登录
76. 假设你是李华，学校即将举办英语周活动，你准备参与校报题为“My Growth”的征稿，请根据以下表格信息写一篇短文，分享你的成长经历与变化。
要求:(1)须包含表格中的要点,所给信息仅供参考使用。
(2)词数80左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Growth
Looking back at the past three years, I have changed a lot in
要求:(1)须包含表格中的要点,所给信息仅供参考使用。
(2)词数80左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Growth
Looking back at the past three years, I have changed a lot in
答案
76. One possible version:
Looking back at the past three years, I have changed a lot in personality and study. I used to be a quiet boy who was afraid to talk with others. But now I’ve become more outgoing. I used to be afraid to speak English in class, so I joined the school English club to practise.
These changes have brought me great influence. I’ve become much more confident and made many new friends. And now I’m brave enough to express my ideas.
In the future, I plan to take part in English speech contests to challenge myself more.
Looking back at the past three years, I have changed a lot in personality and study. I used to be a quiet boy who was afraid to talk with others. But now I’ve become more outgoing. I used to be afraid to speak English in class, so I joined the school English club to practise.
These changes have brought me great influence. I’ve become much more confident and made many new friends. And now I’m brave enough to express my ideas.
In the future, I plan to take part in English speech contests to challenge myself more.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，主题是分享成长经历与变化，需结合表格中“性格”“学习”两方面的要点完成短文。解题思路：1. 明确写作结构：开头引出成长变化，中间分性格、学习两部分写过去状态、变化及影响，最后补充未来计划；2. 掌握时态：描述过去状态用一般过去时，现在的变化用一般现在时/现在完成时；3. 整合表格要点，确保覆盖所有要求，控制词数在80左右，语句通顺连贯。
【解析】
首先承接已给开头，先写性格变化：过去安静，现在更外向，带来自信、交更多朋友的影响；再写学习变化：过去怕说英语，加入英语俱乐部，变得敢表达想法；最后补充未来计划，如参加英语演讲比赛。需准确运用时态，整合表格信息，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Looking back at the past three years, I have changed a lot in personality and study. I used to be a quiet boy who was afraid to talk with others. But now I’ve become more outgoing. I used to be afraid to speak English in class, so I joined the school English club to practise.
These changes have brought me great influence. I’ve become much more confident and made many new friends. And now I’m brave enough to express my ideas.
In the future, I plan to take part in English speech contests to challenge myself more.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；要点整合；时态运用
【点评】
本题考查学生结合给定表格信息进行英语短文写作的能力，要求学生准确提取关键信息，合理组织语言，运用正确时态，符合写作规范，是基础的英语写作题型，能有效考查学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语应用文写作题，主题是分享成长经历与变化，需结合表格中“性格”“学习”两方面的要点完成短文。解题思路：1. 明确写作结构：开头引出成长变化，中间分性格、学习两部分写过去状态、变化及影响，最后补充未来计划；2. 掌握时态：描述过去状态用一般过去时，现在的变化用一般现在时/现在完成时；3. 整合表格要点，确保覆盖所有要求，控制词数在80左右，语句通顺连贯。
【解析】
首先承接已给开头，先写性格变化：过去安静，现在更外向，带来自信、交更多朋友的影响；再写学习变化：过去怕说英语，加入英语俱乐部，变得敢表达想法；最后补充未来计划，如参加英语演讲比赛。需准确运用时态，整合表格信息，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Looking back at the past three years, I have changed a lot in personality and study. I used to be a quiet boy who was afraid to talk with others. But now I’ve become more outgoing. I used to be afraid to speak English in class, so I joined the school English club to practise.
These changes have brought me great influence. I’ve become much more confident and made many new friends. And now I’m brave enough to express my ideas.
In the future, I plan to take part in English speech contests to challenge myself more.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；要点整合；时态运用
【点评】
本题考查学生结合给定表格信息进行英语短文写作的能力，要求学生准确提取关键信息，合理组织语言，运用正确时态，符合写作规范，是基础的英语写作题型，能有效考查学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
