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七、书面表达。(5分)
这个星期六是Mike的生日，他想在家里举办一个生日聚会，邀请好朋友们来参加。请根据所给的图片提示，写一篇英语小短文。要求：1. 短文内容须包含所提供的全部信息；2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；3. 词数50左右，已给的内容不计入总词数。
______ 
It's Mike's birthday this Saturday. ___
这个星期六是Mike的生日，他想在家里举办一个生日聚会，邀请好朋友们来参加。请根据所给的图片提示，写一篇英语小短文。要求：1. 短文内容须包含所提供的全部信息；2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；3. 词数50左右，已给的内容不计入总词数。
______ It's Mike's birthday this Saturday. ___答案
示例:
It's Mike's birthday this Saturday. He wants
to celebrate it at home by having a party with his
good friends. Everyone is busy preparing for the
special day.
Su Hai and Su Yang are going to prepare
drinks and food for the party. They want to make
sure everyone has something delicious to eat and
drink. Yang Ling is good at making cards, so she
is going to make a birthday card for Mike. She will
write warm wishes inside it. Mike likes robots very
much, so Liu Tao will give him a cool robot as the
birthday present. Wang Bing is going to give Mike
a toy car because they often play with toy cars
together.
Mike is very excited about the party. He can't
wait to enjoy the food, open his presents and have
fun with his friends!
It's Mike's birthday this Saturday. He wants
to celebrate it at home by having a party with his
good friends. Everyone is busy preparing for the
special day.
Su Hai and Su Yang are going to prepare
drinks and food for the party. They want to make
sure everyone has something delicious to eat and
drink. Yang Ling is good at making cards, so she
is going to make a birthday card for Mike. She will
write warm wishes inside it. Mike likes robots very
much, so Liu Tao will give him a cool robot as the
birthday present. Wang Bing is going to give Mike
a toy car because they often play with toy cars
together.
Mike is very excited about the party. He can't
wait to enjoy the food, open his presents and have
fun with his friends!
解析
【分析】
首先，我们需要明确写作主题：Mike周六在家举办生日聚会，邀请好友参加，要涵盖所有图片提示的信息。解题思路如下：
1. 开篇承接已给内容，点明Mike的生日计划——在家办聚会；
2. 分述各位好友为聚会做的准备：根据图片信息，分别介绍Su Hai和Su Yang准备饮食、Yang Ling制作贺卡、Liu Tao送机器人礼物、Wang Bing送玩具车礼物，注意每个朋友的活动要描述清楚；
3. 结尾表达Mike对聚会的期待，使文章结构完整。写作时要使用一般将来时（be going to/will）来描述计划，保证语言通顺、意思连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，引入Mike的聚会计划：
It's Mike's birthday this Saturday. He wants to celebrate it at home by having a party with his good friends. Everyone is busy preparing for the special day.
2. 分述好友的准备：
Su Hai和Su Yang：Su Hai and Su Yang are going to prepare drinks and food for the party. They want to make sure everyone has something delicious to eat and drink.
Yang Ling：Yang Ling is good at making cards, so she is going to make a birthday card for Mike. She will write warm wishes inside it.
Liu Tao：Mike likes robots very much, so Liu Tao will give him a cool robot as the birthday present.
Wang Bing：Wang Bing is going to give Mike a toy car because they often play with toy cars together.
3. 结尾表达Mike的心情：
Mike is very excited about the party. He can't wait to enjoy the food, open his presents and have fun with his friends!
【答案】
It's Mike's birthday this Saturday. He wants
to celebrate it at home by having a party with his
good friends. Everyone is busy preparing for the
special day.
Su Hai and Su Yang are going to prepare
drinks and food for the party. They want to make
sure everyone has something delicious to eat and
drink. Yang Ling is good at making cards, so she
is going to make a birthday card for Mike. She will
write warm wishes inside it. Mike likes robots very
much, so Liu Tao will give him a cool robot as the
birthday present. Wang Bing is going to give Mike
a toy car because they often play with toy cars
together.
Mike is very excited about the party. He can't
wait to enjoy the food, open his presents and have
fun with his friends!
【知识点】
1. 一般将来时运用
2. 生日场景表达
3. 人物活动描述
【点评】
本文结构清晰，开篇点明主题，中间详细描述了各位好友为Mike生日聚会做的准备，结尾表达了Mike的期待心情，内容完整涵盖所有要求信息。语言通顺连贯，正确运用了一般将来时描述计划，符合小学英语书面表达的要求，能有效锻炼学生的场景写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先，我们需要明确写作主题：Mike周六在家举办生日聚会，邀请好友参加，要涵盖所有图片提示的信息。解题思路如下：
1. 开篇承接已给内容，点明Mike的生日计划——在家办聚会；
2. 分述各位好友为聚会做的准备：根据图片信息，分别介绍Su Hai和Su Yang准备饮食、Yang Ling制作贺卡、Liu Tao送机器人礼物、Wang Bing送玩具车礼物，注意每个朋友的活动要描述清楚；
3. 结尾表达Mike对聚会的期待，使文章结构完整。写作时要使用一般将来时（be going to/will）来描述计划，保证语言通顺、意思连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，引入Mike的聚会计划：
It's Mike's birthday this Saturday. He wants to celebrate it at home by having a party with his good friends. Everyone is busy preparing for the special day.
2. 分述好友的准备：
Su Hai和Su Yang：Su Hai and Su Yang are going to prepare drinks and food for the party. They want to make sure everyone has something delicious to eat and drink.
Yang Ling：Yang Ling is good at making cards, so she is going to make a birthday card for Mike. She will write warm wishes inside it.
Liu Tao：Mike likes robots very much, so Liu Tao will give him a cool robot as the birthday present.
Wang Bing：Wang Bing is going to give Mike a toy car because they often play with toy cars together.
3. 结尾表达Mike的心情：
Mike is very excited about the party. He can't wait to enjoy the food, open his presents and have fun with his friends!
【答案】
It's Mike's birthday this Saturday. He wants
to celebrate it at home by having a party with his
good friends. Everyone is busy preparing for the
special day.
Su Hai and Su Yang are going to prepare
drinks and food for the party. They want to make
sure everyone has something delicious to eat and
drink. Yang Ling is good at making cards, so she
is going to make a birthday card for Mike. She will
write warm wishes inside it. Mike likes robots very
much, so Liu Tao will give him a cool robot as the
birthday present. Wang Bing is going to give Mike
a toy car because they often play with toy cars
together.
Mike is very excited about the party. He can't
wait to enjoy the food, open his presents and have
fun with his friends!
【知识点】
1. 一般将来时运用
2. 生日场景表达
3. 人物活动描述
【点评】
本文结构清晰，开篇点明主题，中间详细描述了各位好友为Mike生日聚会做的准备，结尾表达了Mike的期待心情，内容完整涵盖所有要求信息。语言通顺连贯，正确运用了一般将来时描述计划，符合小学英语书面表达的要求，能有效锻炼学生的场景写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
