2026年同步练习册明天出版社六年级英语上册鲁教版五四制第69页答案
清晰,书写规范,词数70词左右。
思路点拨
Step 1: 仔细审题,明确写作思路
1. 体裁:说明文
2. 人称:以第一人称为主
3. 时态:以一般现在时为主
Step 2: 谋篇布局,梳理核心要点
开篇点题:介绍自己的学校
具体介绍:学校场所,最喜欢的地方、位置以及喜欢的原因
总结升华:表达对学校的喜爱
Step 3: 表达建构
一、句子表达
1. There are many places in my school.
我的学校里有很多地方。
2. The library is across from the classroom building, and the sports field is between the library and the dining hall.
图书馆在教学楼对面,运动场在图书馆和餐厅之间。
3. My favourite place is the library.
我最喜欢的地方是图书馆。
4. I like it because I love reading.
我喜欢它,因为我喜爱阅读。
5. The teachers are kind. 老师们很和蔼。

答案

My School
My school is very nice. There are many different places in my school. The library is across from the classroom building, and the sports field is between the library and the dining hall. My favourite place is the library. I like it because I love reading, and there are many interesting books in it. The teachers at my school are kind too. I love my school very much.

解析

【分析】
本题为英语说明文写作题,要求词数70左右,需以第一人称、一般现在时完成。解题思路:①审题确定写作的体裁、人称、时态,避免跑题;②谋篇布局,按“开篇点题→介绍学校场所→阐述最喜欢的地方及原因→总结升华”的结构搭建框架;③结合给定的核心句子,补充合理细节(如图书馆有有趣的书),使内容饱满流畅,符合要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:
1. 审题:明确体裁为说明文,采用第一人称,以一般现在时为主,控制词数在70左右;
2. 谋篇布局:
开篇点题:用“My school is very nice.”引出对学校的整体印象;
主体部分:先说明学校场所布局(图书馆在教学楼对面,运动场在图书馆和餐厅之间),再点明最喜欢的地方是图书馆,补充“有很多有趣的书”这一细节完善原因,最后提及学校老师和蔼;
总结:用“I love my school very much.”升华情感;
3. 表达建构:整合内容,确保语句连贯,符合给定的核心表达要求。
【答案】
My School
My school is very nice. There are many different places in my school. The library is across from the classroom building, and the sports field is between the library and the dining hall. My favourite place is the library. I like it because I love reading, and there are many interesting books in it. The teachers at my school are kind too. I love my school very much.
【知识点】
英语说明文写作、英语句子运用、英语篇章结构
【点评】
该作文严格遵循题目要求,结构清晰,要点齐全,运用了给定的核心表达,补充了合理细节,语言流畅自然,准确传递了对学校的喜爱之情,是一篇符合要求的基础写作作品。
【难度系数】
0.5