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五、书面表达。
假如你是肖雅，上周六你们一家人参加了社区志愿者活动。请你根据以下表格内容，给你的笔友Cindy写一封电子邮件，向她介绍这次活动，并谈谈你对志愿者工作的看法。
写作要求：
（1）文中需要包含表格中所提示的全部要点，可适当发挥，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现本人姓名或校名；
（3）词数不少于70个（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Cindy,
How are you? I want to tell you something about my family's volunteer work last Saturday.
Yours,
Xiao Ya
假如你是肖雅，上周六你们一家人参加了社区志愿者活动。请你根据以下表格内容，给你的笔友Cindy写一封电子邮件，向她介绍这次活动，并谈谈你对志愿者工作的看法。
写作要求：
（1）文中需要包含表格中所提示的全部要点，可适当发挥，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现本人姓名或校名；
（3）词数不少于70个（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Cindy,
How are you? I want to tell you something about my family's volunteer work last Saturday.
My grandpa joined in the running race. It was an activity to collect money for the old people. He raised 500 yuan for them. My father helped the old people repair washing machines. My mother is a doctor. She provided free medical services for them. I helped the old people do some cleaning. My little brother chatted with them.
When we did all the work, we felt tired but happy. It's meaningful to be a volunteer. How do you feel about being a volunteer?
Yours,
Xiao Ya
答案
Dear Cindy,
How are you? I want to tell you something about my family's volunteer work last Saturday.
My grandpa joined in the running race. It was an activity to collect money for the old people. He raised 500 yuan for them. My father helped the old people repair washing machines. My mother is a doctor. She provided free medical services for them. I helped the old people do some cleaning. My little brother chatted with them.
When we did all the work, we felt tired but happy. It's meaningful to be a volunteer. How do you feel about being a volunteer?
Yours,
Xiao Ya
How are you? I want to tell you something about my family's volunteer work last Saturday.
My grandpa joined in the running race. It was an activity to collect money for the old people. He raised 500 yuan for them. My father helped the old people repair washing machines. My mother is a doctor. She provided free medical services for them. I helped the old people do some cleaning. My little brother chatted with them.
When we did all the work, we felt tired but happy. It's meaningful to be a volunteer. How do you feel about being a volunteer?
Yours,
Xiao Ya
解析
【分析】
首先，我们要明确这是一篇给笔友的电子邮件写作任务，需要介绍上周六全家的社区志愿活动并谈谈对志愿工作的看法。解题思路如下：
1. 先根据表格内容，逐一介绍每位家庭成员的志愿活动，确保不遗漏任何要点，注意使用一般过去时描述上周六的活动；
2. 在介绍完所有活动后，添加自己参与活动后的感受，比如疲惫但开心，再阐述对志愿工作的看法，体现活动的意义；
3. 最后可以礼貌询问笔友对志愿工作的看法，使邮件内容更完整自然。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，先描述祖父的活动：点明跑步比赛的目的是为老人筹款，对应表格信息，用一般过去时准确表述活动内容；
2. 接着依次介绍爸爸、妈妈、自己和弟弟的活动：准确涵盖表格里的所有志愿内容，补充妈妈的医生身份让内容更合理，符合逻辑；
3. 最后表达感受和看法：既抒发了参与活动后的真实感受，也点明志愿工作的意义，还通过询问笔友的看法呼应书信的交流属性，让邮件内容更完整。
【答案】
Dear Cindy,
How are you? I want to tell you something about my family's volunteer work last Saturday.
My grandpa joined in the running race. It was an activity to collect money for the old people. He raised 500 yuan for them. My father helped the old people repair washing machines. My mother is a doctor. She provided free medical services for them. I helped the old people do some cleaning. My little brother chatted with them.
When we did all the work, we felt tired but happy. It's meaningful to be a volunteer. How do you feel about being a volunteer?
Yours,
Xiao Ya
【知识点】
电子邮件写作；一般过去时运用；志愿话题表达
【点评】
这篇邮件内容完整，涵盖了表格中的所有要点，时态运用准确，语言流畅自然。通过补充妈妈的医生身份让内容更合理，结尾的感受和看法贴合主题，符合书信的交流语境，很好地完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先，我们要明确这是一篇给笔友的电子邮件写作任务，需要介绍上周六全家的社区志愿活动并谈谈对志愿工作的看法。解题思路如下：
1. 先根据表格内容，逐一介绍每位家庭成员的志愿活动，确保不遗漏任何要点，注意使用一般过去时描述上周六的活动；
2. 在介绍完所有活动后，添加自己参与活动后的感受，比如疲惫但开心，再阐述对志愿工作的看法，体现活动的意义；
3. 最后可以礼貌询问笔友对志愿工作的看法，使邮件内容更完整自然。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，先描述祖父的活动：点明跑步比赛的目的是为老人筹款，对应表格信息，用一般过去时准确表述活动内容；
2. 接着依次介绍爸爸、妈妈、自己和弟弟的活动：准确涵盖表格里的所有志愿内容，补充妈妈的医生身份让内容更合理，符合逻辑；
3. 最后表达感受和看法：既抒发了参与活动后的真实感受，也点明志愿工作的意义，还通过询问笔友的看法呼应书信的交流属性，让邮件内容更完整。
【答案】
Dear Cindy,
How are you? I want to tell you something about my family's volunteer work last Saturday.
My grandpa joined in the running race. It was an activity to collect money for the old people. He raised 500 yuan for them. My father helped the old people repair washing machines. My mother is a doctor. She provided free medical services for them. I helped the old people do some cleaning. My little brother chatted with them.
When we did all the work, we felt tired but happy. It's meaningful to be a volunteer. How do you feel about being a volunteer?
Yours,
Xiao Ya
【知识点】
电子邮件写作；一般过去时运用；志愿话题表达
【点评】
这篇邮件内容完整，涵盖了表格中的所有要点，时态运用准确，语言流畅自然。通过补充妈妈的医生身份让内容更合理，结尾的感受和看法贴合主题，符合书信的交流语境，很好地完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.7
