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九、书面表达(根据横线后的写作素材提示补全句子)。(每小题3分，共15分)
假如你是李陶,上周日你班举行了一次聚会。请根据以下提示,给你的英国笔友罗伯特写一封邮件,向他描述聚会的情况及谈谈你当时的感受。
Dear Robert,
We had a party at 3:00 p. m. last Sunday. Almost all classmates joined in the party. 1.
At the party, some girls danced to popular songs, and a few boys played the guitar and sang songs. I made a speech and 2.
4.
How about your recent life? Do you have any interesting activities to tell me?
Yours,
Li Tao
假如你是李陶,上周日你班举行了一次聚会。请根据以下提示,给你的英国笔友罗伯特写一封邮件,向他描述聚会的情况及谈谈你当时的感受。
Dear Robert,
We had a party at 3:00 p. m. last Sunday. Almost all classmates joined in the party. 1.
Even the teachers were as happy as we were
(甚至老师也和我们一样高兴).At the party, some girls danced to popular songs, and a few boys played the guitar and sang songs. I made a speech and 2.
everyone cheered when I finished
(当我结束时,每个人都欢呼起来). We also ate delicious food like cookies and fruit salad. We laughed and chatted a lot, talking about our interesting experiences in the past term. 3. I felt warm and happy because it made our class closer
(我感到很温暖和快乐,因为它使我们的班级更亲密).4.
What a great day
(多么美好的一天啊)! 5. Time flew when we were having fun
(我们玩得开心的时候时间过得真快)!How about your recent life? Do you have any interesting activities to tell me?
Yours,
Li Tao
答案
1. Even the teachers were as happy as we were
2. everyone cheered when I finished
3. I felt warm and happy because it made our class closer
4. What a great day
5. Time flew when we were having fun
2. everyone cheered when I finished
3. I felt warm and happy because it made our class closer
4. What a great day
5. Time flew when we were having fun
解析
【分析】
这道题是结合叙事邮件语境的汉译英补全句子题，解题时首先要通读全文，确定文章整体是描述上周日的聚会，核心时态为一般过去时，所有谓语动词要对应变为过去式；之后逐句对照中文提示，选用符合英语日常表达习惯的句式，避免生硬直译，同时要注意前后文逻辑衔接自然，符合邮件的口语化叙事风格，还要留意特殊句式比如感叹句的正确结构、固定搭配的准确使用。
【解析】
1. 第一句：“甚至”译为Even，主语“老师”是the teachers，描述过去的状态be动词用were，“和我们一样高兴”用同级比较结构as happy as，后面补出比较对象对应的谓语we were，组合得到Even the teachers were as happy as we were。
2. 第二句：“每个人都欢呼起来”译为everyone cheered，用一般过去时符合叙事时态，“当我结束时”用when引导时间状语从句，“结束（演讲）”译为finished，得到everyone cheered when I finished。
3. 第三句：“我感到很温暖和快乐”译为I felt warm and happy，用because引导原因状语从句说明原因，“使我们的班级更亲密”中make的过去式为made，“更亲密”用形容词比较级closer，组合得到I felt warm and happy because it made our class closer。
4. 第四句：这是感叹句，感叹的核心是可数名词day，用what引导的感叹句结构“What + a/an + 形容词 + 可数名词单数”，译为What a great day。
5. 第五句：“时间过得快”的常用表达为time flies，描述过去的事fly变为过去式flew，“当我们玩得开心的时候”用when引导时间状语从句，用过去进行时体现当时正在进行的状态，译为when we were having fun，组合得到Time flew when we were having fun。
【答案】
1. Even the teachers were as happy as we were
2. everyone cheered when I finished
3. I felt warm and happy because it made our class closer
4. What a great day
5. Time flew when we were having fun
【知识点】
一般过去时，形容词同级比较，what型感叹句
【点评】
本题结合日常邮件写作场景考查基础英语表达，既强化了学生用过去时态叙事的意识，也巩固了常用句式的使用，难度适中，能有效检验学生基础汉译英的输出能力，帮助学生避免中式英语的生硬翻译问题。
【难度系数】
0.8
这道题是结合叙事邮件语境的汉译英补全句子题，解题时首先要通读全文，确定文章整体是描述上周日的聚会，核心时态为一般过去时，所有谓语动词要对应变为过去式；之后逐句对照中文提示，选用符合英语日常表达习惯的句式，避免生硬直译，同时要注意前后文逻辑衔接自然，符合邮件的口语化叙事风格，还要留意特殊句式比如感叹句的正确结构、固定搭配的准确使用。
【解析】
1. 第一句：“甚至”译为Even，主语“老师”是the teachers，描述过去的状态be动词用were，“和我们一样高兴”用同级比较结构as happy as，后面补出比较对象对应的谓语we were，组合得到Even the teachers were as happy as we were。
2. 第二句：“每个人都欢呼起来”译为everyone cheered，用一般过去时符合叙事时态，“当我结束时”用when引导时间状语从句，“结束（演讲）”译为finished，得到everyone cheered when I finished。
3. 第三句：“我感到很温暖和快乐”译为I felt warm and happy，用because引导原因状语从句说明原因，“使我们的班级更亲密”中make的过去式为made，“更亲密”用形容词比较级closer，组合得到I felt warm and happy because it made our class closer。
4. 第四句：这是感叹句，感叹的核心是可数名词day，用what引导的感叹句结构“What + a/an + 形容词 + 可数名词单数”，译为What a great day。
5. 第五句：“时间过得快”的常用表达为time flies，描述过去的事fly变为过去式flew，“当我们玩得开心的时候”用when引导时间状语从句，用过去进行时体现当时正在进行的状态，译为when we were having fun，组合得到Time flew when we were having fun。
【答案】
1. Even the teachers were as happy as we were
2. everyone cheered when I finished
3. I felt warm and happy because it made our class closer
4. What a great day
5. Time flew when we were having fun
【知识点】
一般过去时，形容词同级比较，what型感叹句
【点评】
本题结合日常邮件写作场景考查基础英语表达，既强化了学生用过去时态叙事的意识，也巩固了常用句式的使用，难度适中，能有效检验学生基础汉译英的输出能力，帮助学生避免中式英语的生硬翻译问题。
【难度系数】
0.8
