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本周末，花园社区中心将进行志愿者活动。请你根据以下问题，用英语写一则通知，告知居民此事。
内容要点：1. Who will be volunteers?
2. What can they do?
3. When and where will they meet?
注意事项：1. 通知须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 各要点须展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
3. 词数80左右，通知的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Notice
Our community centre will have a "helping hands" meeting this Sunday.
Garden Community Centre
本周末，花园社区中心将进行志愿者活动。请你根据以下问题，用英语写一则通知，告知居民此事。
内容要点：1. Who will be volunteers?
2. What can they do?
3. When and where will they meet?
注意事项：1. 通知须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 各要点须展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
3. 词数80左右，通知的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Notice
Our community centre will have a "helping hands" meeting this Sunday.
Garden Community Centre
答案
One possible version:
Notice
Our community centre will have a "helping hands" meeting this Sunday. Some college students will come.
They're good at English. They can help your children with their lessons. Some know a lot about computers. So they can repair your broken computers. Others will go to visit the old people in our community and help them clean their houses or do some shopping for them. If you have other problems, they will also be ready to help.
We'll meet at 8:00 a.m. at the community centre. Please come if you need help.
Garden Community Centre
Notice
Our community centre will have a "helping hands" meeting this Sunday. Some college students will come.
They're good at English. They can help your children with their lessons. Some know a lot about computers. So they can repair your broken computers. Others will go to visit the old people in our community and help them clean their houses or do some shopping for them. If you have other problems, they will also be ready to help.
We'll meet at 8:00 a.m. at the community centre. Please come if you need help.
Garden Community Centre
解析
【分析】
首先，我们要明确这是一则社区志愿者活动通知，必须覆盖题目要求的三个核心要点：志愿者身份、服务内容、集合时间地点。
1. 确定志愿者身份：选择大学生较为合适，他们具备多样技能，能提供丰富服务，贴合实际场景。
2. 拓展服务内容：根据大学生的不同特长展开，比如擅长英语的可辅导孩子功课，懂电脑的能维修故障电脑，还有部分志愿者可关爱社区老人，帮忙做家务、采购等，让内容充实合理。
3. 明确集合信息：给出具体的时间（周日上午8点）和地点（社区中心），确保信息清晰明了。
4. 注意控制词数在80左右，语句连贯，保持通知正式且亲切的语气。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，点明志愿者身份：Some college students will come.
2. 分述志愿者的服务内容：
针对擅长英语的志愿者：They're good at English. They can help your children with their lessons.
针对懂电脑的志愿者：Some know a lot about computers. So they can repair your broken computers.
针对关爱老人的志愿者：Others will go to visit the old people in our community and help them clean their houses or do some shopping for them.补充说明可解决其他问题：If you have other problems, they will also be ready to help.
3. 说明集合时间与地点：We'll meet at 8:00 a.m. at the community centre.
4. 发出邀请：Please come if you need help.
5. 附上给定结尾Garden Community Centre。
【答案】
One possible version:
Notice
Our community centre will have a "helping hands" meeting this Sunday. Some college students will come.
They're good at English. They can help your children with their lessons. Some know a lot about computers. So they can repair your broken computers. Others will go to visit the old people in our community and help them clean their houses or do some shopping for them. If you have other problems, they will also be ready to help.
We'll meet at 8:00 a.m. at the community centre. Please come if you need help.
Garden Community Centre
(80 words)
【知识点】
英语通知写作；动词短语运用；社区服务情景表达
【点评】
这篇通知完整覆盖所有内容要点，志愿者身份、服务内容、集合信息清晰明确。内容拓展合理贴合实际，语言简洁通顺，语气亲切自然，词数符合要求，是一篇规范的英语通知范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先，我们要明确这是一则社区志愿者活动通知，必须覆盖题目要求的三个核心要点：志愿者身份、服务内容、集合时间地点。
1. 确定志愿者身份：选择大学生较为合适，他们具备多样技能，能提供丰富服务，贴合实际场景。
2. 拓展服务内容：根据大学生的不同特长展开，比如擅长英语的可辅导孩子功课，懂电脑的能维修故障电脑，还有部分志愿者可关爱社区老人，帮忙做家务、采购等，让内容充实合理。
3. 明确集合信息：给出具体的时间（周日上午8点）和地点（社区中心），确保信息清晰明了。
4. 注意控制词数在80左右，语句连贯，保持通知正式且亲切的语气。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，点明志愿者身份：Some college students will come.
2. 分述志愿者的服务内容：
针对擅长英语的志愿者：They're good at English. They can help your children with their lessons.
针对懂电脑的志愿者：Some know a lot about computers. So they can repair your broken computers.
针对关爱老人的志愿者：Others will go to visit the old people in our community and help them clean their houses or do some shopping for them.补充说明可解决其他问题：If you have other problems, they will also be ready to help.
3. 说明集合时间与地点：We'll meet at 8:00 a.m. at the community centre.
4. 发出邀请：Please come if you need help.
5. 附上给定结尾Garden Community Centre。
【答案】
One possible version:
Notice
Our community centre will have a "helping hands" meeting this Sunday. Some college students will come.
They're good at English. They can help your children with their lessons. Some know a lot about computers. So they can repair your broken computers. Others will go to visit the old people in our community and help them clean their houses or do some shopping for them. If you have other problems, they will also be ready to help.
We'll meet at 8:00 a.m. at the community centre. Please come if you need help.
Garden Community Centre
(80 words)
【知识点】
英语通知写作；动词短语运用；社区服务情景表达
【点评】
这篇通知完整覆盖所有内容要点，志愿者身份、服务内容、集合信息清晰明确。内容拓展合理贴合实际，语言简洁通顺，语气亲切自然，词数符合要求，是一篇规范的英语通知范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
