九、书面表达(根据横线后的写作素材提示补全句子)。(每小题3.5分,共17.5分)
良好的人际关系是生活中的阳光滤镜,能让日常生活充满温暖和欢喜。作为一名中学生,你是如何与你的父母、老师、朋友或邻居和谐相处的呢?请以“How to get on well with ”为题,写一篇文章,分享你与他人相处的小智慧。
How to get on well with my parents
Getting on well with my parents makes our family life happier. Here are some of my ways to do it.
First, I always share my school life and feelings with them. 1.
(当我开心或者有问题时,我和他们交流). Second, I show my respect. 2.
(我听他们的建议,并对他们的关心说谢谢). Third, I am honest. 3.
(我告诉他们真相,即使是我犯了错误的时候). 4.
5.
良好的人际关系是生活中的阳光滤镜,能让日常生活充满温暖和欢喜。作为一名中学生,你是如何与你的父母、老师、朋友或邻居和谐相处的呢?请以“How to get on well with ”为题,写一篇文章,分享你与他人相处的小智慧。
How to get on well with my parents
Getting on well with my parents makes our family life happier. Here are some of my ways to do it.
First, I always share my school life and feelings with them. 1.
When I'm happy or have a problem, I talk to them
(当我开心或者有问题时,我和他们交流). Second, I show my respect. 2.
I listen to their advice and say "thank you" for their care
(我听他们的建议,并对他们的关心说谢谢). Third, I am honest. 3.
I tell them the truth, even when I make a mistake
(我告诉他们真相,即使是我犯了错误的时候). 4.
Also, I try to help with some housework, like setting the table
(此外,我尽力帮忙做一些家务,比如摆放餐具).5.
These small actions help us understand each other better
(这些小小的举动帮助我们更好地理解彼此). I feel loved, and I believe they feel my love too.答案
1. When I'm happy or have a problem, I talk to them
2. I listen to their advice and say "thank you" for their care
3. I tell them the truth, even when I make a mistake
4. Also, I try to help with some housework, like setting the table
5. These small actions help us understand each other better
2. I listen to their advice and say "thank you" for their care
3. I tell them the truth, even when I make a mistake
4. Also, I try to help with some housework, like setting the table
5. These small actions help us understand each other better
解析
【分析】
这是一道结合写作语境的汉译英补全句子题型,解题时首先要通读整篇短文,明确全文使用一般现在时描述日常相处的做法的时态基调,之后逐句拆解括号内的中文提示,优先选用符合中学生英语水平的常用固定搭配,避免生硬的中式英语,同时保证补全后的句子和前后文逻辑连贯、语气统一,最后检查句子的语法正确性即可。
【解析】
1. 用when引导时间状语从句,“开心”译为am happy,“有问题”译为have a problem,“和他们交流”用常用表达talk to them,整体保持一般现在时即可。
2. 用并列连词and衔接两个并列动作,“听他们的建议”译为listen to their advice(advice为不可数名词,无需变复数),“对他们的关心说谢谢”译为say "thank you" for their care。
3. 用固定搭配tell them the truth表达“告诉他们真相”,用even when引导让步状语从句,“犯错误”译为make a mistake,符合时态要求。
4. “此外”用常用过渡词Also,“尽力帮忙做一些家务”译为try to help with some housework,介词like后接动名词,“摆放餐具”译为setting the table。
5. “这些小小的举动”译为These small actions,搭配help sb do sth的固定结构,“更好地理解彼此”译为understand each other better。
【答案】
1. When I'm happy or have a problem, I talk to them
2. I listen to their advice and say "thank you" for their care
3. I tell them the truth, even when I make a mistake
4. Also, I try to help with some housework, like setting the table
5. These small actions help us understand each other better
【知识点】
一般现在时,常用动词短语,汉译英基础
【点评】
本题依托人际关系主题的写作场景考察基础句子翻译能力,既检验了学生对核心固定搭配的掌握程度,也要求学生关注全文的时态统一性,引导学生搭建通顺自然的短句,为完整写作打好基础,整体贴合初中英语的基础考察要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一道结合写作语境的汉译英补全句子题型,解题时首先要通读整篇短文,明确全文使用一般现在时描述日常相处的做法的时态基调,之后逐句拆解括号内的中文提示,优先选用符合中学生英语水平的常用固定搭配,避免生硬的中式英语,同时保证补全后的句子和前后文逻辑连贯、语气统一,最后检查句子的语法正确性即可。
【解析】
1. 用when引导时间状语从句,“开心”译为am happy,“有问题”译为have a problem,“和他们交流”用常用表达talk to them,整体保持一般现在时即可。
2. 用并列连词and衔接两个并列动作,“听他们的建议”译为listen to their advice(advice为不可数名词,无需变复数),“对他们的关心说谢谢”译为say "thank you" for their care。
3. 用固定搭配tell them the truth表达“告诉他们真相”,用even when引导让步状语从句,“犯错误”译为make a mistake,符合时态要求。
4. “此外”用常用过渡词Also,“尽力帮忙做一些家务”译为try to help with some housework,介词like后接动名词,“摆放餐具”译为setting the table。
5. “这些小小的举动”译为These small actions,搭配help sb do sth的固定结构,“更好地理解彼此”译为understand each other better。
【答案】
1. When I'm happy or have a problem, I talk to them
2. I listen to their advice and say "thank you" for their care
3. I tell them the truth, even when I make a mistake
4. Also, I try to help with some housework, like setting the table
5. These small actions help us understand each other better
【知识点】
一般现在时,常用动词短语,汉译英基础
【点评】
本题依托人际关系主题的写作场景考察基础句子翻译能力,既检验了学生对核心固定搭配的掌握程度,也要求学生关注全文的时态统一性,引导学生搭建通顺自然的短句,为完整写作打好基础,整体贴合初中英语的基础考察要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
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