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五、书面表达。
团队协作在当今社会至关重要，是我们每个人都必须具备的技能。假如你是李华，你们学校校报正在征稿，主题为“合作”，请你用英语写一篇文章并进行投稿。
内容包括：
（1）分享你的团队合作经历；
（2）谈谈你对团队合作的看法。
写作要求：
（1）文中需要包含以上提示信息，可适当发挥，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现本人姓名或校名；
（3）词数 70 个左右。
Teamwork
团队协作在当今社会至关重要，是我们每个人都必须具备的技能。假如你是李华，你们学校校报正在征稿，主题为“合作”，请你用英语写一篇文章并进行投稿。
内容包括：
（1）分享你的团队合作经历；
（2）谈谈你对团队合作的看法。
写作要求：
（1）文中需要包含以上提示信息，可适当发挥，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现本人姓名或校名；
（3）词数 70 个左右。
Teamwork
I had a wonderful basketball match with my teammates last year. We played with Class Nine. In the first half of the game, we made lots of mistakes. Then our teacher held a meeting with us. He asked us to play as a team. After that, we passed the ball better and supported each other. At last, we won the match.
I learned that teamwork is really important from the match. Everyone should work with others.
答案
Teamwork
I had a wonderful basketball match with my teammates last year. We played with Class
Nine. In the first half of the game, we made lots of mistakes. Then our teacher held a meeting
with us. He asked us to play as a team. After that, we passed the ball better and supported each
other. At last, we won the match.
I learned that teamwork is really important from the match. Everyone should work with
others.
I had a wonderful basketball match with my teammates last year. We played with Class
Nine. In the first half of the game, we made lots of mistakes. Then our teacher held a meeting
with us. He asked us to play as a team. After that, we passed the ball better and supported each
other. At last, we won the match.
I learned that teamwork is really important from the match. Everyone should work with
others.
解析
【分析】
首先，明确本次书面表达的核心要求：以“合作”为主题，需包含个人团队合作经历及对合作的看法，词数约70词，且不能出现真实姓名或校名。
思考思路：第一步，选择贴近学生生活的团队合作经历，比如篮球比赛，容易展开且真实可信；第二步，为经历设置起伏，比如前期失误，经指导后团队配合获胜，能自然引出对合作的感悟；第三步，结尾紧扣主题，点明团队合作的重要性，呼应题目要求。写作时注意时态区分，描述过去经历用一般过去时，表达看法用一般现在时，同时控制词数，语言简洁地道。
【解析】
1. 确定文体：采用“记叙文+议论文”的组合，先通过具体经历引出观点，符合题目要求。
2. 内容构思：
开头：直接切入团队合作经历，点明事件（篮球比赛）；
主体：描述比赛的转折——上半场失误，老师指导团队协作，之后队友间配合默契最终获胜；
结尾：从经历中提炼感悟，强调团队合作的重要性。
3. 语言组织：使用简单易懂的词汇和句式，如“made lots of mistakes”“passed the ball better and supported each other”等，符合初中生英语水平，同时注意时态正确，避免语法错误，严格遵守词数要求。
【答案】
Teamwork
I had a wonderful basketball match with my teammates last year. We played with Class Nine. In the first half of the game, we made lots of mistakes. Then our teacher held a meeting with us. He asked us to play as a team. After that, we passed the ball better and supported each other. At last, we won the match.
I learned that teamwork is really important from the match. Everyone should work with others.
【知识点】
记叙文写作；团队合作主题表达；一般过去时运用
【点评】
本文选取学生熟悉的篮球比赛作为团队合作经历，内容真实具体，有起伏有感悟，结构清晰，符合题目要求的内容要点。语言简洁流畅，时态运用准确，词数控制得当，能很好地传达团队合作的重要性，是一篇符合要求的优秀投稿作文。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先，明确本次书面表达的核心要求：以“合作”为主题，需包含个人团队合作经历及对合作的看法，词数约70词，且不能出现真实姓名或校名。
思考思路：第一步，选择贴近学生生活的团队合作经历，比如篮球比赛，容易展开且真实可信；第二步，为经历设置起伏，比如前期失误，经指导后团队配合获胜，能自然引出对合作的感悟；第三步，结尾紧扣主题，点明团队合作的重要性，呼应题目要求。写作时注意时态区分，描述过去经历用一般过去时，表达看法用一般现在时，同时控制词数，语言简洁地道。
【解析】
1. 确定文体：采用“记叙文+议论文”的组合，先通过具体经历引出观点，符合题目要求。
2. 内容构思：
开头：直接切入团队合作经历，点明事件（篮球比赛）；
主体：描述比赛的转折——上半场失误，老师指导团队协作，之后队友间配合默契最终获胜；
结尾：从经历中提炼感悟，强调团队合作的重要性。
3. 语言组织：使用简单易懂的词汇和句式，如“made lots of mistakes”“passed the ball better and supported each other”等，符合初中生英语水平，同时注意时态正确，避免语法错误，严格遵守词数要求。
【答案】
Teamwork
I had a wonderful basketball match with my teammates last year. We played with Class Nine. In the first half of the game, we made lots of mistakes. Then our teacher held a meeting with us. He asked us to play as a team. After that, we passed the ball better and supported each other. At last, we won the match.
I learned that teamwork is really important from the match. Everyone should work with others.
【知识点】
记叙文写作；团队合作主题表达；一般过去时运用
【点评】
本文选取学生熟悉的篮球比赛作为团队合作经历，内容真实具体，有起伏有感悟，结构清晰，符合题目要求的内容要点。语言简洁流畅，时态运用准确，词数控制得当，能很好地传达团队合作的重要性，是一篇符合要求的优秀投稿作文。
【难度系数】
0.7
