三、书面表达。
(一)
根据下面的信息,帮助Mike介绍他了解到的中国知识。
Mike’s Chinese culture
Favourite festival: the Spring Festival
Hobbies: paper-cutting;playing ping-pong
Activities at weekends: play ping-pong, climb the Great Wall, visit the Chinese Museum
要求:1. 不少于50词,已给出的部分不计入总词数;2. 参考上面的信息介绍;3. 条理清晰,意思连贯;4. 句式丰富、不单一,展开合理想象。
I love China!
Hello, I’m Mike. I’m from the UK. But I live in Beijing now. I love China.
(一)
根据下面的信息,帮助Mike介绍他了解到的中国知识。
Mike’s Chinese culture
Favourite festival: the Spring Festival
Hobbies: paper-cutting;playing ping-pong
Activities at weekends: play ping-pong, climb the Great Wall, visit the Chinese Museum
要求:1. 不少于50词,已给出的部分不计入总词数;2. 参考上面的信息介绍;3. 条理清晰,意思连贯;4. 句式丰富、不单一,展开合理想象。
I love China!
Hello, I’m Mike. I’m from the UK. But I live in Beijing now. I love China.
My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. I can watch fireworks and eat jiaozi with my Chinese friends at this festival. I like paper-cutting. I can cut fu and put fu on the doors. I also like playing ping-pong.
At weekends, I often play ping-pong with my classmates.
Sometimes we climb the Great Wall together.
I also visit the Chinese Museum to learn about Chinese culture.
答案
One possible version:
I love China!
Hello, I'm Mike. I'm from the UK. But I live in Beijing now. I love China. My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. I can watch fireworks and eat jiaozi with my Chinese friends at this festival. I like paper-cutting. I can cut fu and put fu on the doors. I also like playing ping-pong.
At weekends, I often play ping-pong with my classmates. Sometimes we climb the Great Wall together. I also visit the Chinese Museum to learn about Chinese culture.
I love China!
Hello, I'm Mike. I'm from the UK. But I live in Beijing now. I love China. My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. I can watch fireworks and eat jiaozi with my Chinese friends at this festival. I like paper-cutting. I can cut fu and put fu on the doors. I also like playing ping-pong.
At weekends, I often play ping-pong with my classmates. Sometimes we climb the Great Wall together. I also visit the Chinese Museum to learn about Chinese culture.
解析
【分析】首先需承接已给出的开头,围绕Mike的中国相关信息(最喜欢的节日春节、爱好剪纸与乒乓球、周末活动)展开写作,要做到内容完整、条理清晰,句式多样,满足不少于50词的要求,同时合理补充细节让内容更连贯自然。
【解析】先衔接开头,依次介绍最喜欢的节日春节(补充看烟花、吃饺子的细节),接着说明爱好剪纸(补充剪福字贴门的内容)、乒乓球,再讲述周末的活动(和同学打乒乓球、爬长城、参观中国博物馆学习文化),确保语言流畅,符合写作要求。
【答案】I love China!
Hello, I'm Mike. I'm from the UK. But I live in Beijing now. I love China. My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. I can watch fireworks and eat jiaozi with my Chinese friends at this festival. I like paper-cutting. I can cut fu and put fu on the doors. I also like playing ping-pong.
At weekends, I often play ping-pong with my classmates. Sometimes we climb the Great Wall together. I also visit the Chinese Museum to learn about Chinese culture.
【知识点】英语书面表达、文化介绍写作
【点评】本题考查学生运用英语介绍个人文化体验、爱好及活动的能力,要求结合给定信息合理拓展,语言需连贯自然,是初中英语常见写作题型,注重基础表达与内容整合。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】先衔接开头,依次介绍最喜欢的节日春节(补充看烟花、吃饺子的细节),接着说明爱好剪纸(补充剪福字贴门的内容)、乒乓球,再讲述周末的活动(和同学打乒乓球、爬长城、参观中国博物馆学习文化),确保语言流畅,符合写作要求。
【答案】I love China!
Hello, I'm Mike. I'm from the UK. But I live in Beijing now. I love China. My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. I can watch fireworks and eat jiaozi with my Chinese friends at this festival. I like paper-cutting. I can cut fu and put fu on the doors. I also like playing ping-pong.
At weekends, I often play ping-pong with my classmates. Sometimes we climb the Great Wall together. I also visit the Chinese Museum to learn about Chinese culture.
