2026年全程助学与学习评估九年级英语上册人教版第24页答案
★★★书面表达
请你回忆发生在自己家里的有意义的事情,按照下图提示写一篇80词左右的短文。





答案

One possible version:
Last winter, I fell ill with a bad fever. My mum stayed up all night by my bed, wiping my forehead with a cool cloth and giving me warm water every hour. When I woke up the next morning, she was still there, looking tired but smiling.
This memory makes me feel warm and loved. I know she will always be there to take care of me, and I love her more than anything.

解析

【分析】
本题要求以“家的记忆”为主题写80词左右的短文,需结合图示提示的三个关键要素(事件内容、发生时间、相关人物)描述具体的家庭事件,最后抒发个人感受。写作时需用一般过去时叙述过去的经历,语言要真挚自然,紧扣主题。
【解析】
首先确定核心事件:去年冬天我发烧生病,妈妈熬夜照顾我;明确时间为Last winter,人物是I和my mum;描述事件细节:妈妈整夜守在我床边,用凉毛巾擦额头,每小时给我喂温水;最后表达感受:这段记忆让我感到温暖和被爱,懂得妈妈的爱。按此思路组织语言,控制词数,确保覆盖所有图示要点即可。
【答案】
One possible version:
Last winter, I fell ill with a bad fever. My mum stayed up all night by my bed, wiping my forehead with a cool cloth and giving me warm water every hour. When I woke up the next morning, she was still there, looking tired but smiling.
This memory makes me feel warm and loved. I know she will always be there to take care of me, and I love her more than anything.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、家庭话题写作、一般过去时
【点评】
范文紧扣“家的记忆”主题,完整覆盖图示的三个写作要点,通过具体事例展现母爱,情感真挚,语言简洁流畅,符合题目的词数要求,是一篇优秀的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.5