个提示要点写一篇80词左右的短文。解题时需先点明生活中压力普遍存在的现状，再按提示分条列举缓解压力的具体方法，最后总结建议，使用合适的连接词使文章条理清晰，确保覆盖所有提示内容，语言通顺符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 开头引入：点明每个人生活中都有烦恼和压力，引出如何应对的话题；2. 分点阐述方法：①积极参加体育锻炼，保持健康身体，助力学习；②多与老师、家长、朋友交谈，倾诉烦恼获取建议；③通过听音乐、读书放松自己；④努力学习，勇敢面对成绩；⑤压力过大时看医生；3. 结尾总结：遵循上述建议可成功应对压力。写作时使用firstly、secondly等连接词，确保逻辑连贯，覆盖所有提示点，控制词数在80左右，符合书面表达要求。
【答案】
How to Deal with Our Stress
We all have some problems and stress in our lives. How should we solve them?
Firstly, we should take part in physical exercise. Sports can help us have a healthier body and study better. Secondly, we need to talk with our teachers, parents and friends, and try to tell them our trouble. They may give us some useful advice. Thirdly, we can also listen to music and read books. They are good ways to relax ourselves. Fourthly, we should try our best to study hard and learn to face our grades bravely. Fifthly, if we often have too much stress, we'd better see a doctor.
If you follow my advice above, I think you can deal with your stress successfully.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、英语建议类应用文写作
【点评】
本题贴近学生日常学习生活，提示要点明确，考查学生的英语语言组织能力和逻辑表达能力，要求学生将中文提示转化为通顺的英语语句，结构清晰，符合初中英语书面表达的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“How to Deal with Our Stress”为题，围绕“如何应对压力”的话题，结合给定的5个提示要点写一篇80词左右的短文。解题时需先点明生活中压力普遍存在的现状，再按提示分条列举缓解压力的具体方法，最后总结建议，使用合适的连接词使文章条理清晰，确保覆盖所有提示内容，语言通顺符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 开头引入：点明每个人生活中都有烦恼和压力，引出如何应对的话题；2. 分点阐述方法：①积极参加体育锻炼，保持健康身体，助力学习；②多与老师、家长、朋友交谈，倾诉烦恼获取建议；③通过听音乐、读书放松自己；④努力学习，勇敢面对成绩；⑤压力过大时看医生；3. 结尾总结：遵循上述建议可成功应对压力。写作时使用firstly、secondly等连接词，确保逻辑连贯，覆盖所有提示点，控制词数在80左右，符合书面表达要求。
【答案】
How to Deal with Our Stress
We all have some problems and stress in our lives. How should we solve them?
Firstly, we should take part in physical exercise. Sports can help us have a healthier body and study better. Secondly, we need to talk with our teachers, parents and friends, and try to tell them our trouble. They may give us some useful advice. Thirdly, we can also listen to music and read books. They are good ways to relax ourselves. Fourthly, we should try our best to study hard and learn to face our grades bravely. Fifthly, if we often have too much stress, we'd better see a doctor.
If you follow my advice above, I think you can deal with your stress successfully.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、英语建议类应用文写作
【点评】
本题贴近学生日常学习生活，提示要点明确，考查学生的英语语言组织能力和逻辑表达能力，要求学生将中文提示转化为通顺的英语语句，结构清晰，符合初中英语书面表达的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
