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五、书面表达
假如你是李明，你们学校附近的一条河最近污染严重，对此你感到很难过。请你根据表格内容，谈谈河流污染的现状及治理的办法。
写作要求：
(1) 文中需要包含表格中所提示的全部要点，可适当发挥，书写规范；
(2) 文中不得出现本人姓名或校名；
(3) 词数 70 个左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：badly 严重地；dead 死的；terrible 糟糕的；organize 组织
The river near our school is polluted badly these days.
I hope everyone can work together to make a world of green mountains and clear waters.
假如你是李明，你们学校附近的一条河最近污染严重，对此你感到很难过。请你根据表格内容，谈谈河流污染的现状及治理的办法。
写作要求：
(1) 文中需要包含表格中所提示的全部要点，可适当发挥，书写规范；
(2) 文中不得出现本人姓名或校名；
(3) 词数 70 个左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：badly 严重地；dead 死的；terrible 糟糕的；organize 组织
The river near our school is polluted badly these days.
People throw rubbish and waste into the river every day. Factories near the river are pouring waste water into the river. The river becomes dirty and the fish in it are dead. That's terrible.
I think we must do something to stop the pollution. We should ask people to stop littering in the river and clean it up. And we can write to the government about the problem. The government should organize people to collect the rubbish in the river.
I think we must do something to stop the pollution. We should ask people to stop littering in the river and clean it up. And we can write to the government about the problem. The government should organize people to collect the rubbish in the river.
I hope everyone can work together to make a world of green mountains and clear waters.
答案
The river near our school is polluted badly these days. People throw rubbish and waste into the river every day. Factories near the river are pouring waste water into the river. The river becomes dirty and the fish in it are dead. That's terrible.
I think we must do something to stop the pollution. We should ask people to stop littering in the river and clean it up. And we can write to the government about the problem. The government should organize people to collect the rubbish in the river.
I hope everyone can work together to make a world of green mountains and clear waters.
I think we must do something to stop the pollution. We should ask people to stop littering in the river and clean it up. And we can write to the government about the problem. The government should organize people to collect the rubbish in the river.
I hope everyone can work together to make a world of green mountains and clear waters.
解析
【分析】
首先，我们要明确写作任务：以李明的身份，围绕学校附近河流污染的现状和治理办法展开写作，需涵盖表格全部要点，同时控制词数。解题思路如下：
1. 先结合表格里的污染原因，补充描述污染后的现状，让内容更具体，增强感染力；
2. 再根据表格里的应对措施，适当拓展合理的内容，让建议更完整；
3. 最后衔接给定的开头和结尾，保证语句连贯，符合写作要求，注意不能出现真实姓名和校名。
【解析】
1. 描述污染现状与原因：先点明河流被严重污染，接着列举表格里的两个污染原因——人们往河里扔垃圾、工厂排放废水，再补充现状“河水变脏，河里的鱼死了”，使内容更真实具体；
2. 提出解决措施：先表明要采取行动，然后落实表格里的两个建议——呼吁人们停止往河里扔垃圾、给政府写信反映问题，再合理拓展“清理河流”“政府组织人员收垃圾”等内容，让建议更可行；
3. 衔接开头和结尾，确保全文逻辑连贯，语言通顺，符合词数要求。
【答案】
The river near our school is polluted badly these days. People throw rubbish and waste into the river every day. Factories near the river are pouring waste water into the river. The river becomes dirty and the fish in it are dead. That's terrible.
I think we must do something to stop the pollution. We should ask people to stop littering in the river and clean it up. And we can write to the government about the problem. The government should organize people to collect the rubbish in the river.
I hope everyone can work together to make a world of green mountains and clear waters.
【知识点】
环保类书面表达；提建议句型运用；英语语句连贯表达
【点评】
本文紧扣写作要求，完整涵盖表格要点，同时合理拓展了污染现状和治理措施，内容充实，逻辑清晰，语句通顺自然，很好地表达了对河流污染问题的关注，符合词数和格式要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先，我们要明确写作任务：以李明的身份，围绕学校附近河流污染的现状和治理办法展开写作，需涵盖表格全部要点，同时控制词数。解题思路如下：
1. 先结合表格里的污染原因，补充描述污染后的现状，让内容更具体，增强感染力；
2. 再根据表格里的应对措施，适当拓展合理的内容，让建议更完整；
3. 最后衔接给定的开头和结尾，保证语句连贯，符合写作要求，注意不能出现真实姓名和校名。
【解析】
1. 描述污染现状与原因：先点明河流被严重污染，接着列举表格里的两个污染原因——人们往河里扔垃圾、工厂排放废水，再补充现状“河水变脏，河里的鱼死了”，使内容更真实具体；
2. 提出解决措施：先表明要采取行动，然后落实表格里的两个建议——呼吁人们停止往河里扔垃圾、给政府写信反映问题，再合理拓展“清理河流”“政府组织人员收垃圾”等内容，让建议更可行；
3. 衔接开头和结尾，确保全文逻辑连贯，语言通顺，符合词数要求。
【答案】
The river near our school is polluted badly these days. People throw rubbish and waste into the river every day. Factories near the river are pouring waste water into the river. The river becomes dirty and the fish in it are dead. That's terrible.
I think we must do something to stop the pollution. We should ask people to stop littering in the river and clean it up. And we can write to the government about the problem. The government should organize people to collect the rubbish in the river.
I hope everyone can work together to make a world of green mountains and clear waters.
【知识点】
环保类书面表达；提建议句型运用；英语语句连贯表达
【点评】
本文紧扣写作要求，完整涵盖表格要点，同时合理拓展了污染现状和治理措施，内容充实，逻辑清晰，语句通顺自然，很好地表达了对河流污染问题的关注，符合词数和格式要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
