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Ⅳ. Unit task.
After completing Unit 5, write down a piece of achievement in nature exploration.
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After completing Unit 5, write down a piece of achievement in nature exploration.
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One possible version: A nature explorer. Xu Xiake was a great explorer in ancient China. He loved nature and spent his life travelling across the country. He explored many famous mountains, beautiful rivers, and mysterious caves. He walked to these places and wrote down everything he saw in his diary. I think he was very brave and never gave up. His book, The Xu Xiake's Travel Notes, is very interesting and useful. It helps us learn more about China's wonderful natural world.
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答案
One possible version:
A nature explorer
Xu Xiake was a great explorer in ancient China. He loved nature and spent his life travelling across the country. He explored many famous mountains, beautiful rivers, and mysterious caves. He walked to these places and wrote down everything he saw in his diary. I think he was very brave and never gave up. His book, The Xu Xiake's Travel Notes, is very interesting and useful. It helps us learn more about China's wonderful natural world.
A nature explorer
Xu Xiake was a great explorer in ancient China. He loved nature and spent his life travelling across the country. He explored many famous mountains, beautiful rivers, and mysterious caves. He walked to these places and wrote down everything he saw in his diary. I think he was very brave and never gave up. His book, The Xu Xiake's Travel Notes, is very interesting and useful. It helps us learn more about China's wonderful natural world.
解析
【分析】
首先要明确任务是完成关于自然探索成就的英语写作，解题思路如下：
1. 选定合适的自然探索成就：选择中国古代探险家徐霞客的地理考察及著作作为写作对象，这类内容有明确的事迹和价值，容易组织内容；
2. 对应表格的四个问题梳理内容：先确定“What is it?”的核心内容是徐霞客的游历考察与《徐霞客游记》；再思考“Why is it important?”，从地理研究价值、科普价值两个角度分析；接着明确“Who made it?”是明代探险家徐霞客；最后梳理“How did the explorer achieve it?”，从游历方式、记录习惯、成书过程三个方面整理；
3. 将梳理的内容组织成连贯的英语短文，注意语言通顺、逻辑清晰，符合英语写作的表达习惯。
【解析】
1. 先完成表格内容的填充：
What is it?：The achievement is Xu Xiake's exploration of China's natural landscapes and his work *The Xu Xiake's Travel Notes*.
Why is it important?
● It offers precious materials for the research of China's geography and natural environment.
● It helps people know more about the diverse and wonderful natural scenery of China.
Who made it?：Xu Xiake, a great ancient Chinese explorer and geographer.
How did the explorer achieve it?
● He spent his whole life traveling across various regions in China on foot.
● He carefully observed and recorded all the natural scenery, such as mountains, rivers and caves, in his daily diaries.
● His diaries were later compiled into the famous book *The Xu Xiake's Travel Notes*.
2. 将表格内容扩展成连贯的短文，调整语言使其流畅自然，融入对探险家的评价，形成最终的写作内容。
【答案】
One possible version:
A nature explorer
Xu Xiake was a great explorer in ancient China. He loved nature and spent his life travelling across the country. He explored many famous mountains, beautiful rivers, and mysterious caves. He walked to these places and wrote down everything he saw in his diary. I think he was very brave and never gave up. His book, *The Xu Xiake's Travel Notes*, is very interesting and useful. It helps us learn more about China's wonderful natural world.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、人物事迹介绍、自然主题写作
【点评】
本题聚焦英语书面表达能力，要求学生围绕自然探索成就展开创作，既需要学生掌握相关英语词汇与句式，也需要学生具备梳理人物事迹逻辑的能力，能有效锻炼学生的信息整合与语言输出能力，同时也能加深学生对自然探索相关内容的认知。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先要明确任务是完成关于自然探索成就的英语写作，解题思路如下：
1. 选定合适的自然探索成就：选择中国古代探险家徐霞客的地理考察及著作作为写作对象，这类内容有明确的事迹和价值，容易组织内容；
2. 对应表格的四个问题梳理内容：先确定“What is it?”的核心内容是徐霞客的游历考察与《徐霞客游记》；再思考“Why is it important?”，从地理研究价值、科普价值两个角度分析；接着明确“Who made it?”是明代探险家徐霞客；最后梳理“How did the explorer achieve it?”，从游历方式、记录习惯、成书过程三个方面整理；
3. 将梳理的内容组织成连贯的英语短文，注意语言通顺、逻辑清晰，符合英语写作的表达习惯。
【解析】
1. 先完成表格内容的填充：
What is it?：The achievement is Xu Xiake's exploration of China's natural landscapes and his work *The Xu Xiake's Travel Notes*.
Why is it important?
● It offers precious materials for the research of China's geography and natural environment.
● It helps people know more about the diverse and wonderful natural scenery of China.
Who made it?：Xu Xiake, a great ancient Chinese explorer and geographer.
How did the explorer achieve it?
● He spent his whole life traveling across various regions in China on foot.
● He carefully observed and recorded all the natural scenery, such as mountains, rivers and caves, in his daily diaries.
● His diaries were later compiled into the famous book *The Xu Xiake's Travel Notes*.
2. 将表格内容扩展成连贯的短文，调整语言使其流畅自然，融入对探险家的评价，形成最终的写作内容。
【答案】
One possible version:
A nature explorer
Xu Xiake was a great explorer in ancient China. He loved nature and spent his life travelling across the country. He explored many famous mountains, beautiful rivers, and mysterious caves. He walked to these places and wrote down everything he saw in his diary. I think he was very brave and never gave up. His book, *The Xu Xiake's Travel Notes*, is very interesting and useful. It helps us learn more about China's wonderful natural world.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、人物事迹介绍、自然主题写作
【点评】
本题聚焦英语书面表达能力，要求学生围绕自然探索成就展开创作，既需要学生掌握相关英语词汇与句式，也需要学生具备梳理人物事迹逻辑的能力，能有效锻炼学生的信息整合与语言输出能力，同时也能加深学生对自然探索相关内容的认知。
【难度系数】
0.6
