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七、书面表达（15 分）
假如你是李明，现在就读于某外国语学校。你校阅读、音乐、舞蹈、篮球等社团拟招聘新成员。请你根据以下表格内容的提示，用英语写一份申请书给你想加入的社团的负责人。
|Join the
|----|
|What club do you want to join?|
|Why do you want to join it?|
|What will you do in the club?|
|...|
注意：
1. 词数 100 左右。首尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写工整。
假如你是李明，现在就读于某外国语学校。你校阅读、音乐、舞蹈、篮球等社团拟招聘新成员。请你根据以下表格内容的提示，用英语写一份申请书给你想加入的社团的负责人。
|Join the
Reading
Club||----|
|What club do you want to join?|
|Why do you want to join it?|
|What will you do in the club?|
|...|
注意：
1. 词数 100 左右。首尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写工整。
答案
One possible version:
Join the Reading Club
Dear teacher,
I'm writing to tell you that I want to join your club. I dream of joining the reading club. I began to read at a very young age. At that time, my parents often bought me some picture books, which developed my reading interest. Reading can not only help me with my Chinese, but also make me know more about the world.
By joining the club, I think I can make more friends and share reading experiences with each other. I will try my best to be a good reader. I hope the club will improve my reading to a higher level.
Hope to get your reply soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
Join the Reading Club
Dear teacher,
I'm writing to tell you that I want to join your club. I dream of joining the reading club. I began to read at a very young age. At that time, my parents often bought me some picture books, which developed my reading interest. Reading can not only help me with my Chinese, but also make me know more about the world.
By joining the club, I think I can make more friends and share reading experiences with each other. I will try my best to be a good reader. I hope the club will improve my reading to a higher level.
Hope to get your reply soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
解析
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先第一步要选自己词汇储备充足、有内容可写的社团，比如参考示例的阅读俱乐部，也可以选篮球、音乐等自己熟悉的社团，避免选陌生主题导致无话可说。第二步按照题目给出的三个核心提示点依次构思：首先明确点明想要加入的具体社团；然后阐述申请原因，可以结合自身从小培养的相关爱好、该爱好给自己带来的成长益处来写，内容会更真实饱满；接着说明加入社团后自己的规划和要做的事，贴合社团属性即可；最后补充合理小细节让行文更连贯。还要注意题干已经给出首尾内容，不需要额外写称呼和落款，控制正文词数在100左右，语气要符合申请书礼貌诚恳的要求。
【解析】
写作可按以下规范步骤完成：
1. 选定主题：补全标题，确定要申请的社团，以参考版本的Reading Club为例，相关词汇学生普遍熟悉，不容易出现表达障碍。
2. 全覆盖核心要点：
① 开篇直接表明自己想要加入阅读俱乐部的诉求；
② 阐述申请原因：说明自己从小就开始阅读，父母早年买的绘本培养了自己的阅读兴趣，同时点明阅读的好处：既可以提升语文水平，也能帮助自己了解更广阔的世界；
③ 说明入社后的计划：加入社团后可以认识更多志同道合的朋友，互相分享阅读心得，自己会认真参与社团活动，希望在社团里进一步提升自己的阅读能力。
3. 优化表达：适当使用not only...but also、定语从句等表达丰富句式，用合适的连接词衔接上下文，保证行文通顺，控制总词数符合要求，规避基础语法和拼写错误。
【答案】
One possible version:
Join the Reading Club
Dear teacher,
I'm writing to tell you that I want to join your club. I dream of joining the reading club. I began to read at a very young age. At that time, my parents often bought me some picture books, which developed my reading interest. Reading can not only help me with my Chinese, but also make me know more about the world.
By joining the club, I think I can make more friends and share reading experiences with each other. I will try my best to be a good reader. I hope the club will improve my reading to a higher level.
