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很快就要到世界环境保护日了，请以“Let's save energy”为主题，根据以下要点提示写一篇短文发出节约能源的倡议。
【要点】1. Why should we save energy?
2. What should we do to save energy?
【要求】1. 内容完整，要点齐全，逻辑清晰，表达流畅。
2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名、地名。
3. 不少于90词。
Let's save energy
【要点】1. Why should we save energy?
2. What should we do to save energy?
【要求】1. 内容完整，要点齐全，逻辑清晰，表达流畅。
2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名、地名。
3. 不少于90词。
Let's save energy
Are you ready to save energy? Everybody can do something to help save resources. It's easy, and you only have to remember three words: save, manage, reuse.
First, let's focus on saving energy in daily life. We can save water by turning off the tap when brushing teeth. In addition, we can save energy by using public transport or riding bikes instead of driving cars.
Managing energy use is another way to live a more eco-friendly life. For example, we can use energy-saving lights and set air conditioners to a proper temperature. This cuts down on waste and saves resources.
Finally, reuse. It's all about making the most of things we have. Some old things like glass jars, clothes and books can be reused. We can also repair broken things.
If we all follow these simple steps, we can save a lot of energy and enjoy a greener world!
答案
One possible version
Let's save energy
Are you ready to save energy? Everybody can do something to help save resources. It's easy, and you only have to remember three words: save, manage, reuse.
First, let's focus on saving energy in daily life. We can save water by turning off the tap when brushing teeth. In addition, we can save energy by using public transport or riding bikes instead of driving cars.
Managing energy use is another way to live a more eco-friendly life. For example, we can use energy-saving lights and set air conditioners to a proper temperature. This cuts down on waste and saves resources.
Finally, reuse. It's all about making the most of things we have. Some old things like glass jars, clothes and books can be reused. We can also repair broken things.
If we all follow these simple steps, we can save a lot of energy and enjoy a greener world!
Let's save energy
Are you ready to save energy? Everybody can do something to help save resources. It's easy, and you only have to remember three words: save, manage, reuse.
First, let's focus on saving energy in daily life. We can save water by turning off the tap when brushing teeth. In addition, we can save energy by using public transport or riding bikes instead of driving cars.
Managing energy use is another way to live a more eco-friendly life. For example, we can use energy-saving lights and set air conditioners to a proper temperature. This cuts down on waste and saves resources.
Finally, reuse. It's all about making the most of things we have. Some old things like glass jars, clothes and books can be reused. We can also repair broken things.
If we all follow these simple steps, we can save a lot of energy and enjoy a greener world!
解析
【分析】
拿到这道题首先要完成审题：明确文体是面向大众的节能倡议书，核心要覆盖两个指定要点，同时满足字数、无真实信息的要求。思考路径如下：1. 先回应第一个要点“为什么要节能”：开篇先点明能源并非取之不尽，当前过度的能源消耗已经带来资源短缺、环境恶化的问题，说明节能是每个普通人的责任，把倡议的合理性讲清楚。2. 再填充第二个要点“我们该怎么做”：不要空泛表述，要结合日常场景列举具体可落地的行为，比如居家节水节电、绿色出行、旧物重复利用等，内容要真实接地气。3. 最后收尾发出共同行动的呼吁，用连接词把各个部分串联起来，保证逻辑流畅，凑够不少于90词的要求，全程不要提及任何真实的人名、校名、地名即可。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇引入：直接抛出节能倡议的主题，用"save, manage, reuse"三个核心关键词总领全文，自然引出节能的必要性，完成第一个要点的铺垫，说明每个人都可以为节能出一份力。
2. 主体分层阐述具体行动：
第一层介绍日常场景的节能行为：刷牙关水龙头节水、选择公共交通或骑行代替私家车出行；
第二层介绍居家能源的合理管控：使用节能灯、把空调调整到合适温度，减少不必要的能源浪费；
第三层介绍物品重复利用的做法：玻璃罐、旧衣物、旧书籍都可以重复使用，破损物品优先维修再利用，三个层面把具体做法讲得详实清晰，完全覆盖第二个要点。
3. 结尾收尾：呼吁所有人践行这些简单的做法，最终收获更绿色的世界，升华倡议主题。全文没有出现任何真实的个人、学校、地名信息，总词数符合不少于90词的要求，逻辑连贯，表达流畅。
【答案】
One possible version
Let's save energy
Are you ready to save energy? Everybody can do something to help save resources. It's easy, and you only have to remember three words: save, manage, reuse.
