Ⅶ. 书面表达。
假设你们学校上周组织学生去西夏陵博物馆做志愿活动,你和你的同学们分成几个小组为博物馆做了许多志愿者工作。请结合下面图示信息,用英语写一篇文章描述你们所参与的志愿者活动和你的心得体会。
要求:
1. 包括所有的写作要点,可适当发挥。
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
3. 词数 80 个左右。
【写作指导】
一、审题
体裁:
时态:
人称:
二、思路点拨

三、句型提示
1. 上周我们去了西夏陵博物馆做志愿活动。
Last week, we
2. 当我们到那里后,我们被分成了几个小组。
When we got there, we were
3. 一些小组捡博物馆周围的垃圾,其他小组引导游客并告知安全规则。
Some groups
4. 经过一天的工作,我们虽然有点累,但是我们也学习到了微小的改变能带来巨大的影响。
【写作练习】
Last week, we volunteered at Xixia Imperial Tombs Museum.
假设你们学校上周组织学生去西夏陵博物馆做志愿活动,你和你的同学们分成几个小组为博物馆做了许多志愿者工作。请结合下面图示信息,用英语写一篇文章描述你们所参与的志愿者活动和你的心得体会。
要求:
1. 包括所有的写作要点,可适当发挥。
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
3. 词数 80 个左右。
【写作指导】
一、审题
体裁:
时态:
人称:
二、思路点拨
三、句型提示
1. 上周我们去了西夏陵博物馆做志愿活动。
Last week, we
volunteered
at Xixia Imperial Tombs Museum.2. 当我们到那里后,我们被分成了几个小组。
When we got there, we were
divided
into groups and started our tasks.3. 一些小组捡博物馆周围的垃圾,其他小组引导游客并告知安全规则。
Some groups
picked up
litter around the museum, others gave directions
to the visitors and tell them simple safety rules.4. 经过一天的工作,我们虽然有点累,但是我们也学习到了微小的改变能带来巨大的影响。
Though/Although
we felt a bit tired after a day's work, we've learned that small actions can really make a big difference
.【写作练习】
Last week, we volunteered at Xixia Imperial Tombs Museum.
答案
Ⅶ.三、句型提示 1. volunteered 2. divided 3. picked up, gave directions 4. Though/Although, make a big difference 【参考范文】 Last week, we volunteered at Xixia Imperial Tombs Museum. When we got there, we were divided into groups and started our tasks. Some groups picked up litter around the museum, others gave directions to the visitors and tell them simple safety rules. I joined the culture group. We told visitors short stories about Xixia history and introduced the old relics to them. The visitors listened happily. Though we felt a bit tired after a day's work, we've learned that small actions can really make a big difference. Last week, we volunteered at Xixia Imperial Tombs Museum. When we got there, we were divided into groups and started our tasks. Some groups picked up litter around the museum, others gave directions to the visitors and told them simple safety rules. I joined the culture group. We told visitors short stories about Xixia history and introduced the old relics to them. The visitors listened happily. Though we felt a bit tired after a day's work, we've learned that small actions can really make a big difference
解析
【解析】
1. 审题:体裁为记叙文,时态以一般过去时为主,人称用第一人称。
2. 写作思路:按照开头-正文-结尾的结构展开。开头点明志愿活动的地点和参与人员;正文分小组介绍具体的志愿工作,如捡垃圾、引导游客、讲解西夏历史等;结尾总结参与志愿活动的心得体会。
3. 结合句型提示补充细节完成作文,注意语法正确,符合词数要求。
【答案】
Last week, we volunteered at Xixia Imperial Tombs Museum. When we got there, we were divided into groups and started our tasks. Some groups picked up litter around the museum, others gave directions to the visitors and told them simple safety rules. I joined the culture group. We told visitors short stories about Xixia history and introduced the old relics to them. The visitors listened happily. Though we felt a bit tired after a day's work, we've learned that small actions can really make a big difference.
【知识点】
一般过去时运用、志愿活动表达、让步状语从句
【点评】
本文结构清晰,紧扣写作要点,内容完整,语言表达流畅自然,准确运用了相关句型和词汇,很好地传达了志愿活动的过程与心得体会,符合词数要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
1. 审题:体裁为记叙文,时态以一般过去时为主,人称用第一人称。
2. 写作思路:按照开头-正文-结尾的结构展开。开头点明志愿活动的地点和参与人员;正文分小组介绍具体的志愿工作,如捡垃圾、引导游客、讲解西夏历史等;结尾总结参与志愿活动的心得体会。
3. 结合句型提示补充细节完成作文,注意语法正确,符合词数要求。
【答案】
Last week, we volunteered at Xixia Imperial Tombs Museum. When we got there, we were divided into groups and started our tasks. Some groups picked up litter around the museum, others gave directions to the visitors and told them simple safety rules. I joined the culture group. We told visitors short stories about Xixia history and introduced the old relics to them. The visitors listened happily. Though we felt a bit tired after a day's work, we've learned that small actions can really make a big difference.
【知识点】
一般过去时运用、志愿活动表达、让步状语从句
【点评】
本文结构清晰,紧扣写作要点,内容完整,语言表达流畅自然,准确运用了相关句型和词汇,很好地传达了志愿活动的过程与心得体会,符合词数要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
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