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在我们的生活中，自然灾害时有发生，而且发生得很突然，很难预警。请你以“What to do in an earthquake”为题，根据以下提示写一篇主题报告，给同学们提供一些地震逃生的建议。
【要点】1. What should you do when you are inside?
2. What should you do when you are outside?
3. What else should you pay attention to?
4. ...
【注意】1. 不少于90词。
2. 短文必须包含以上内容，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
What to do in an earthquake
写作指导
1. 本文是一篇材料作文。
2. 时态为一般现在时。
3. 写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点中的每一项内容，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
写作模板
遣词造句
1. 当你在室内时，一定不要从高楼向外跳。(jump out of)
2. 你最好远离桥梁。(keep away from)
3. 当你在山中时，你应当小心落下的石头。(be careful with)
在我们的生活中，自然灾害时有发生，而且发生得很突然，很难预警。请你以“What to do in an earthquake”为题，根据以下提示写一篇主题报告，给同学们提供一些地震逃生的建议。
【要点】1. What should you do when you are inside?
2. What should you do when you are outside?
3. What else should you pay attention to?
4. ...
【注意】1. 不少于90词。
2. 短文必须包含以上内容，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
What to do in an earthquake
写作指导
1. 本文是一篇材料作文。
2. 时态为一般现在时。
3. 写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点中的每一项内容，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
写作模板
遣词造句
1. 当你在室内时，一定不要从高楼向外跳。(jump out of)
When you're inside, you mustn't jump out of the high building.
2. 你最好远离桥梁。(keep away from)
You'd better keep away from bridges.
3. 当你在山中时，你应当小心落下的石头。(be careful with)
When you are in the mountains, you should be careful with falling rocks.
答案
1. When you're inside, you mustn't jump out of the high building.
2. You'd better keep away from bridges.
3. When you are in the mountains, you should be careful with falling rocks.
2. You'd better keep away from bridges.
3. When you are in the mountains, you should be careful with falling rocks.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语材料写作题，主题是地震逃生建议。解题思路：第一步，开篇点题，点明地震突发的特点，引出掌握逃生方法的重要性；第二步，分场景阐述应对措施：室内时禁止的危险行为（不能从高楼跳下），室外时需远离的危险物（桥梁等），山中时的注意事项（小心落石）；第三步，收篇总结，强调遵循建议的意义。写作时需用一般现在时，适当补充细节使内容连贯，不出现真实人名地名，满足词数要求。
【解析】
按照写作要求，结合给定要点与短语，组织内容如下：
1. 开篇点题：Earthquakes always happen suddenly, so it's necessary to know how to protect yourself during an earthquake.
2. 室内应对：When you're inside, you mustn't jump out of the high building. You should stay in safe places like under a strong desk.
3. 室外应对：When you are outside, you'd better keep away from bridges, tall buildings and trees. Move to an open area quickly.
4. 山中应对：When you are in the mountains, you should be careful with falling rocks. Don't stand on steep slopes.
5. 收篇结尾：If you follow the advice, you can be safe and help save others.
【答案】
When you're inside, you mustn't jump out of the high building. You'd better keep away from bridges. When you are in the mountains, you should be careful with falling rocks.
【知识点】
英语材料作文；常用短语运用；地震安全知识
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语写作能力，要求结合提示完成主题写作，需准确运用指定短语，同时传递实用的地震安全常识，语言需连贯规范，符合写作要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语材料写作题，主题是地震逃生建议。解题思路：第一步，开篇点题，点明地震突发的特点，引出掌握逃生方法的重要性；第二步，分场景阐述应对措施：室内时禁止的危险行为（不能从高楼跳下），室外时需远离的危险物（桥梁等），山中时的注意事项（小心落石）；第三步，收篇总结，强调遵循建议的意义。写作时需用一般现在时，适当补充细节使内容连贯，不出现真实人名地名，满足词数要求。
【解析】
按照写作要求，结合给定要点与短语，组织内容如下：
1. 开篇点题：Earthquakes always happen suddenly, so it's necessary to know how to protect yourself during an earthquake.
2. 室内应对：When you're inside, you mustn't jump out of the high building. You should stay in safe places like under a strong desk.
3. 室外应对：When you are outside, you'd better keep away from bridges, tall buildings and trees. Move to an open area quickly.
4. 山中应对：When you are in the mountains, you should be careful with falling rocks. Don't stand on steep slopes.
5. 收篇结尾：If you follow the advice, you can be safe and help save others.
【答案】
When you're inside, you mustn't jump out of the high building. You'd better keep away from bridges. When you are in the mountains, you should be careful with falling rocks.
【知识点】
英语材料作文；常用短语运用；地震安全知识
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语写作能力，要求结合提示完成主题写作，需准确运用指定短语，同时传递实用的地震安全常识，语言需连贯规范，符合写作要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
