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Ⅳ. 书面表达。
假定你是李华。你的笔友Tom正在参与学校全球生态保护课题研究,需要了解不同地区人们如何与自然和谐相处,特来信向你询问海南在生态保护方面的具体案例。请你根据下面提供的信息给他回复一封电子邮件,介绍海南的湿地公园。内容提示如下:
要求:
1. 需覆盖内容提示的所有要点;
2. 90词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
You asked how people in Hainan live in harmony with nature.
假定你是李华。你的笔友Tom正在参与学校全球生态保护课题研究,需要了解不同地区人们如何与自然和谐相处,特来信向你询问海南在生态保护方面的具体案例。请你根据下面提供的信息给他回复一封电子邮件,介绍海南的湿地公园。内容提示如下:
要求:
1. 需覆盖内容提示的所有要点;
2. 90词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
You asked how people in Hainan live in harmony with nature.
答案
One possible version:
Dear Tom,
You asked how people in Hainan live in harmony with nature. Let me tell you about our wetland parks!
Here in Hainan, we really care about nature. Now we have 12 wetland parks across the island.
To respect nature, we set up safe zones and avoid harming plants and animals' homes.
These parks bring many benefits. To humans, they are a nice place to walk and relax and a chance to learn about nature. As for animals, they offer a safe home for water birds, fish and wetland plants, which helps protect wetland wildlife.
If you come to Hainan, I'd love to show you around these parks!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
Dear Tom,
You asked how people in Hainan live in harmony with nature. Let me tell you about our wetland parks!
Here in Hainan, we really care about nature. Now we have 12 wetland parks across the island.
To respect nature, we set up safe zones and avoid harming plants and animals' homes.
These parks bring many benefits. To humans, they are a nice place to walk and relax and a chance to learn about nature. As for animals, they offer a safe home for water birds, fish and wetland plants, which helps protect wetland wildlife.
If you come to Hainan, I'd love to show you around these parks!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
首先，这是一封给笔友的电子邮件，核心任务是介绍海南湿地公园的生态保护案例，需覆盖所有要点并控制词数。解题思路如下：
1. 衔接题目给出的开头，自然引出海南湿地公园这一核心内容；
2. 先点明海南对自然的重视及湿地公园的数量，让对方有整体认知；
3. 阐述海南保护湿地的具体措施，体现与自然和谐相处的做法；
4. 从人类和动植物两个角度，说明湿地公园带来的益处，呼应生态保护的主题；
5. 最后发出邀请，增强邮件的友好性，收尾自然。
【解析】
1. 开头承接：用“Let me tell you about our wetland parks!”承接题目开头，直接切入主题，简洁明了；
2. 介绍概况：“Here in Hainan, we really care about nature. Now we have 12 wetland parks across the island.”点明海南对自然的重视及湿地公园数量，给出基础信息；
3. 说明保护措施：“To respect nature, we set up safe zones and avoid harming plants and animals' homes.”具体阐述保护湿地的做法，呼应“与自然和谐相处”的要求；
4. 阐述益处：分人类和动植物两个维度，“To humans, they are a nice place to walk and relax and a chance to learn about nature. As for animals, they offer a safe home for water birds, fish and wetland plants, which helps protect wetland wildlife.”清晰说明湿地公园的双重价值；
5. 结尾邀请：“If you come to Hainan, I'd love to show you around these parks!”发出友好邀请，最后附上祝福语，符合邮件格式。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Tom,
You asked how people in Hainan live in harmony with nature. Let me tell you about our wetland parks!
Here in Hainan, we really care about nature. Now we have 12 wetland parks across the island.
To respect nature, we set up safe zones and avoid harming plants and animals' homes.
These parks bring many benefits. To humans, they are a nice place to walk and relax and a chance to learn about nature. As for animals, they offer a safe home for water birds, fish and wetland plants, which helps protect wetland wildlife.
If you come to Hainan, I'd love to show you around these parks!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】
电子邮件写作；生态保护话题表达；英语应用文写作
【点评】
这篇范文结构清晰，逻辑连贯，完整覆盖了题目要求的所有要点，语言简洁地道，符合电子邮件友好自然的语气。既准确介绍了海南湿地公园的生态保护举措与价值，又通过邀请增强了书信的互动性，词数也符合题目要求，是一篇优秀的应用文范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先，这是一封给笔友的电子邮件，核心任务是介绍海南湿地公园的生态保护案例，需覆盖所有要点并控制词数。解题思路如下：
1. 衔接题目给出的开头，自然引出海南湿地公园这一核心内容；
2. 先点明海南对自然的重视及湿地公园的数量，让对方有整体认知；
3. 阐述海南保护湿地的具体措施，体现与自然和谐相处的做法；
4. 从人类和动植物两个角度，说明湿地公园带来的益处，呼应生态保护的主题；
5. 最后发出邀请，增强邮件的友好性，收尾自然。
【解析】
1. 开头承接：用“Let me tell you about our wetland parks!”承接题目开头，直接切入主题，简洁明了；
2. 介绍概况：“Here in Hainan, we really care about nature. Now we have 12 wetland parks across the island.”点明海南对自然的重视及湿地公园数量，给出基础信息；
3. 说明保护措施：“To respect nature, we set up safe zones and avoid harming plants and animals' homes.”具体阐述保护湿地的做法，呼应“与自然和谐相处”的要求；
4. 阐述益处：分人类和动植物两个维度，“To humans, they are a nice place to walk and relax and a chance to learn about nature. As for animals, they offer a safe home for water birds, fish and wetland plants, which helps protect wetland wildlife.”清晰说明湿地公园的双重价值；
5. 结尾邀请：“If you come to Hainan, I'd love to show you around these parks!”发出友好邀请，最后附上祝福语，符合邮件格式。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Tom,
You asked how people in Hainan live in harmony with nature. Let me tell you about our wetland parks!
Here in Hainan, we really care about nature. Now we have 12 wetland parks across the island.
To respect nature, we set up safe zones and avoid harming plants and animals' homes.
These parks bring many benefits. To humans, they are a nice place to walk and relax and a chance to learn about nature. As for animals, they offer a safe home for water birds, fish and wetland plants, which helps protect wetland wildlife.
If you come to Hainan, I'd love to show you around these parks!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】
电子邮件写作；生态保护话题表达；英语应用文写作
【点评】
这篇范文结构清晰，逻辑连贯，完整覆盖了题目要求的所有要点，语言简洁地道，符合电子邮件友好自然的语气。既准确介绍了海南湿地公园的生态保护举措与价值，又通过邀请增强了书信的互动性，词数也符合题目要求，是一篇优秀的应用文范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
