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Ⅶ.书面表达(满分20分)
假如你是李华,你最近观看了法国的地理纪录片《家园》(Home),真切地认识到地球的壮丽与脆弱。请根据以下要点写一篇短文,呼吁人们爱护环境,保护地球。不少于80词。
Earth is amazing. 1. 2.
Earth is easily hurt. 1.
2.
We should... 1. 2.
假如你是李华,你最近观看了法国的地理纪录片《家园》(Home),真切地认识到地球的壮丽与脆弱。请根据以下要点写一篇短文,呼吁人们爱护环境,保护地球。不少于80词。
Earth is amazing. 1. 2.
Earth is easily hurt. 1.
2.We should... 1. 2.
答案
One possible version:
Recently, I watched the documentary Home. It made me see two sides of our planet:it is not only amazing but also easily hurt.
Earth is amazing. It has vast blue oceans, green forests and high mountains, providing homes for countless living things. It also gives us clean air, fresh water and rich resources to live a happy life.
Earth is easily hurt. Many trees are cut down,leading to the loss of animal homes. Lots of waste is thrown into rivers and oceans,polluting the water we need. Besides, more and more cars produce harmful gases,making the air dirty.
We should take action to protect it. First, we can use cloth bags instead of plastic bags to reduce pollution. Second, we should plant more trees to make our planet greener. Let’s work together to care for Earth and make it more beautiful.
Recently, I watched the documentary Home. It made me see two sides of our planet:it is not only amazing but also easily hurt.
Earth is amazing. It has vast blue oceans, green forests and high mountains, providing homes for countless living things. It also gives us clean air, fresh water and rich resources to live a happy life.
Earth is easily hurt. Many trees are cut down,leading to the loss of animal homes. Lots of waste is thrown into rivers and oceans,polluting the water we need. Besides, more and more cars produce harmful gases,making the air dirty.
We should take action to protect it. First, we can use cloth bags instead of plastic bags to reduce pollution. Second, we should plant more trees to make our planet greener. Let’s work together to care for Earth and make it more beautiful.
解析
【分析】本题是围绕环保主题的要点式书面表达，要求结合观看纪录片《家园》的感悟，分三部分写作：地球的壮丽、地球的脆弱、应采取的环保行动。解题时需先明确各要点的具体内容：第一部分从地球的自然景观、提供的资源等角度体现其“amazing”；第二部分列举破坏地球的具体行为（如砍树、污染水源、排放尾气等）体现“easily hurt”；第三部分提出切实可行的环保措施，最终形成连贯完整、符合词数要求的短文。
【解析】首先开篇点明观看纪录片《家园》的经历，引出对地球两面性的认识；接着描述地球的壮丽：拥有广阔的海洋、森林、山脉，为无数生物提供家园，还给予人类清洁的空气、淡水和丰富资源；然后说明地球的脆弱：树木被砍伐导致动物栖息地丧失，垃圾污染河流海洋，汽车尾气污染空气；最后提出具体环保行动：用布袋代替塑料袋减少污染，多种树让地球更绿，呼吁共同爱护地球。
【答案】One possible version:
Recently, I watched the documentary Home. It made me see two sides of our planet:it is not only amazing but also easily hurt.
Earth is amazing. It has vast blue oceans, green forests and high mountains, providing homes for countless living things. It also gives us clean air, fresh water and rich resources to live a happy life.
Earth is easily hurt. Many trees are cut down,leading to the loss of animal homes. Lots of waste is thrown into rivers and oceans,polluting the water we need. Besides, more and more cars produce harmful gases,making the air dirty.
We should take action to protect it. First, we can use cloth bags instead of plastic bags to reduce pollution. Second, we should plant more trees to make our planet greener. Let’s work together to care for Earth and make it more beautiful.
【知识点】英语书面表达、环保话题写作、要点式作文
【点评】本题结合热点纪录片，既考查学生的英语语言组织与运用能力，又渗透环保意识，要求紧扣要点、内容连贯、语言准确，是常见的书面表达题型。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】首先开篇点明观看纪录片《家园》的经历，引出对地球两面性的认识；接着描述地球的壮丽：拥有广阔的海洋、森林、山脉，为无数生物提供家园，还给予人类清洁的空气、淡水和丰富资源；然后说明地球的脆弱：树木被砍伐导致动物栖息地丧失，垃圾污染河流海洋，汽车尾气污染空气；最后提出具体环保行动：用布袋代替塑料袋减少污染，多种树让地球更绿，呼吁共同爱护地球。
【答案】One possible version:
Recently, I watched the documentary Home. It made me see two sides of our planet:it is not only amazing but also easily hurt.
Earth is amazing. It has vast blue oceans, green forests and high mountains, providing homes for countless living things. It also gives us clean air, fresh water and rich resources to live a happy life.
Earth is easily hurt. Many trees are cut down,leading to the loss of animal homes. Lots of waste is thrown into rivers and oceans,polluting the water we need. Besides, more and more cars produce harmful gases,making the air dirty.
We should take action to protect it. First, we can use cloth bags instead of plastic bags to reduce pollution. Second, we should plant more trees to make our planet greener. Let’s work together to care for Earth and make it more beautiful.
【知识点】英语书面表达、环保话题写作、要点式作文
【点评】本题结合热点纪录片，既考查学生的英语语言组织与运用能力，又渗透环保意识，要求紧扣要点、内容连贯、语言准确，是常见的书面表达题型。
【难度系数】0.6
