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四、书面表达(共 20 分)
9. (A) 假设你是李华，学校科技节将举办题为“AI in Our Life”的英文演讲比赛。请根据以下思维导图写一篇英文演讲稿。(5 分)
写作要求: 1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；2. 词数在40 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。3. 必须包括所有要点并作适当补充；4. 短文中不得出现真实的地名或人名等信息。
AI in Our Life
Dear teachers and fellow students,
9. (A) 假设你是李华，学校科技节将举办题为“AI in Our Life”的英文演讲比赛。请根据以下思维导图写一篇英文演讲稿。(5 分)
写作要求: 1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；2. 词数在40 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。3. 必须包括所有要点并作适当补充；4. 短文中不得出现真实的地名或人名等信息。
AI in Our Life
Dear teachers and fellow students,
Today, I want to talk about AI—an amazing invention that's changing our lives and getting more popular. We often use AI tools like Deep Seek, Doubao and Kimi. AI has many advantages. It can chat with us when we're lonely, solve difficult problems quickly and make our life more convenient. We can use it to search for information or even write articles easily. It can also help us with housework and homework. In my opinion, every coin has two sides. We should use AI correctly let it help us, not control us. That's all. Thank you!
答案
One possible version:
AI in Our Life
Dear teachers and fellow students,
Today, I want to talk about AI—an amazing invention that's changing our lives and getting more popular. We often use AI tools like Deep Seek, Doubao and Kimi. AI has many advantages. It can chat with us when we're lonely, solve difficult problems quickly and make our life more convenient. We can use it to search for information or even write articles easily. It can also help us with housework and homework.
In my opinion, every coin has two sides. We should use AI correctly let it help us, not control us.
That's all. Thank you!
AI in Our Life
Dear teachers and fellow students,
Today, I want to talk about AI—an amazing invention that's changing our lives and getting more popular. We often use AI tools like Deep Seek, Doubao and Kimi. AI has many advantages. It can chat with us when we're lonely, solve difficult problems quickly and make our life more convenient. We can use it to search for information or even write articles easily. It can also help us with housework and homework.
In my opinion, every coin has two sides. We should use AI correctly let it help us, not control us.
That's all. Thank you!
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一篇题为“AI in Our Life”的英文演讲稿，需结合思维导图的所有要点：点明AI是改变生活且日益受欢迎的发明，列举Deep Seek、Doubao、Kimi等AI工具；阐述AI的优点（聊天、解决问题、方便生活、搜索信息、写文章等），并适当补充合理内容（如正确使用AI的建议）。写作时要遵循演讲稿格式，语句通顺、意思连贯，开头已给出，需续写内容并控制词数。
【解析】
首先承接开头引出AI主题，说明AI是改变生活且受欢迎的发明，列举相关AI工具；接着阐述AI的优点，如可聊天、解决问题、方便生活、搜索信息、写文章等；最后补充合理建议，强调正确使用AI，确保所有要点覆盖，语言连贯，符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
AI in Our Life
Dear teachers and fellow students,
Today, I want to talk about AI—an amazing invention that's changing our lives and getting more popular. We often use AI tools like Deep Seek, Doubao and Kimi. AI has many advantages. It can chat with us when we're lonely, solve difficult problems quickly and make our life more convenient. We can use it to search for information or even write articles easily. It can also help us with housework and homework.
In my opinion, every coin has two sides. We should use AI correctly let it help us, not control us.
That's all. Thank you!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、演讲稿写作、要点整合
【点评】
本题考查学生对给定信息的整合能力和英文演讲稿的写作能力，要求学生围绕主题清晰表达要点，语言连贯得体，是基础的书面表达题型，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求写一篇题为“AI in Our Life”的英文演讲稿，需结合思维导图的所有要点：点明AI是改变生活且日益受欢迎的发明，列举Deep Seek、Doubao、Kimi等AI工具；阐述AI的优点（聊天、解决问题、方便生活、搜索信息、写文章等），并适当补充合理内容（如正确使用AI的建议）。写作时要遵循演讲稿格式，语句通顺、意思连贯，开头已给出，需续写内容并控制词数。
【解析】
首先承接开头引出AI主题，说明AI是改变生活且受欢迎的发明，列举相关AI工具；接着阐述AI的优点，如可聊天、解决问题、方便生活、搜索信息、写文章等；最后补充合理建议，强调正确使用AI，确保所有要点覆盖，语言连贯，符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
AI in Our Life
Dear teachers and fellow students,
Today, I want to talk about AI—an amazing invention that's changing our lives and getting more popular. We often use AI tools like Deep Seek, Doubao and Kimi. AI has many advantages. It can chat with us when we're lonely, solve difficult problems quickly and make our life more convenient. We can use it to search for information or even write articles easily. It can also help us with housework and homework.
In my opinion, every coin has two sides. We should use AI correctly let it help us, not control us.
