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Dear Sam,
I'm happy to get your e-mail. Everything is going well here.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hai
I'm happy to get your e-mail. Everything is going well here.
I'm in Sunshine Middle School now. It is big and beautiful. There're three classroom buildings, a modern library and a big playground. The classrooms are clean and bright. I have eight lessons every day. I often practise playing basketball because I'm a member of the school basketball club. My new friends are all friendly to me. They always help me when I need. I really have a good time at school.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hai
答案
One possible version:
Dear Sam,
I'm happy to get your e-mail. Everything is going well here.
I'm in Sunshine Middle School now. It is big and beautiful. There're three classroom buildings, a modern library and a big playground. The classrooms are clean and bright.
I have eight lessons every day. I often practise playing basketball because I'm a member of the school basketball club.
My new friends are all friendly to me. They always help me when I need.
I really have a good time at school.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hai
Dear Sam,
I'm happy to get your e-mail. Everything is going well here.
I'm in Sunshine Middle School now. It is big and beautiful. There're three classroom buildings, a modern library and a big playground. The classrooms are clean and bright.
I have eight lessons every day. I often practise playing basketball because I'm a member of the school basketball club.
My new friends are all friendly to me. They always help me when I need.
I really have a good time at school.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hai
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作任务：以阳光中学七年级学生李海的身份给英国朋友山姆写回信，需覆盖邮件中提出的四个问题（新学校的样子、在校日常活动、新朋友的特点、在新学校的感受）；其次注意要求：词数70左右，用英语，不得出现真实人名、校名，邮件首尾已给出；最后组织内容时，每个问题对应简单描述，选用七年级学过的词汇和句型，确保语句通顺连贯。
【解析】
1. 回应新学校的问题：用“Sunshine Middle School”对应题目中的阳光中学，描述学校外观（big and beautiful，有教学楼、现代化图书馆、大操场）；
2. 回应在校日常：说明每天8节课，参加学校篮球俱乐部练习篮球；
3. 回应新朋友：描述新朋友友好，会在需要时帮忙；
4. 回应感受：表达在新学校过得开心，最后衔接给定的结尾。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Sam,
I'm happy to get your e-mail. Everything is going well here.
I'm in Sunshine Middle School now. It is big and beautiful. There're three classroom buildings, a modern library and a big playground. The classrooms are clean and bright.
I have eight lessons every day. I often practise playing basketball because I'm a member of the school basketball club.
My new friends are all friendly to me. They always help me when I need.
I really have a good time at school.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hai
【知识点】
英语书信写作、日常话题表达、一般现在时运用
【点评】
范文紧扣题目所有要求，完整回应了山姆提出的四个问题，内容具体充实，语言符合七年级学生的英语水平，结构清晰，语句通顺，是一篇合格的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先明确写作任务：以阳光中学七年级学生李海的身份给英国朋友山姆写回信，需覆盖邮件中提出的四个问题（新学校的样子、在校日常活动、新朋友的特点、在新学校的感受）；其次注意要求：词数70左右，用英语，不得出现真实人名、校名，邮件首尾已给出；最后组织内容时，每个问题对应简单描述，选用七年级学过的词汇和句型，确保语句通顺连贯。
【解析】
1. 回应新学校的问题：用“Sunshine Middle School”对应题目中的阳光中学，描述学校外观（big and beautiful，有教学楼、现代化图书馆、大操场）；
2. 回应在校日常：说明每天8节课，参加学校篮球俱乐部练习篮球；
3. 回应新朋友：描述新朋友友好，会在需要时帮忙；
4. 回应感受：表达在新学校过得开心，最后衔接给定的结尾。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Sam,
I'm happy to get your e-mail. Everything is going well here.
I'm in Sunshine Middle School now. It is big and beautiful. There're three classroom buildings, a modern library and a big playground. The classrooms are clean and bright.
I have eight lessons every day. I often practise playing basketball because I'm a member of the school basketball club.
My new friends are all friendly to me. They always help me when I need.
I really have a good time at school.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hai
【知识点】
英语书信写作、日常话题表达、一般现在时运用
【点评】
范文紧扣题目所有要求，完整回应了山姆提出的四个问题，内容具体充实，语言符合七年级学生的英语水平，结构清晰，语句通顺，是一篇合格的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.7
