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Ⅳ. Think and write.
You are going to prepare for a class party. Write an email to ask your classmate Andy to help decorate the classroom.
buy some plants
draw some pictures
do some
leaning
make some artworks
...
How well can you do these things?
1. I can briefly explain why I am writing. ☆☆☆
2. I can write about 3-5 tasks from the list
add specific details when needed. ☆☆☆
3. I can use polite language like “Could you please ...?” to make requests. ☆☆☆
You are going to prepare for a class party. Write an email to ask your classmate Andy to help decorate the classroom.
buy some plants
draw some pictures
do some
leaningmake some artworks
...
How well can you do these things?
1. I can briefly explain why I am writing. ☆☆☆
2. I can write about 3-5 tasks from the list
add specific details when needed. ☆☆☆3. I can use polite language like “Could you please ...?” to make requests. ☆☆☆
答案
One possible version:
Dear Andy,
I hope you’re doing well! I’m writing to ask for your help with decorating our classroom for the upcoming class party this Friday. Since you’re always creative and organized, I think you would make the party even more special!
First, could you please buy a few small plants to place near the windows? They’ll add a fresh look to the room. Next, it would be great if you could draw some colourful pictures with fun themes, such as “Celebration Time” or “Class Family”. We can hang them on the walls to brighten up the space. Also, if you have time, would you mind helping me clean the desks and sweep the floor? A tidy classroom will make everyone feel welcome.
Let me know if you’d like to make paper artworks together too—it could be really fun!
Thanks so much for your support, Andy!
Yours,
…
Dear Andy,
I hope you’re doing well! I’m writing to ask for your help with decorating our classroom for the upcoming class party this Friday. Since you’re always creative and organized, I think you would make the party even more special!
First, could you please buy a few small plants to place near the windows? They’ll add a fresh look to the room. Next, it would be great if you could draw some colourful pictures with fun themes, such as “Celebration Time” or “Class Family”. We can hang them on the walls to brighten up the space. Also, if you have time, would you mind helping me clean the desks and sweep the floor? A tidy classroom will make everyone feel welcome.
Let me know if you’d like to make paper artworks together too—it could be really fun!
Thanks so much for your support, Andy!
Yours,
…
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求写一封邮件请求同学Andy帮忙布置班级派对。解题思路：①遵循邮件的标准格式（称呼、问候语、正文、结尾敬语、署名）；②开头明确说明写作目的（筹备班级派对需帮忙），可适当夸赞对方以增加说服力；③从给定任务列表中选取3-5项，使用礼貌请求句式（如Could you please...），并补充具体细节让内容更充实；④结尾表达感谢，语气友好符合同学间的交流氛围。
【解析】
按照邮件写作规范，具体步骤如下：
1. 开头：称呼Dear Andy，问候I hope you’re doing well!，说明写作原因（筹备本周五的班级派对，需帮忙布置，夸赞Andy有创意且有条理，适合帮忙）；
2. 正文：选取任务并礼貌请求，补充细节：
请买几株小植物放在窗边，为房间增添清新感；
请画几幅色彩鲜艳的主题画（如“庆祝时刻”“班级大家庭”），挂在墙上装饰；
请帮忙擦桌子、扫地，保持教室整洁；
提议一起制作纸艺手工艺品，增加趣味性；
3. 结尾：感谢对方的支持，署名。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Andy,
I hope you’re doing well! I’m writing to ask for your help with decorating our classroom for the upcoming class party this Friday. Since you’re always creative and organized, I think you would make the party even more special!
First, could you please buy a few small plants to place near the windows? They’ll add a fresh look to the room. Next, it would be great if you could draw some colourful pictures with fun themes, such as “Celebration Time” or “Class Family”. We can hang them on the walls to brighten up the space. Also, if you have time, would you mind helping me clean the desks and sweep the floor? A tidy classroom will make everyone feel welcome.
Let me know if you’d like to make paper artworks together too—it could be really fun!
Thanks so much for your support, Andy!
Yours,
…
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、礼貌请求表达、校园话题写作
【点评】
本题贴近学生校园生活场景，考查应用文写作的基本格式、礼貌用语的运用以及任务拓展细节的能力，是初中英语常见的写作题型，注重语言的实用性和交际性。
【难度系数】
0.4
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求写一封邮件请求同学Andy帮忙布置班级派对。解题思路：①遵循邮件的标准格式（称呼、问候语、正文、结尾敬语、署名）；②开头明确说明写作目的（筹备班级派对需帮忙），可适当夸赞对方以增加说服力；③从给定任务列表中选取3-5项，使用礼貌请求句式（如Could you please...），并补充具体细节让内容更充实；④结尾表达感谢，语气友好符合同学间的交流氛围。
【解析】
按照邮件写作规范，具体步骤如下：
1. 开头：称呼Dear Andy，问候I hope you’re doing well!，说明写作原因（筹备本周五的班级派对，需帮忙布置，夸赞Andy有创意且有条理，适合帮忙）；
2. 正文：选取任务并礼貌请求，补充细节：
请买几株小植物放在窗边，为房间增添清新感；
请画几幅色彩鲜艳的主题画（如“庆祝时刻”“班级大家庭”），挂在墙上装饰；
请帮忙擦桌子、扫地，保持教室整洁；
提议一起制作纸艺手工艺品，增加趣味性；
3. 结尾：感谢对方的支持，署名。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Andy,
I hope you’re doing well! I’m writing to ask for your help with decorating our classroom for the upcoming class party this Friday. Since you’re always creative and organized, I think you would make the party even more special!
First, could you please buy a few small plants to place near the windows? They’ll add a fresh look to the room. Next, it would be great if you could draw some colourful pictures with fun themes, such as “Celebration Time” or “Class Family”. We can hang them on the walls to brighten up the space. Also, if you have time, would you mind helping me clean the desks and sweep the floor? A tidy classroom will make everyone feel welcome.
Let me know if you’d like to make paper artworks together too—it could be really fun!
Thanks so much for your support, Andy!
Yours,
…
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、礼貌请求表达、校园话题写作
【点评】
本题贴近学生校园生活场景，考查应用文写作的基本格式、礼貌用语的运用以及任务拓展细节的能力，是初中英语常见的写作题型，注重语言的实用性和交际性。
【难度系数】
0.4
