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六(2025·徐州邳州市期中)书面表达。(9分)
你认为一个好学生应该具备哪些条件呢？请围绕这个话题，并结合所给的思维导图，以 “How to be a good student”为题写一篇英语小短文，从生活、饮食、学习、交通等方面写一写你的看法。要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范，不少于6句话。
提示：should/shouldn't，must/mustn't，get up early，finish homework on time，follow the traffic rules，eat a little meat
How to be a good student
Everyone wants to be a good student.
A good student should ______________
你认为一个好学生应该具备哪些条件呢？请围绕这个话题，并结合所给的思维导图，以 “How to be a good student”为题写一篇英语小短文，从生活、饮食、学习、交通等方面写一写你的看法。要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范，不少于6句话。
提示：should/shouldn't，must/mustn't，get up early，finish homework on time，follow the traffic rules，eat a little meat
How to be a good student
Everyone wants to be a good student.
A good student should ______________
答案
示例： How to be a good student
Everyone wants to be a good student. A good
student should follow these rules:
First, we should get up early and get to school
on time. In class, we must listen carefully to
teachers and finish homework on time. After
school, we should take part in sports to stay
healthy. For meals, we should eat a little meat and
more vegetables to keep our bodies strong. On the
road, we must follow the traffic rules for safety.
We must always cross the road at zebra crossings
and wait for the green light. Never play on the road
or run between cars. We shouldn't speak loudly,
litter or jump the queue in public.
If we do these things, we will be good
students!
Everyone wants to be a good student. A good
student should follow these rules:
First, we should get up early and get to school
on time. In class, we must listen carefully to
teachers and finish homework on time. After
school, we should take part in sports to stay
healthy. For meals, we should eat a little meat and
more vegetables to keep our bodies strong. On the
road, we must follow the traffic rules for safety.
We must always cross the road at zebra crossings
and wait for the green light. Never play on the road
or run between cars. We shouldn't speak loudly,
litter or jump the queue in public.
If we do these things, we will be good
students!
解析
【分析】
首先，我们要明确这篇书面表达的主题是“How to be a good student”，需结合思维导图里的饮食、学习习惯、交通规则等方向，同时运用提示的should/shouldn't、must/mustn't等情态动词及相关短语来写作。
解题思路：
1. 开头点题，用题目给出的句子引出话题，说明好学生需要遵守相关规则；
2. 分模块展开阐述：先写学习层面，比如早起按时到校、课堂认真听讲、按时完成作业；接着写饮食方面，结合提示的eat a little meat，搭配多吃蔬菜的内容来体现健康饮食；然后是交通规则部分，要提及走斑马线、等绿灯，不能在道路上玩耍等内容；还可以补充公共场合的礼仪，比如不大声喧哗、不插队；
3. 结尾总结，说明做到这些就能成为好学生，确保文章结构完整，语句通顺，满足不少于6句话的要求。
【解析】
1. 开头：用题目给出的“Everyone wants to be a good student.”引出话题，接着点明好学生要遵守规则："A good student should follow these rules:"
2. 学习习惯模块：描述日常学习行为，“First, we should get up early and get to school on time. In class, we must listen carefully to teachers and finish homework on time. After school, we should take part in sports to stay healthy.”
3. 饮食模块：结合提示词，写出健康饮食的要求：“For meals, we should eat a little meat and more vegetables to keep our bodies strong.”
4. 交通规则模块：阐述路上的行为规范，“On the road, we must follow the traffic rules for safety. We must always cross the road at zebra crossings and wait for the green light. Never play on the road or run between cars.”
5. 公共礼仪补充：写出公共场合的行为准则，“We shouldn't speak loudly, litter or jump the queue in public.”
6. 结尾总结：“If we do these things, we will be good students!”
该结构清晰，覆盖了所有要求的方面，语句连贯，符合写作要求。
【答案】
How to be a good student
Everyone wants to be a good student. A good student should follow these rules:
First, we should get up early and get to school on time. In class, we must listen carefully to teachers and finish homework on time. After school, we should take part in sports to stay healthy. For meals, we should eat a little meat and more vegetables to keep our bodies strong. On the road, we must follow the traffic rules for safety. We must always cross the road at zebra crossings and wait for the green light. Never play on the road or run between cars. We shouldn't speak loudly, litter or jump the queue in public.
If we do these things, we will be good students!
【知识点】
情态动词用法、英语写作结构、日常行为表达
【点评】
这篇范文结构清晰，从学习、饮食、交通、公共礼仪多个角度展开，全面覆盖了题目要求的内容；合理运用了should/must等情态动词，语句通顺连贯，符合英语书面表达的规范，能够很好地完成写作任务，给学生提供了清晰的写作范例。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先，我们要明确这篇书面表达的主题是“How to be a good student”，需结合思维导图里的饮食、学习习惯、交通规则等方向，同时运用提示的should/shouldn't、must/mustn't等情态动词及相关短语来写作。
解题思路：
1. 开头点题，用题目给出的句子引出话题，说明好学生需要遵守相关规则；
2. 分模块展开阐述：先写学习层面，比如早起按时到校、课堂认真听讲、按时完成作业；接着写饮食方面，结合提示的eat a little meat，搭配多吃蔬菜的内容来体现健康饮食；然后是交通规则部分，要提及走斑马线、等绿灯，不能在道路上玩耍等内容；还可以补充公共场合的礼仪，比如不大声喧哗、不插队；
3. 结尾总结，说明做到这些就能成为好学生，确保文章结构完整，语句通顺，满足不少于6句话的要求。
【解析】
1. 开头：用题目给出的“Everyone wants to be a good student.”引出话题，接着点明好学生要遵守规则："A good student should follow these rules:"
2. 学习习惯模块：描述日常学习行为，“First, we should get up early and get to school on time. In class, we must listen carefully to teachers and finish homework on time. After school, we should take part in sports to stay healthy.”
3. 饮食模块：结合提示词，写出健康饮食的要求：“For meals, we should eat a little meat and more vegetables to keep our bodies strong.”
4. 交通规则模块：阐述路上的行为规范，“On the road, we must follow the traffic rules for safety. We must always cross the road at zebra crossings and wait for the green light. Never play on the road or run between cars.”
5. 公共礼仪补充：写出公共场合的行为准则，“We shouldn't speak loudly, litter or jump the queue in public.”
6. 结尾总结：“If we do these things, we will be good students!”
该结构清晰，覆盖了所有要求的方面，语句连贯，符合写作要求。
【答案】
How to be a good student
Everyone wants to be a good student. A good student should follow these rules:
First, we should get up early and get to school on time. In class, we must listen carefully to teachers and finish homework on time. After school, we should take part in sports to stay healthy. For meals, we should eat a little meat and more vegetables to keep our bodies strong. On the road, we must follow the traffic rules for safety. We must always cross the road at zebra crossings and wait for the green light. Never play on the road or run between cars. We shouldn't speak loudly, litter or jump the queue in public.
If we do these things, we will be good students!
【知识点】
情态动词用法、英语写作结构、日常行为表达
【点评】
这篇范文结构清晰，从学习、饮食、交通、公共礼仪多个角度展开，全面覆盖了题目要求的内容；合理运用了should/must等情态动词，语句通顺连贯，符合英语书面表达的规范，能够很好地完成写作任务，给学生提供了清晰的写作范例。
【难度系数】
0.6
