四、书面表达
假如你是李明,你的外籍教师 Miss Green要到海南岛度寒假。请你给她写封信,介绍一下海南岛的一些情况。
要点提示:
1.海南岛的地理位置、天气情况。
2.去海南岛度假活动内容:钓鱼、游泳、潜水(diving)、冲浪(surfing)、享受海滩和阳光等。
3.必备物品:太阳镜、雨伞、太阳帽、游泳衣(swimsuit)等。
词数:80 左右。
Dear Miss Green,
A trip to Hainan Island is the best choice for your winter holiday.











Yours,
Li Ming

Dear Miss Green,
A trip to Hainan Island is the best choice for your winter holiday.
Hainan Island lies in the south of China where the weather is quite warm even in winter. There are many different kinds of activities for fun there. You can go fishing, swimming, diving, and surfing every day, if you like. You can stay on the white beach, relaxing and enjoying the sunshine.
And remember to take sunglasses, a sun hat, an umbrella and a swimsuit with you.
I hope what I have written will be of some help to you.
Enjoy yourself there.
Yours,
Li Ming

【分析】
本题要求以李明的身份给外籍教师Miss Green写一封介绍海南岛的书信，需涵盖三个核心要点：海南岛的地理位置与天气、度假活动内容、必备物品，词数控制在80左右，书信格式需规范。写作时需用简单易懂的英语，衔接自然，符合书信的礼貌语气，确保所有提示要点不遗漏，语句通顺。
【解析】
1. 承接给定的开头，先介绍海南岛的地理位置（位于中国南部）和天气特点（冬季也十分温暖）；
2. 接着列举海南岛的度假活动：钓鱼、游泳、潜水、冲浪，以及享受海滩和阳光；
3. 然后说明必备物品：太阳镜、太阳帽、雨伞、游泳衣；
4. 最后添加礼貌祝愿，希望内容有帮助，祝对方玩得开心，完成书信收尾，确保词数符合要求。
【答案】
Dear Miss Green,
A trip to Hainan Island is the best choice for your winter holiday.
Hainan Island lies in the south of China where the weather is quite warm even in winter. There are many different kinds of activities for fun there. You can go fishing, swimming, diving, and surfing every day, if you like. You can stay on the white beach, relaxing and enjoying the sunshine.
And remember to take sunglasses, a sun hat, an umbrella and a swimsuit with you.
I hope what I have written will be of some help to you.
Enjoy yourself there.
Yours,
Li Ming
【知识点】
英语书信写作、话题介绍类书面表达、常用词汇运用
【点评】
该范文完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点，语言简洁通顺，符合初中英语表达水平，书信格式正确，衔接自然，用词准确恰当，清晰完成了介绍海南岛适合寒假度假的任务，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6