【知识点】英语书面表达、文化介绍写作
【点评】本题考查学生运用英语介绍个人文化体验、爱好及活动的能力,要求结合给定信息合理拓展,语言需连贯自然,是初中英语常见写作题型,注重基础表达与内容整合。
【难度系数】0.5
(二)
你认为一个好学生应该具备哪些条件呢?请围绕这个话题,以“How to be a good student”为题,利用下面的导图,从爱好、习惯、安全、与人和睦相处等方面谈谈你的想法。不少于50词。

参考词汇:listen carefully; take notes; shouldn't jump on the stairs; like swimming; be friendly ...
How to be a good student
Everyone wants to be a good student. A good student should
你认为一个好学生应该具备哪些条件呢?请围绕这个话题,以“How to be a good student”为题,利用下面的导图,从爱好、习惯、安全、与人和睦相处等方面谈谈你的想法。不少于50词。
参考词汇:listen carefully; take notes; shouldn't jump on the stairs; like swimming; be friendly ...
How to be a good student
Everyone wants to be a good student. A good student should
have some hobbies, like swimming or reading. This makes him happy and strong.
have good study habits. He must listen carefully in class and take notes. He should finish homework on time.
shouldn't jump or run on the stairs. He should follow rules at school and at home. A good student should get along well with others. He needs to be friendly and helpful to classmates and teachers.
答案
One possible version:
How to be a good student
Everyone wants to be a good student. A good student should have some hobbies, like swimming or reading. This makes him happy and strong.
A good student should have good study habits. He must listen carefully in class and take notes. He should finish homework on time.
A good student shouldn't jump or run on the stairs. He should follow rules at school and at home.
A good student should get along well with others. He needs to be friendly and helpful to classmates and teachers.
How to be a good student
Everyone wants to be a good student. A good student should have some hobbies, like swimming or reading. This makes him happy and strong.
A good student should have good study habits. He must listen carefully in class and take notes. He should finish homework on time.
A good student shouldn't jump or run on the stairs. He should follow rules at school and at home.
A good student should get along well with others. He needs to be friendly and helpful to classmates and teachers.
解析
【分析】本题为英语话题作文,要求围绕“How to be a good student”主题,结合导图给出的爱好、好习惯、安全、与人和睦相处四个方面及参考词汇写作。解题思路:首先开头点题引出成为好学生的话题;接着分四个要点逐一展开,每个要点结合参考词汇补充具体内容,确保覆盖所有要求;最后检查语言通顺度和字数,符合不少于50词的要求。
【解析】写作步骤:1. 开头:点明主题,引出“成为好学生”的话题;2. 写爱好:举例游泳、阅读,说明爱好的益处;3. 写好习惯:结合参考词汇“listen carefully, take notes”,补充按时完成作业;4. 写安全:结合参考词汇“shouldn't jump on the stairs”,补充遵守学校和家庭规则;5. 写与人和睦:结合参考词汇“be friendly”,补充对同学和老师乐于助人;6. 整合内容,确保逻辑连贯,符合字数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
How to be a good student
Everyone wants to be a good student. A good student should have some hobbies, like swimming or reading. This makes him happy and strong.
A good student should have good study habits. He must listen carefully in class and take notes. He should finish homework on time.
A good student shouldn't jump or run on the stairs. He should follow rules at school and at home.
A good student should get along well with others. He needs to be friendly and helpful to classmates and teachers.
【知识点】英语话题写作、要点式作文
【点评】本文紧扣主题,全面覆盖题目要求的所有要点,合理运用参考词汇,结构清晰,语言通顺,符合初中英语写作的规范要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤:1. 开头:点明主题,引出“成为好学生”的话题;2. 写爱好:举例游泳、阅读,说明爱好的益处;3. 写好习惯:结合参考词汇“listen carefully, take notes”,补充按时完成作业;4. 写安全:结合参考词汇“shouldn't jump on the stairs”,补充遵守学校和家庭规则;5. 写与人和睦:结合参考词汇“be friendly”,补充对同学和老师乐于助人;6. 整合内容,确保逻辑连贯,符合字数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
How to be a good student
Everyone wants to be a good student. A good student should have some hobbies, like swimming or reading. This makes him happy and strong.
A good student should have good study habits. He must listen carefully in class and take notes. He should finish homework on time.
A good student shouldn't jump or run on the stairs. He should follow rules at school and at home.
A good student should get along well with others. He needs to be friendly and helpful to classmates and teachers.
【知识点】英语话题写作、要点式作文
【点评】本文紧扣主题,全面覆盖题目要求的所有要点,合理运用参考词汇,结构清晰,语言通顺,符合初中英语写作的规范要求。
【难度系数】0.6
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