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十一、书面表达。(10分)
根据李华的个人信息,以“My friend Li Hua”为题,向大家介绍李华。要求:语句通顺、语法正确、不少于40词。已给出的不计入。
My friend Li Hua
I have a good friend. His name is Li Hua. His birthday
He
根据李华的个人信息,以“My friend Li Hua”为题,向大家介绍李华。要求:语句通顺、语法正确、不少于40词。已给出的不计入。
My friend Li Hua
I have a good friend. His name is Li Hua. His birthday
is on the tenth of December
.He
likes cooking meals and reading books
.He lives on Apple Street，near City Library
He always goes to school by bike because his home is not far from school
His favourite festival is the Spring Festival because his family always get together and have a big dinner. He often reads books in the library and cooks nice Chinese food at weekends
答案
示例：
My friend Li Hua
I have a good friend. His name
is Li Hua. His birthday is on the
tenth of December. He likes
cooking meals and reading books.
He lives on Apple Street，near City
Library. He always goes to school
by bike because his home is not far
from school. His favourite festival
is the Spring Festival because his
family always get together and have
a big dinner. He often reads books
in the library and cooks nice
Chinese food at weekends.
My friend Li Hua
I have a good friend. His name
is Li Hua. His birthday is on the
tenth of December. He likes
cooking meals and reading books.
He lives on Apple Street，near City
Library. He always goes to school
by bike because his home is not far
from school. His favourite festival
is the Spring Festival because his
family always get together and have
a big dinner. He often reads books
in the library and cooks nice
Chinese food at weekends.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇介绍朋友的英语书面表达题，解题时可按以下思路思考：
1. 先梳理题目给出的所有信息点：生日（Dec.10th）、爱好（cooking, reading）、地址（near City Library）、上学方式（by bike）、最喜欢的节日（Spring Festival）及原因、周末活动（cook Chinese food, read in library），确保写作时不遗漏信息。
2. 确定文章时态：因为是介绍个人日常信息和习惯，所以统一使用一般现在时。
3. 衔接开头给出的内容，按照“基本信息-居住与上学-喜好-周末生活”的逻辑顺序组织内容，让文章条理清晰；同时补充节日的合理原因（比如家人团聚、吃大餐等），使内容更完整。
4. 注意英语表达的正确性，比如日期的写法、动词的第三人称单数形式，保证语句通顺连贯。
【解析】
1. 衔接开头：根据给出的开头“His birthday ____”，补充生日的正确表达：“is on the tenth of December”，注意日期前要加介词on。
2. 表达爱好：主语是He，动词like用第三人称单数形式likes，写成“He likes cooking meals and reading books”。
3. 介绍居住地址：可以丰富内容，写成“He lives on Apple Street，near City Library”，清晰说明居住位置。
4. 说明上学方式：结合地址补充合理原因，用“He always goes to school by bike because his home is not far from school”，用because衔接原因，使句子逻辑更顺畅。
5. 描述最喜欢的节日及原因：先点明节日“His favourite festival is the Spring Festival”，再补充合理原因“because his family always get together and have a big dinner”，让内容更饱满。
6. 介绍周末活动：写成“He often reads books in the library and cooks nice Chinese food at weekends”，注意动词的第三人称单数形式。
7. 将以上内容连贯整合，形成一篇完整、通顺的短文。
【答案】
My friend Li Hua
I have a good friend. His name is Li Hua. His birthday is on the tenth of December. He likes cooking meals and reading books. He lives on Apple Street，near City Library. He always goes to school by bike because his home is not far from school. His favourite festival is the Spring Festival because his family always get together and have a big dinner. He often reads books in the library and cooks nice Chinese food at weekends.
【知识点】
英语日常写作、一般现在时用法、英语日期表达
【点评】
本题围绕“介绍朋友”的日常话题展开，重点考察学生对给定信息的整合能力和英语基础表达能力，写作时需注意时态统一，合理补充细节让内容更连贯自然，同时要准确运用基础词汇和句型。
【难度系数】
0.8
这是一篇介绍朋友的英语书面表达题，解题时可按以下思路思考：
1. 先梳理题目给出的所有信息点：生日（Dec.10th）、爱好（cooking, reading）、地址（near City Library）、上学方式（by bike）、最喜欢的节日（Spring Festival）及原因、周末活动（cook Chinese food, read in library），确保写作时不遗漏信息。
2. 确定文章时态：因为是介绍个人日常信息和习惯，所以统一使用一般现在时。
3. 衔接开头给出的内容，按照“基本信息-居住与上学-喜好-周末生活”的逻辑顺序组织内容，让文章条理清晰；同时补充节日的合理原因（比如家人团聚、吃大餐等），使内容更完整。
4. 注意英语表达的正确性，比如日期的写法、动词的第三人称单数形式，保证语句通顺连贯。
【解析】
1. 衔接开头：根据给出的开头“His birthday ____”，补充生日的正确表达：“is on the tenth of December”，注意日期前要加介词on。
2. 表达爱好：主语是He，动词like用第三人称单数形式likes，写成“He likes cooking meals and reading books”。
3. 介绍居住地址：可以丰富内容，写成“He lives on Apple Street，near City Library”，清晰说明居住位置。
4. 说明上学方式：结合地址补充合理原因，用“He always goes to school by bike because his home is not far from school”，用because衔接原因，使句子逻辑更顺畅。
5. 描述最喜欢的节日及原因：先点明节日“His favourite festival is the Spring Festival”，再补充合理原因“because his family always get together and have a big dinner”，让内容更饱满。
6. 介绍周末活动：写成“He often reads books in the library and cooks nice Chinese food at weekends”，注意动词的第三人称单数形式。
7. 将以上内容连贯整合，形成一篇完整、通顺的短文。
【答案】
My friend Li Hua
I have a good friend. His name is Li Hua. His birthday is on the tenth of December. He likes cooking meals and reading books. He lives on Apple Street，near City Library. He always goes to school by bike because his home is not far from school. His favourite festival is the Spring Festival because his family always get together and have a big dinner. He often reads books in the library and cooks nice Chinese food at weekends.
【知识点】
英语日常写作、一般现在时用法、英语日期表达
【点评】
本题围绕“介绍朋友”的日常话题展开，重点考察学生对给定信息的整合能力和英语基础表达能力，写作时需注意时态统一，合理补充细节让内容更连贯自然，同时要准确运用基础词汇和句型。
【难度系数】
0.8
