B写作实战
良好的生活习惯对于青少年的健康成长至关重要。某英语杂志社以"My Healthy Life"为题向中学生开展征文活动。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文投稿。

要求:
1.包含所有提示信息,可以适当发挥;
2.文中不要出现真实姓名、校名;
3.80词左右。
My Healthy Life
请做: 单元检测(四)、(五)、(六) 勤演练,汇真知
良好的生活习惯对于青少年的健康成长至关重要。某英语杂志社以"My Healthy Life"为题向中学生开展征文活动。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
要求:
1.包含所有提示信息,可以适当发挥;
2.文中不要出现真实姓名、校名;
3.80词左右。
My Healthy Life
One possible version:
My Healthy Life
Hello,everyone! I'm going to tell you my
life habits. First,I have healthy eating habits. I
have three meals a day at the right time. I eat
lots of fresh vegetables and fruit and never eat
junk food. I also drink much water and milk ev-
ery day. Second,I love doing sport. I play bas-
ketball with my classmates on school days and
play ping-pong with my family at weekends.
Playing sport makes me strong. Third,I sleep
well. I always go to bed at 9:00 p. m. and never
stay up late.
I think these habits are really good for my
health.
My Healthy Life
Hello,everyone! I'm going to tell you my
life habits. First,I have healthy eating habits. I
have three meals a day at the right time. I eat
lots of fresh vegetables and fruit and never eat
junk food. I also drink much water and milk ev-
ery day. Second,I love doing sport. I play bas-
ketball with my classmates on school days and
play ping-pong with my family at weekends.
Playing sport makes me strong. Third,I sleep
well. I always go to bed at 9:00 p. m. and never
stay up late.
I think these habits are really good for my
health.
请做: 单元检测(四)、(五)、(六) 勤演练,汇真知
答案
One possible version:
My Healthy Life
Hello,everyone! I'm going to tell you my
life habits. First,I have healthy eating habits. I
have three meals a day at the right time. I eat
lots of fresh vegetables and fruit and never eat
junk food. I also drink much water and milk ev-
ery day. Second,I love doing sport. I play bas-
ketball with my classmates on school days and
play ping-pong with my family at weekends.
Playing sport makes me strong. Third,I sleep
well. I always go to bed at 9:00 p. m. and never
stay up late.
I think these habits are really good for my
health.
My Healthy Life
Hello,everyone! I'm going to tell you my
life habits. First,I have healthy eating habits. I
have three meals a day at the right time. I eat
lots of fresh vegetables and fruit and never eat
junk food. I also drink much water and milk ev-
ery day. Second,I love doing sport. I play bas-
ketball with my classmates on school days and
play ping-pong with my family at weekends.
Playing sport makes me strong. Third,I sleep
well. I always go to bed at 9:00 p. m. and never
stay up late.
I think these habits are really good for my
health.
解析
【分析】
本题是英语话题写作题,主题为“My Healthy Life”,要求围绕健康生活展开,需包含提示的饮食习惯、运动等内容,适当发挥,字数80左右。解题思路:1. 开头点明主题,引出自己的健康生活;2. 分点阐述健康习惯:先写饮食习惯(按时吃饭,多吃蔬果、多喝水奶,不吃垃圾食品),再写运动(日常和同学、家人的运动),可补充睡眠等其他健康习惯;3. 结尾总结这些习惯对健康的益处,确保内容完整,语言通顺,符合字数要求,不出现真实信息。
【解析】
写作步骤:
1. 开头:用“Hello, everyone! I'm going to tell you my life habits.”引出主题;
2. 阐述饮食习惯:说明一日三餐按时吃,多吃新鲜蔬果,每天喝水和牛奶,不吃垃圾食品;
3. 阐述运动:上学时和同学打篮球,周末和家人打乒乓球,点明运动让自己强壮;
4. 补充健康习惯:早睡不熬夜;
5. 结尾:总结这些习惯对健康有益,完成短文。
【答案】
One possible version:
My Healthy Life
Hello, everyone! I'm going to tell you my life habits. First, I have healthy eating habits. I have three meals a day at the right time. I eat lots of fresh vegetables and fruit and never eat junk food. I also drink much water and milk every day. Second, I love doing sport. I play basketball with my classmates on school days and play ping-pong with my family at weekends. Playing sport makes me strong. Third, I sleep well. I always go to bed at 9:00 p.m. and never stay up late.
I think these habits are really good for my health.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、健康生活表达
【点评】
本文紧扣“My Healthy Life”主题,完整覆盖了提示的饮食习惯、运动要点,适当补充了睡眠习惯,结构清晰,语言通顺,符合80词左右的要求,无真实信息,是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题是英语话题写作题,主题为“My Healthy Life”,要求围绕健康生活展开,需包含提示的饮食习惯、运动等内容,适当发挥,字数80左右。解题思路:1. 开头点明主题,引出自己的健康生活;2. 分点阐述健康习惯:先写饮食习惯(按时吃饭,多吃蔬果、多喝水奶,不吃垃圾食品),再写运动(日常和同学、家人的运动),可补充睡眠等其他健康习惯;3. 结尾总结这些习惯对健康的益处,确保内容完整,语言通顺,符合字数要求,不出现真实信息。
【解析】
写作步骤:
1. 开头:用“Hello, everyone! I'm going to tell you my life habits.”引出主题;
2. 阐述饮食习惯:说明一日三餐按时吃,多吃新鲜蔬果,每天喝水和牛奶,不吃垃圾食品;
3. 阐述运动:上学时和同学打篮球,周末和家人打乒乓球,点明运动让自己强壮;
4. 补充健康习惯:早睡不熬夜;
5. 结尾:总结这些习惯对健康有益,完成短文。
【答案】
One possible version:
My Healthy Life
Hello, everyone! I'm going to tell you my life habits. First, I have healthy eating habits. I have three meals a day at the right time. I eat lots of fresh vegetables and fruit and never eat junk food. I also drink much water and milk every day. Second, I love doing sport. I play basketball with my classmates on school days and play ping-pong with my family at weekends. Playing sport makes me strong. Third, I sleep well. I always go to bed at 9:00 p.m. and never stay up late.
I think these habits are really good for my health.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、健康生活表达
【点评】
本文紧扣“My Healthy Life”主题,完整覆盖了提示的饮食习惯、运动要点,适当补充了睡眠习惯,结构清晰,语言通顺,符合80词左右的要求,无真实信息,是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.7
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