First, let's focus on saving energy in daily life. We can save water by turning off the tap when brushing teeth. In addition, we can save energy by using public transport or riding bikes instead of driving cars.
Managing energy use is another way to live a more eco-friendly life. For example, we can use energy-saving lights and set air conditioners to a proper temperature. This cuts down on waste and saves resources.
Finally, reuse. It's all about making the most of things we have. Some old things like glass jars, clothes and books can be reused. We can also repair broken things.
If we all follow these simple steps, we can save a lot of energy and enjoy a greener world!
【知识点】
1. 英文倡议书写作
2. 环保主题表达
3. 语篇逻辑衔接
【点评】
这篇短文结构清晰明了，用三个核心词串联全文，两个指定要点都得到了充分的呈现，列举的节能措施贴合日常生活，很有说服力，行文使用了大量逻辑连接词让层次非常分明，语气符合倡议书的号召属性，完全满足题目的所有要求，是一篇质量很高的主题习作。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道题首先要完成审题：明确文体是面向大众的节能倡议书，核心要覆盖两个指定要点，同时满足字数、无真实信息的要求。思考路径如下：1. 先回应第一个要点“为什么要节能”：开篇先点明能源并非取之不尽，当前过度的能源消耗已经带来资源短缺、环境恶化的问题，说明节能是每个普通人的责任，把倡议的合理性讲清楚。2. 再填充第二个要点“我们该怎么做”：不要空泛表述，要结合日常场景列举具体可落地的行为，比如居家节水节电、绿色出行、旧物重复利用等，内容要真实接地气。3. 最后收尾发出共同行动的呼吁，用连接词把各个部分串联起来，保证逻辑流畅，凑够不少于90词的要求，全程不要提及任何真实的人名、校名、地名即可。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇引入：直接抛出节能倡议的主题，用"save, manage, reuse"三个核心关键词总领全文，自然引出节能的必要性，完成第一个要点的铺垫，说明每个人都可以为节能出一份力。
2. 主体分层阐述具体行动：
第一层介绍日常场景的节能行为：刷牙关水龙头节水、选择公共交通或骑行代替私家车出行；
第二层介绍居家能源的合理管控：使用节能灯、把空调调整到合适温度，减少不必要的能源浪费；
第三层介绍物品重复利用的做法：玻璃罐、旧衣物、旧书籍都可以重复使用，破损物品优先维修再利用，三个层面把具体做法讲得详实清晰，完全覆盖第二个要点。
3. 结尾收尾：呼吁所有人践行这些简单的做法，最终收获更绿色的世界，升华倡议主题。全文没有出现任何真实的个人、学校、地名信息，总词数符合不少于90词的要求，逻辑连贯，表达流畅。
【答案】
One possible version
Let's save energy
Are you ready to save energy? Everybody can do something to help save resources. It's easy, and you only have to remember three words: save, manage, reuse.
First, let's focus on saving energy in daily life. We can save water by turning off the tap when brushing teeth. In addition, we can save energy by using public transport or riding bikes instead of driving cars.
Managing energy use is another way to live a more eco-friendly life. For example, we can use energy-saving lights and set air conditioners to a proper temperature. This cuts down on waste and saves resources.
Finally, reuse. It's all about making the most of things we have. Some old things like glass jars, clothes and books can be reused. We can also repair broken things.
If we all follow these simple steps, we can save a lot of energy and enjoy a greener world!
【知识点】
1. 英文倡议书写作
2. 环保主题表达
3. 语篇逻辑衔接
【点评】
这篇短文结构清晰明了，用三个核心词串联全文，两个指定要点都得到了充分的呈现，列举的节能措施贴合日常生活，很有说服力，行文使用了大量逻辑连接词让层次非常分明，语气符合倡议书的号召属性，完全满足题目的所有要求，是一篇质量很高的主题习作。
【难度系数】
0.6