That's all. Thank you!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、演讲稿写作、要点整合
【点评】
本题考查学生对给定信息的整合能力和英文演讲稿的写作能力，要求学生围绕主题清晰表达要点，语言连贯得体，是基础的书面表达题型，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
(B)学习是一个漫长而又艰难的过程。制订好学习计划、加强时间观念、合理利用资源等是学生自主学习的方式。近日，你们学校开展以“Independent Learning”为题的征文活动，作为中学生，请你根据自身情况并结合以下提示信息，用英语写一篇短文参加征文活动。(15 分)
要点提示:1. Talk about the importance of independent learning. 2. Give at least two suggestions on how to develop the habit of independent learning.
写作要求:1. 须包含所有要点，可适当发挥；2. 不得出现真实的姓名和班级；3. 词数不少于 80词，开头已经给出，不计人总词数。
Independent Learning
What is the independent learning? It is an active behavior of study.
要点提示:1. Talk about the importance of independent learning. 2. Give at least two suggestions on how to develop the habit of independent learning.
写作要求:1. 须包含所有要点，可适当发挥；2. 不得出现真实的姓名和班级；3. 词数不少于 80词，开头已经给出，不计人总词数。
Independent Learning
What is the independent learning? It is an active behavior of study.
答案
One possible version:
Independent Learning
What is independent learning? It is an active behavior of study. It means that students take charge of their own learning process. It helps us develop critical thinking skills and become more responsible for our own growth.
First, make a detailed study plan and manage your time wisely. At the beginning of each week, set clear goals for different subjects. This helps you stay organized and avoid last-minute cramming. Second, learn to make good use of various learning resources. Don't limit yourself to textbooks. Explore online courses, educational Apps and libraries to find information.
In conclusion, independent learning empowers us to be the masters of our knowledge. By planning well and using resources smartly, we can truly develop the good habit of learning to think, enjoying learning, knowing how to learn and being good at learning.
Independent Learning
What is independent learning? It is an active behavior of study. It means that students take charge of their own learning process. It helps us develop critical thinking skills and become more responsible for our own growth.
First, make a detailed study plan and manage your time wisely. At the beginning of each week, set clear goals for different subjects. This helps you stay organized and avoid last-minute cramming. Second, learn to make good use of various learning resources. Don't limit yourself to textbooks. Explore online courses, educational Apps and libraries to find information.
In conclusion, independent learning empowers us to be the masters of our knowledge. By planning well and using resources smartly, we can truly develop the good habit of learning to think, enjoying learning, knowing how to learn and being good at learning.
解析
【分析】首先明确题目要求：需以“Independent Learning”为题写英语短文，包含两个核心要点（独立学习的重要性、至少两条培养独立学习习惯的建议），词数不少于80，开头已给出。解题思路：第一步，承接开头解释独立学习的内涵，阐述其对学生成长的重要性；第二步，给出具体可行的培养建议，确保覆盖至少两条；第三步，总结独立学习的价值，呼应主题，保证内容完整、结构清晰，符合征文的格式和语言要求。
【解析】根据题目要求，先承接开头说明独立学习是学生自主掌控学习过程的积极行为，从培养批判性思维、增强学习责任感等方面阐述其重要性；接着给出两条建议：一是制定详细学习计划并合理管理时间，二是充分利用各类学习资源；最后总结独立学习能让学生成为知识的主人，确保覆盖所有要点，语言流畅，词数达标，无真实信息。
【答案】One possible version:
Independent Learning
What is independent learning? It is an active behavior of study. It means that students take charge of their own learning process. It helps us develop critical thinking skills and become more responsible for our own growth.
First, make a detailed study plan and manage your time wisely. At the beginning of each week, set clear goals for different subjects. This helps you stay organized and avoid last-minute cramming. Second, learn to make good use of various learning resources. Don't limit yourself to textbooks. Explore online courses, educational Apps and libraries to find information.
In conclusion, independent learning empowers us to be the masters of our knowledge. By planning well and using resources smartly, we can truly develop the good habit of learning to think, enjoying learning, knowing how to learn and being good at learning.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语话题表达
【点评】本文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖所有要点，采用总-分-总结构，语言流畅自然，符合中学生英语写作要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】根据题目要求，先承接开头说明独立学习是学生自主掌控学习过程的积极行为，从培养批判性思维、增强学习责任感等方面阐述其重要性；接着给出两条建议：一是制定详细学习计划并合理管理时间，二是充分利用各类学习资源；最后总结独立学习能让学生成为知识的主人，确保覆盖所有要点，语言流畅，词数达标，无真实信息。
【答案】One possible version:
Independent Learning
What is independent learning? It is an active behavior of study. It means that students take charge of their own learning process. It helps us develop critical thinking skills and become more responsible for our own growth.
First, make a detailed study plan and manage your time wisely. At the beginning of each week, set clear goals for different subjects. This helps you stay organized and avoid last-minute cramming. Second, learn to make good use of various learning resources. Don't limit yourself to textbooks. Explore online courses, educational Apps and libraries to find information.
In conclusion, independent learning empowers us to be the masters of our knowledge. By planning well and using resources smartly, we can truly develop the good habit of learning to think, enjoying learning, knowing how to learn and being good at learning.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语话题表达
【点评】本文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖所有要点，采用总-分-总结构，语言流畅自然，符合中学生英语写作要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.5
