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76. 你校英语报正就 "How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?" 开展征文活动。请你根据下列要点提示写一篇征文。
要求: (1) 短文应包括所给内容要点,并谈谈
(2) 词数 80 左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?
Recently, we discussed how to make our spare time more meaningful.
76. 你校英语报正就 "How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?" 开展征文活动。请你根据下列要点提示写一篇征文。
要求: (1) 短文应包括所给内容要点,并谈谈
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点
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获;(2) 词数 80 左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?
Recently, we discussed how to make our spare time more meaningful.
My schoolmates gave the following suggestions.
First, it's good to help our parents do some housework to show our love for them. Second, we can know more about the world by reading different kinds of books. Third, it is a good chance for us to take up a new hobby. We can get close to nature like going on a trip to the mountains and it can help us relax.
In my opinion, we can do some sports to make us stronger and healthier. What's more, we can take an active part in some social activities as volunteers to help those in need. In this way, our spare time will be more meaningful.
In a word, let's make full use of our spare time and improve our qualities.
答案
76. One possible version:
How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?
Recently, we discussed how to make our spare time more meaningful. My schoolmates gave the following suggestions.
First, it's good to help our parents do some housework to show our love for them. Second, we can know more about the world by reading different kinds of books. Third, it is a good chance for us to take up a new hobby. We can get close to nature like going on a trip to the mountains and it can help us relax. In my opinion, we can do some sports to make us stronger and healthier. What's more, we can take an active part in some social activities as volunteers to help those in need. In this way, our spare time will be more meaningful.
In a word, let's make full use of our spare time and improve our qualities.
How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?
Recently, we discussed how to make our spare time more meaningful. My schoolmates gave the following suggestions.
First, it's good to help our parents do some housework to show our love for them. Second, we can know more about the world by reading different kinds of books. Third, it is a good chance for us to take up a new hobby. We can get close to nature like going on a trip to the mountains and it can help us relax. In my opinion, we can do some sports to make us stronger and healthier. What's more, we can take an active part in some social activities as volunteers to help those in need. In this way, our spare time will be more meaningful.
In a word, let's make full use of our spare time and improve our qualities.
解析
【解析】
1. 承接题目给出的开头，引出同学们的建议，依次涵盖帮助父母做家务、阅读书籍、培养新爱好三个要点，贴合提示内容。
2. 从运动强身健体、参与志愿活动帮助他人两个角度阐述个人观点，满足“至少2点个人观点”的要求，点明此类行为能让课余时间更有意义。
3. 最后用总结句收尾，呼吁充分利用课余时间提升自我，结构完整，符合词数要求。
【答案】
How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?
Recently, we discussed how to make our spare time more meaningful. My schoolmates gave the following suggestions.
First, it's good to help our parents do some housework to show our love for them. Second, we can know more about the world by reading different kinds of books. Third, it is a good chance for us to take up a new hobby. We can get close to nature like going on a trip to the mountains and it can help us relax. In my opinion, we can do some sports to make us stronger and healthier. What's more, we can take an active part in some social activities as volunteers to help those in need. In this way, our spare time will be more meaningful.
In a word, let's make full use of our spare time and improve our qualities.
【知识点】
英语征文写作、日常活动话题表达、观点类语句运用
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖所有提示要点，结构清晰层次分明：先呈现同学建议，再表达个人观点，最后总结升华。语言简洁流畅，句式多样，符合词数要求，能有效传递对课余时间规划的看法，是一篇合格的征文范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
1. 承接题目给出的开头，引出同学们的建议，依次涵盖帮助父母做家务、阅读书籍、培养新爱好三个要点，贴合提示内容。
2. 从运动强身健体、参与志愿活动帮助他人两个角度阐述个人观点，满足“至少2点个人观点”的要求，点明此类行为能让课余时间更有意义。
3. 最后用总结句收尾，呼吁充分利用课余时间提升自我，结构完整，符合词数要求。
【答案】
How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?
Recently, we discussed how to make our spare time more meaningful. My schoolmates gave the following suggestions.
First, it's good to help our parents do some housework to show our love for them. Second, we can know more about the world by reading different kinds of books. Third, it is a good chance for us to take up a new hobby. We can get close to nature like going on a trip to the mountains and it can help us relax. In my opinion, we can do some sports to make us stronger and healthier. What's more, we can take an active part in some social activities as volunteers to help those in need. In this way, our spare time will be more meaningful.
In a word, let's make full use of our spare time and improve our qualities.
【知识点】
英语征文写作、日常活动话题表达、观点类语句运用
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖所有提示要点，结构清晰层次分明：先呈现同学建议，再表达个人观点，最后总结升华。语言简洁流畅，句式多样，符合词数要求，能有效传递对课余时间规划的看法，是一篇合格的征文范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
