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五、书面表达
水对我们来说很重要，我们离不开水。地球上大部分的水是海水，但海水不能直接饮用。因此，节约用水非常重要。请你根据下面的思维导图，写一篇有关水的文章。
写作要求：
（1）文中需要包括思维导图中的全部要点，可适当发挥，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现本人姓名或校名；
（3）词数 70 个左右。
水对我们来说很重要，我们离不开水。地球上大部分的水是海水，但海水不能直接饮用。因此，节约用水非常重要。请你根据下面的思维导图，写一篇有关水的文章。
写作要求：
（1）文中需要包括思维导图中的全部要点，可适当发挥，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现本人姓名或校名；
（3）词数 70 个左右。
答案
Water is very important to people. If there is no water, there will be no life.
As we all know, there is much water on the earth. But most of it is sea water. Fresh water is little. So it is very important to save water.
We need to turn off taps when we are not using them. We also need to take a quick shower to save water. Reusing water is another good way to save water.
In a word, water is valuable and we should save it.
As we all know, there is much water on the earth. But most of it is sea water. Fresh water is little. So it is very important to save water.
We need to turn off taps when we are not using them. We also need to take a quick shower to save water. Reusing water is another good way to save water.
In a word, water is valuable and we should save it.
解析
【分析】
首先，我们要明确这篇书面表达的核心要求：涵盖思维导图的全部要点，词数70左右，语言规范且不能出现真实姓名或校名。
解题思路：
1. 开头段：直接点明水的重要性，用简洁的句子引出主题，让读者快速抓住核心。
2. 中间段：先介绍水的现状——地球上海水多、淡水少，自然引出节约用水的必要性；接着列举思维导图里的节水方法，还可适当补充内容让表达更丰富。
3. 结尾段：总结升华，再次强调水的珍贵，呼吁大家节水，使文章结构完整。
【解析】
1. 开头切入主题：用“Water is very important to people. If there is no water, there will be no life.”直接点明水对生命的重要性，开门见山。
2. 阐述水的现状：“As we all know, there is much water on the earth. But most of it is sea water. Fresh water is little.”清晰说明海水多、淡水少的事实，自然过渡到“So it is very important to save water.”，引出节水的必要性。
3. 列举节水措施：“We need to turn off taps when we are not using them. We also need to take a quick shower to save water. Reusing water is another good way to save water.”涵盖了思维导图的要点，还补充了重复用水的方法，内容充实。
4. 结尾总结：“In a word, water is valuable and we should save it.”总结全文，强化主题，使文章结构完整。
【答案】
Water is very important to people. If there is no water, there will be no life.
As we all know, there is much water on the earth. But most of it is sea water. Fresh water is little. So it is very important to save water.
We need to turn off taps when we are not using them. We also need to take a quick shower to save water. Reusing water is another good way to save water.
In a word, water is valuable and we should save it.
【知识点】
1. 环保类英语写作
2. 节约用水相关表达
3. 议论文结构搭建
【点评】
这篇作文严格符合题目要求，涵盖了思维导图的所有要点，还适当补充了节水方法，内容完整；文章采用总分总结构，逻辑清晰，语言简洁流畅，词数符合要求，是一篇规范的环保类小作文。
【难度系数】
0.75
首先，我们要明确这篇书面表达的核心要求：涵盖思维导图的全部要点，词数70左右，语言规范且不能出现真实姓名或校名。
解题思路：
1. 开头段：直接点明水的重要性，用简洁的句子引出主题，让读者快速抓住核心。
2. 中间段：先介绍水的现状——地球上海水多、淡水少，自然引出节约用水的必要性；接着列举思维导图里的节水方法，还可适当补充内容让表达更丰富。
3. 结尾段：总结升华，再次强调水的珍贵，呼吁大家节水，使文章结构完整。
【解析】
1. 开头切入主题：用“Water is very important to people. If there is no water, there will be no life.”直接点明水对生命的重要性，开门见山。
2. 阐述水的现状：“As we all know, there is much water on the earth. But most of it is sea water. Fresh water is little.”清晰说明海水多、淡水少的事实，自然过渡到“So it is very important to save water.”，引出节水的必要性。
3. 列举节水措施：“We need to turn off taps when we are not using them. We also need to take a quick shower to save water. Reusing water is another good way to save water.”涵盖了思维导图的要点，还补充了重复用水的方法，内容充实。
4. 结尾总结：“In a word, water is valuable and we should save it.”总结全文，强化主题，使文章结构完整。
【答案】
Water is very important to people. If there is no water, there will be no life.
As we all know, there is much water on the earth. But most of it is sea water. Fresh water is little. So it is very important to save water.
We need to turn off taps when we are not using them. We also need to take a quick shower to save water. Reusing water is another good way to save water.
In a word, water is valuable and we should save it.
【知识点】
1. 环保类英语写作
2. 节约用水相关表达
3. 议论文结构搭建
【点评】
这篇作文严格符合题目要求，涵盖了思维导图的所有要点，还适当补充了节水方法，内容完整；文章采用总分总结构，逻辑清晰，语言简洁流畅，词数符合要求，是一篇规范的环保类小作文。
【难度系数】
0.75
