五、Think and write. 你平时怎样管理自己的零用钱呢?你有哪些好的做法?请你想一想,写下来和同学们分享一下吧。

答案
First, I put half of my pocket money into my piggy bank every month, and I won't spend the money on useless snacks or toys. Second, I only use the rest money to buy things I really need, such as my favourite story books or new stationery. Third, I will write down every sum of money I spend, so I can clearly know where my money goes. At last, I will save a small part of my money to help the children in poor areas, it's a very meaningful way to use my money.
解析
【分析】
本题要求围绕“如何管理零用钱”展开写作,需结合学生实际梳理合理的管理方法,用清晰结构呈现,同时保证语句通顺、语法正确。首先确定核心是具体管理措施,可从存钱、理性消费、记账、公益使用等角度构思,用连接词让文章条理清晰。
【解析】
1. 明确写作主题:围绕零用钱管理的具体做法展开;
2. 构思内容:选取贴合学生生活的做法,如存钱、买必需品、记账、帮助他人等;
3. 组织语言:用First、Second等连接词串联内容,确保语句通顺、语法正确;
4. 检查内容:保证内容具体,符合题目要求。
【答案】
First, I put half of my pocket money into my piggy bank every month, and I won't spend the money on useless snacks or toys. Second, I only use the rest money to buy things I really need, such as my favourite story books or new stationery. Third, I will write down every sum of money I spend, so I can clearly know where my money goes. At last, I will save a small part of my money to help the children in poor areas, it's a very meaningful way to use my money.
【知识点】
英语写作、话题表达、连词运用
【点评】
该作文条理清晰,从存钱、理性消费、记账、公益使用四个方面给出具体可行的零用钱管理方法,内容贴合学生生活,语言准确通顺,符合英语写作要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求围绕“如何管理零用钱”展开写作,需结合学生实际梳理合理的管理方法,用清晰结构呈现,同时保证语句通顺、语法正确。首先确定核心是具体管理措施,可从存钱、理性消费、记账、公益使用等角度构思,用连接词让文章条理清晰。
【解析】
1. 明确写作主题:围绕零用钱管理的具体做法展开;
2. 构思内容:选取贴合学生生活的做法,如存钱、买必需品、记账、帮助他人等;
3. 组织语言:用First、Second等连接词串联内容,确保语句通顺、语法正确;
4. 检查内容:保证内容具体,符合题目要求。
【答案】
First, I put half of my pocket money into my piggy bank every month, and I won't spend the money on useless snacks or toys. Second, I only use the rest money to buy things I really need, such as my favourite story books or new stationery. Third, I will write down every sum of money I spend, so I can clearly know where my money goes. At last, I will save a small part of my money to help the children in poor areas, it's a very meaningful way to use my money.
【知识点】
英语写作、话题表达、连词运用
【点评】
该作文条理清晰,从存钱、理性消费、记账、公益使用四个方面给出具体可行的零用钱管理方法,内容贴合学生生活,语言准确通顺,符合英语写作要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
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