Hope to get your reply soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【知识点】
英文书信格式
要点类书面表达
常用连接句型
【点评】
本题是申请类书信写作，题干给出的提示要点非常清晰，学生可以自主选择熟悉的社团主题展开写作，门槛较低。写作时只要全部覆盖题干给出的三个核心问题，补充合理的细节让内容更充实，使用恰当的衔接词让行文流畅，同时注意申请书的语气礼貌诚恳，尽量避免基础的语法和拼写错误，就能拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道书面表达题，首先第一步要选自己词汇储备充足、有内容可写的社团，比如参考示例的阅读俱乐部，也可以选篮球、音乐等自己熟悉的社团，避免选陌生主题导致无话可说。第二步按照题目给出的三个核心提示点依次构思：首先明确点明想要加入的具体社团；然后阐述申请原因，可以结合自身从小培养的相关爱好、该爱好给自己带来的成长益处来写，内容会更真实饱满；接着说明加入社团后自己的规划和要做的事，贴合社团属性即可；最后补充合理小细节让行文更连贯。还要注意题干已经给出首尾内容，不需要额外写称呼和落款，控制正文词数在100左右，语气要符合申请书礼貌诚恳的要求。
【解析】
写作可按以下规范步骤完成：
1. 选定主题：补全标题，确定要申请的社团，以参考版本的Reading Club为例，相关词汇学生普遍熟悉，不容易出现表达障碍。
2. 全覆盖核心要点：
① 开篇直接表明自己想要加入阅读俱乐部的诉求；
② 阐述申请原因：说明自己从小就开始阅读，父母早年买的绘本培养了自己的阅读兴趣，同时点明阅读的好处：既可以提升语文水平，也能帮助自己了解更广阔的世界；
③ 说明入社后的计划：加入社团后可以认识更多志同道合的朋友，互相分享阅读心得，自己会认真参与社团活动，希望在社团里进一步提升自己的阅读能力。
3. 优化表达：适当使用not only...but also、定语从句等表达丰富句式，用合适的连接词衔接上下文，保证行文通顺，控制总词数符合要求，规避基础语法和拼写错误。
【答案】
One possible version:
Join the Reading Club
Dear teacher,
I'm writing to tell you that I want to join your club. I dream of joining the reading club. I began to read at a very young age. At that time, my parents often bought me some picture books, which developed my reading interest. Reading can not only help me with my Chinese, but also make me know more about the world.
By joining the club, I think I can make more friends and share reading experiences with each other. I will try my best to be a good reader. I hope the club will improve my reading to a higher level.
Hope to get your reply soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【知识点】
英文书信格式
要点类书面表达
常用连接句型
【点评】
本题是申请类书信写作，题干给出的提示要点非常清晰，学生可以自主选择熟悉的社团主题展开写作，门槛较低。写作时只要全部覆盖题干给出的三个核心问题，补充合理的细节让内容更充实，使用恰当的衔接词让行文流畅，同时注意申请书的语气礼貌诚恳，尽量避免基础的语法和拼写错误，就能拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
Join the
Dear teacher,
I'm writing to tell you that I want to join your club.
Hope to get your reply soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
Reading
ClubDear teacher,
I'm writing to tell you that I want to join your club.
I dream of joining the reading club. I began to read at a very young age. At that time, my parents often bought me some picture books, which developed my reading interest. Reading can not only help me with my Chinese, but also make me know more about the world.
By joining the club, I think I can make more friends and share reading experiences with each other. I will try my best to be a good reader. I hope the club will improve my reading to a higher level.
By joining the club, I think I can make more friends and share reading experiences with each other. I will try my best to be a good reader. I hope the club will improve my reading to a higher level.
Hope to get your reply soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
答案
One possible version:
Join the Reading Club
Dear teacher,
I'm writing to tell you that I want to join your club. I dream of joining the reading club. I began to read at a very young age. At that time, my parents often bought me some picture books, which developed my reading interest. Reading can not only help me with my Chinese, but also make me know more about the world.
By joining the club, I think I can make more friends and share reading experiences with each other. I will try my best to be a good reader. I hope the club will improve my reading to a higher level.
Hope to get your reply soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
Join the Reading Club
Dear teacher,
I'm writing to tell you that I want to join your club. I dream of joining the reading club. I began to read at a very young age. At that time, my parents often bought me some picture books, which developed my reading interest. Reading can not only help me with my Chinese, but also make me know more about the world.
By joining the club, I think I can make more friends and share reading experiences with each other. I will try my best to be a good reader. I hope the club will improve my reading to a higher level.
