B写作实战
根据以下表格提示,写一篇文章描述当前
萨姆、露西和你正在进行的动作。

要求:
1.作文必须包括表格中所有信息;
2.80 词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
This is Sam from New York.
请做: 单元检测(七) 勤演练,汇真知

One possible version:
This is Sam from New York. It's eight
o'clock in the morning. Right now he is in the
Central Park with his parents. He is walking
with his mother while his father is taking pho-
tos. Everyone is having a good time.
Lucy is in Paris. It's two o'clock in the af-
ternoon. Lucy is visiting the Eiffel Tower with
her parents. A guide shows them great sights
and tells them stories about the tower.
I'm Li Lei from Beijing. It's nine o'clock in
the evening now. I'm reading a book on the desk
at the moment. I like reading because it's really
interesting and relaxing. I'm going to bed at nine
thirty.

【分析】
要完成这篇写作，需紧扣题目要求：一是包含表格中所有信息（人物所在城市、对应时间、当前动作）；二是用现在进行时描述正在发生的动作；三是衔接开头，补充合理细节使内容连贯。思路为：先承接给定开头介绍Sam，再依次介绍Lucy和“我”，确保每个部分都覆盖表格信息，语言简洁符合字数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头介绍Sam：点明他在纽约的时间（上午八点），用现在进行时写他在中央公园散步的动作，可补充“和朋友一起”这类合理细节；
2. 介绍Lucy：说明她在巴黎的时间（下午两点），用现在进行时写她参观埃菲尔铁塔的动作，可添加“听导游讲解”的细节丰富内容；
3. 介绍自己：说明在北京的时间（晚上九点），用现在进行时写自己的一个动作（如看书），补充简单原因；
4. 通读检查，确保包含所有表格信息，时态正确，无个人信息，字数达标。
【答案】
One possible version:
This is Sam from New York. It's eight o'clock in the morning. Right now he is in the Central Park and walking with his friends. Lucy is in Paris. It's two o'clock in the afternoon. She is visiting the Eiffel Tower with her family. I'm from Beijing. It's nine o'clock in the evening now. I'm reading a book at the moment, because it's interesting.
【知识点】
现在进行时、英语话题写作、信息整合表达
【点评】
本题是初中英语基础写作题，结合表格信息考查学生运用现在进行时描述日常活动的能力，要求内容完整、语言通顺，贴近学生生活，能有效检测单元知识的掌握情况，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5