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五、书面表达。
根据图片提示,以"Cinderella"为题,用第三人称写一写灰姑娘和王子的故事。要求:语句通顺、语法正确、不少于40词。已给出的不记入。
Cinderella
There is a party at the prince's house.
根据图片提示,以"Cinderella"为题,用第三人称写一写灰姑娘和王子的故事。要求:语句通顺、语法正确、不少于40词。已给出的不记入。
Cinderella
There is a party at the prince's house.
All the girls can go, but
Cinderella can't. She has to help her
sisters put on nice dresses and help
with housework. And she doesn't
have any nice clothes or shoes. She is
very sad. Finally, a fairy helps her.
She goes to the party and dances with
the prince. She has a good time.
Cinderella can't. She has to help her
sisters put on nice dresses and help
with housework. And she doesn't
have any nice clothes or shoes. She is
very sad. Finally, a fairy helps her.
She goes to the party and dances with
the prince. She has a good time.
答案
五、示例：
Cinderella
There is a party at the prince's
house. All the girls can go, but
Cinderella can't. She has to help her
sisters put on nice dresses and help
with housework. And she doesn't
have any nice clothes or shoes. She is
very sad. Finally, a fairy helps her.
She goes to the party and dances with
the prince. She has a good time.
Cinderella
There is a party at the prince's
house. All the girls can go, but
Cinderella can't. She has to help her
sisters put on nice dresses and help
with housework. And she doesn't
have any nice clothes or shoes. She is
very sad. Finally, a fairy helps her.
She goes to the party and dances with
the prince. She has a good time.
解析
【分析】
首先，我们需要结合图片梳理灰姑娘故事的发展脉络：第一步，明确舞会背景下灰姑娘的困境（无法参加舞会，要做家务、没有漂亮服饰）；第二步，根据第二张图，加入仙女帮助灰姑娘的情节；第三步，结合第三张图，写灰姑娘乘坐马车前往舞会；第四步，根据第四张图，描述灰姑娘和王子跳舞的场景。写作时要使用第三人称，遵循故事的逻辑顺序，保证语句通顺、语法正确，满足词数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头给出的舞会背景，先点明灰姑娘不能参加舞会的情况：All the girls can go, but Cinderella can't.
2. 解释原因，结合第一张图的做家务场景：She has to help her sisters put on nice dresses and help with housework. And she doesn't have any nice clothes or shoes. She is very sad.
3. 引入第二张图的仙女帮助情节：Finally, a fairy helps her.
4. 结合第三、四张图，写灰姑娘参加舞会的经历：She goes to the party and dances with the prince. She has a good time.
将这些内容连贯组织，形成完整的故事。
【答案】
Cinderella
There is a party at the prince's
house. All the girls can go, but
Cinderella can't. She has to help her
sisters put on nice dresses and help
with housework. And she doesn't
have any nice clothes or shoes. She is
very sad. Finally, a fairy helps her.
She goes to the party and dances with
the prince. She has a good time.
【知识点】
记叙文写作，一般现在时运用，故事类写作
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语叙事能力，要求结合经典童话《灰姑娘》的情节与图片提示完成写作。既需要学生掌握故事的逻辑脉络，也考查学生对一般现在时的运用以及语句组织能力，能有效锻炼学生的书面表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先，我们需要结合图片梳理灰姑娘故事的发展脉络：第一步，明确舞会背景下灰姑娘的困境（无法参加舞会，要做家务、没有漂亮服饰）；第二步，根据第二张图，加入仙女帮助灰姑娘的情节；第三步，结合第三张图，写灰姑娘乘坐马车前往舞会；第四步，根据第四张图，描述灰姑娘和王子跳舞的场景。写作时要使用第三人称，遵循故事的逻辑顺序，保证语句通顺、语法正确，满足词数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头给出的舞会背景，先点明灰姑娘不能参加舞会的情况：All the girls can go, but Cinderella can't.
2. 解释原因，结合第一张图的做家务场景：She has to help her sisters put on nice dresses and help with housework. And she doesn't have any nice clothes or shoes. She is very sad.
3. 引入第二张图的仙女帮助情节：Finally, a fairy helps her.
4. 结合第三、四张图，写灰姑娘参加舞会的经历：She goes to the party and dances with the prince. She has a good time.
将这些内容连贯组织，形成完整的故事。
【答案】
Cinderella
There is a party at the prince's
house. All the girls can go, but
Cinderella can't. She has to help her
sisters put on nice dresses and help
with housework. And she doesn't
have any nice clothes or shoes. She is
very sad. Finally, a fairy helps her.
She goes to the party and dances with
the prince. She has a good time.
【知识点】
记叙文写作，一般现在时运用，故事类写作
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语叙事能力，要求结合经典童话《灰姑娘》的情节与图片提示完成写作。既需要学生掌握故事的逻辑脉络，也考查学生对一般现在时的运用以及语句组织能力，能有效锻炼学生的书面表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