Hope to get your reply soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
解析
【分析】
这是一篇半开放式的英文入会申请书信写作，解题可以按三步梳理思路：
1. 首先确定第一个空缺的俱乐部名称，优先选择自己熟悉、有充足内容可展开的主题，比如阅读俱乐部，避免选过于冷门的主题导致无话可写。
2. 补全正文空缺部分时遵循递进逻辑：先再次明确自己的入会意愿，接着介绍自己和该俱乐部主题相关的个人经历、爱好基础，证明自己匹配入会要求，再阐述该爱好给自己带来的收获，最后说明自己加入俱乐部后的规划、能做出的贡献以及合理的入会诉求，让内容充实有说服力。
3. 全程注意保持给老师写信的礼貌正式语气，保证语法正确、语句连贯，符合书信的表达规范。
【解析】
按照上述思路补全内容后，完整的书信如下：
Join the Reading Club
Dear teacher,
I'm writing to tell you that I want to join your club. I dream of joining the reading club. I began to read at a very young age. At that time, my parents often bought me some picture books, which developed my reading interest. Reading can not only help me with my Chinese, but also make me know more about the world.
By joining the club, I think I can make more friends and share reading experiences with each other. I will try my best to be a good reader. I hope the club will improve my reading to a higher level.
Hope to get your reply soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【答案】
One possible version:
Join the Reading Club
Dear teacher,
I'm writing to tell you that I want to join your club. I dream of joining the reading club. I began to read at a very young age. At that time, my parents often bought me some picture books, which developed my reading interest. Reading can not only help me with my Chinese, but also make me know more about the world.
By joining the club, I think I can make more friends and share reading experiences with each other. I will try my best to be a good reader. I hope the club will improve my reading to a higher level.
Hope to get your reply soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【知识点】
英文书信格式，申请类话题写作，并列结构表达
【点评】
本题是半开放的入会申请类写作，题干已经给出了书信的首尾框架，降低了写作门槛，学生也可以根据自身兴趣选择篮球、绘画、音乐等不同的俱乐部主题，只要正文内容和所选俱乐部主题匹配、逻辑通顺、表达得体即可得分，写作时补充个人相关优势说明，能让申请内容更有说服力。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇半开放式的英文入会申请书信写作，解题可以按三步梳理思路：
1. 首先确定第一个空缺的俱乐部名称，优先选择自己熟悉、有充足内容可展开的主题，比如阅读俱乐部，避免选过于冷门的主题导致无话可写。
2. 补全正文空缺部分时遵循递进逻辑：先再次明确自己的入会意愿，接着介绍自己和该俱乐部主题相关的个人经历、爱好基础，证明自己匹配入会要求，再阐述该爱好给自己带来的收获，最后说明自己加入俱乐部后的规划、能做出的贡献以及合理的入会诉求，让内容充实有说服力。
3. 全程注意保持给老师写信的礼貌正式语气，保证语法正确、语句连贯，符合书信的表达规范。
【解析】
按照上述思路补全内容后，完整的书信如下：
Join the Reading Club
Dear teacher,
I'm writing to tell you that I want to join your club. I dream of joining the reading club. I began to read at a very young age. At that time, my parents often bought me some picture books, which developed my reading interest. Reading can not only help me with my Chinese, but also make me know more about the world.
By joining the club, I think I can make more friends and share reading experiences with each other. I will try my best to be a good reader. I hope the club will improve my reading to a higher level.
Hope to get your reply soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【答案】
One possible version:
Join the Reading Club
Dear teacher,
I'm writing to tell you that I want to join your club. I dream of joining the reading club. I began to read at a very young age. At that time, my parents often bought me some picture books, which developed my reading interest. Reading can not only help me with my Chinese, but also make me know more about the world.
By joining the club, I think I can make more friends and share reading experiences with each other. I will try my best to be a good reader. I hope the club will improve my reading to a higher level.
Hope to get your reply soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【知识点】
英文书信格式，申请类话题写作，并列结构表达
【点评】
本题是半开放的入会申请类写作，题干已经给出了书信的首尾框架，降低了写作门槛，学生也可以根据自身兴趣选择篮球、绘画、音乐等不同的俱乐部主题，只要正文内容和所选俱乐部主题匹配、逻辑通顺、表达得体即可得分，写作时补充个人相关优势说明，能让申请内容更有说服力。
【难度系数】
0.6
