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四、书面表达
Write a short passage about an emergency (such as a fire, a car accident) or a natural disaster (such as a snowstorm, an earthquake) that you or someone else has experienced.
Remember:
1. Include when it happened, what happened, how people dealt with it, and how you/he/she felt.
2. Write at least 90 words.
Write a short passage about an emergency (such as a fire, a car accident) or a natural disaster (such as a snowstorm, an earthquake) that you or someone else has experienced.
Remember:
1. Include when it happened, what happened, how people dealt with it, and how you/he/she felt.
2. Write at least 90 words.
答案
One possible version:
Last winter, a heavy snowstorm hit our city overnight.
I was at home with my parents when there was a power cut suddenly. The wind blew hard outside, and snow kept falling. After a while, we found we even couldn’t open the front door. Mom called the community office, and soon volunteers came to clear the snow with tools.
Our neighbor, an old lady living alone, was trapped, so my dad and I helped her get water and food. This experience made me realize that people can get through difficult times by helping each other.
(90 words)
Last winter, a heavy snowstorm hit our city overnight.
I was at home with my parents when there was a power cut suddenly. The wind blew hard outside, and snow kept falling. After a while, we found we even couldn’t open the front door. Mom called the community office, and soon volunteers came to clear the snow with tools.
Our neighbor, an old lady living alone, was trapped, so my dad and I helped her get water and food. This experience made me realize that people can get through difficult times by helping each other.
(90 words)
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求围绕“经历的紧急情况或自然灾害”写短文，需包含时间、事件经过、应对方式、感受四个要点，且字数不少于90词。解题思路：1. 选取贴近生活的经历（如暴风雪）；2. 按要求的四个要素组织内容，确保信息完整；3. 用通顺的英语表达，满足字数要求，符合写作逻辑。
【解析】
首先确定写作话题为冬季经历的暴风雪，依次展开：1. 点明时间（Last winter）和事件背景（城市突降暴风雪）；2. 描述具体情况（家中停电、积雪堵门）；3. 说明应对措施（联系社区，志愿者清雪，帮助独居邻居）；4. 表达个人感悟（意识到互助能渡过难关），确保涵盖所有要求要点，字数达标。
【答案】
One possible version: Last winter, a heavy snowstorm hit our city overnight. I was at home with my parents when there was a power cut suddenly. The wind blew hard outside, and snow kept falling. After a while, we found we even couldn’t open the front door. Mom called the community office, and soon volunteers came to clear the snow with tools. Our neighbor, an old lady living alone, was trapped, so my dad and I helped her get water and food. This experience made me realize that people can get through difficult times by helping each other.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；话题类写作；记叙文写作
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求学生结合自身经历围绕指定话题写作，需覆盖关键信息点，注重内容的完整性与逻辑性，贴近生活实际，便于学生发挥，同时考查语言组织运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书面表达题，要求围绕“经历的紧急情况或自然灾害”写短文，需包含时间、事件经过、应对方式、感受四个要点，且字数不少于90词。解题思路：1. 选取贴近生活的经历（如暴风雪）；2. 按要求的四个要素组织内容，确保信息完整；3. 用通顺的英语表达，满足字数要求，符合写作逻辑。
【解析】
首先确定写作话题为冬季经历的暴风雪，依次展开：1. 点明时间（Last winter）和事件背景（城市突降暴风雪）；2. 描述具体情况（家中停电、积雪堵门）；3. 说明应对措施（联系社区，志愿者清雪，帮助独居邻居）；4. 表达个人感悟（意识到互助能渡过难关），确保涵盖所有要求要点，字数达标。
【答案】
One possible version: Last winter, a heavy snowstorm hit our city overnight. I was at home with my parents when there was a power cut suddenly. The wind blew hard outside, and snow kept falling. After a while, we found we even couldn’t open the front door. Mom called the community office, and soon volunteers came to clear the snow with tools. Our neighbor, an old lady living alone, was trapped, so my dad and I helped her get water and food. This experience made me realize that people can get through difficult times by helping each other.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；话题类写作；记叙文写作
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求学生结合自身经历围绕指定话题写作，需覆盖关键信息点，注重内容的完整性与逻辑性，贴近生活实际，便于学生发挥，同时考查语言组织运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
