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Ⅲ. Think and write
The Chinese Women's National Volleyball Team has been one of the most
successful teams in the international volleyball history. Please write a short
paragraph about the sports team.
The Chinese Women's National Volleyball Team has a long history and great
achievements.
In the Rio Olympics,
The team is really great.
The Chinese Women's National Volleyball Team has been one of the most
successful teams in the international volleyball history. Please write a short
paragraph about the sports team.
The Chinese Women's National Volleyball Team has a long history and great
achievements.
In the Rio Olympics,
The team is really great.
答案
Ⅲ. One possible version:
The Chinese Women's National Volleyball Team has a long history and great
achievements. They win gold medals many times.
In the Rio Olympics, they had a difficult match. At first, they didn't do well and
lost some games. Then, some players got hurt. But they didn't give up. They tried
their best to fight on. Finally, they won the match.
The team is really great. No matter how difficult the match is, they work hard
and never give up. They are close to many people's hearts. People love them for their
courage and hard work.
The Chinese Women's National Volleyball Team has a long history and great
achievements. They win gold medals many times.
In the Rio Olympics, they had a difficult match. At first, they didn't do well and
lost some games. Then, some players got hurt. But they didn't give up. They tried
their best to fight on. Finally, they won the match.
The team is really great. No matter how difficult the match is, they work hard
and never give up. They are close to many people's hearts. People love them for their
courage and hard work.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇提示引导型的半开放英语写作题，解题时可以按照给出的行文框架和右侧的提示模块逐步填充内容：第一步，开头已经点明中国女排历史悠久、成就斐然，我们直接对应第一个achievement提示板块，用提示词win gold medals补充说明她们多次斩获金牌，完成成就部分的叙述；第二步，针对"In the Rio Olympics"的引导句，对应history/story板块的时间线提示，按照At first→Then→Finally的顺序，依次叙述里约奥运初期失利、队员受伤仍坚持、最终逆袭夺冠的完整过程；第三步，对应"The team is really great"的评价句，先结合spirit板块的提示点明她们努力拼搏、永不放弃的精神，再结合people's comments板块的内容补充大众对她们的喜爱与评价，把所有提示要点串联起来，保证语句通顺逻辑连贯即可。
【解析】
1. 填充成就部分：承接开头的"great achievements"，结合提示词写出核心内容，清晰点明队伍的核心成绩。
2. 填充里约奥运经历部分：按照时间顺序展开叙事：
① 先总起说明里约赛事进程艰难，再对应At first的提示写出初期发挥不佳输掉部分比赛的内容；
② 对应Then的提示，写出部分队员受伤但全队没有放弃、全力奋战的内容；
③ 对应Finally的提示，写出队伍最终夺冠的结果，注意描述过去发生的事使用一般过去时，保证时态准确。
3. 填充精神与大众评价部分：
① 对应spirit板块提示，点明女排努力拼搏、永不言弃的精神内核；
② 对应people's comments板块提示，补充说明女排贴近大众，人们因她们的勇气和付出喜爱她们，完成收尾升华内容。
【答案】
One possible version:
The Chinese Women's National Volleyball Team has a long history and great achievements. They win gold medals many times.
In the Rio Olympics, they had a difficult match. At first, they didn't do well and lost some games. Then, some players got hurt. But they didn't give up. They tried their best to fight on. Finally, they won the match.
The team is really great. No matter how difficult the match is, they work hard and never give up. They are close to many people's hearts. People love them for their courage and hard work.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作，时态正确运用，内容逻辑衔接
【点评】
本题属于半提示式的短篇写作，给出了明确的内容模块和关键提示词，大幅降低了自主创作的难度，既考察学生对基础英语语句的组织能力、不同场景时态的正确使用能力，也在写作过程中引导学生理解中国女排永不言弃的精神，实现学科素养和德育的结合。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇提示引导型的半开放英语写作题，解题时可以按照给出的行文框架和右侧的提示模块逐步填充内容：第一步，开头已经点明中国女排历史悠久、成就斐然，我们直接对应第一个achievement提示板块，用提示词win gold medals补充说明她们多次斩获金牌，完成成就部分的叙述；第二步，针对"In the Rio Olympics"的引导句，对应history/story板块的时间线提示，按照At first→Then→Finally的顺序，依次叙述里约奥运初期失利、队员受伤仍坚持、最终逆袭夺冠的完整过程；第三步，对应"The team is really great"的评价句，先结合spirit板块的提示点明她们努力拼搏、永不放弃的精神，再结合people's comments板块的内容补充大众对她们的喜爱与评价，把所有提示要点串联起来，保证语句通顺逻辑连贯即可。
【解析】
1. 填充成就部分：承接开头的"great achievements"，结合提示词写出核心内容，清晰点明队伍的核心成绩。
2. 填充里约奥运经历部分：按照时间顺序展开叙事：
① 先总起说明里约赛事进程艰难，再对应At first的提示写出初期发挥不佳输掉部分比赛的内容；
② 对应Then的提示，写出部分队员受伤但全队没有放弃、全力奋战的内容；
③ 对应Finally的提示，写出队伍最终夺冠的结果，注意描述过去发生的事使用一般过去时，保证时态准确。
3. 填充精神与大众评价部分：
① 对应spirit板块提示，点明女排努力拼搏、永不言弃的精神内核；
② 对应people's comments板块提示，补充说明女排贴近大众，人们因她们的勇气和付出喜爱她们，完成收尾升华内容。
【答案】
One possible version:
The Chinese Women's National Volleyball Team has a long history and great achievements. They win gold medals many times.
In the Rio Olympics, they had a difficult match. At first, they didn't do well and lost some games. Then, some players got hurt. But they didn't give up. They tried their best to fight on. Finally, they won the match.
The team is really great. No matter how difficult the match is, they work hard and never give up. They are close to many people's hearts. People love them for their courage and hard work.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作，时态正确运用，内容逻辑衔接
【点评】
本题属于半提示式的短篇写作，给出了明确的内容模块和关键提示词，大幅降低了自主创作的难度，既考察学生对基础英语语句的组织能力、不同场景时态的正确使用能力，也在写作过程中引导学生理解中国女排永不言弃的精神，实现学科素养和德育的结合。
【难度系数】
0.7
