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四、书面表达
China Daily报社正在举行题为 "Different places, different houses" 的征文活动，请根据下面
思维导图的提示，结合本单元内容，描述不同区域的房子，并陈述一下你的选择和理由。
注意事项:
1. 征文须包括所有内容要点，并把省略部分补充完整，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 词数80左右，征文的题目和首句已给出，不计入总词数。
Different places, different houses
There are different types of houses in different places.
China Daily报社正在举行题为 "Different places, different houses" 的征文活动，请根据下面
思维导图的提示，结合本单元内容，描述不同区域的房子，并陈述一下你的选择和理由。
注意事项:
1. 征文须包括所有内容要点，并把省略部分补充完整，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 词数80左右，征文的题目和首句已给出，不计入总词数。
Different places, different houses
There are different types of houses in different places.
答案
One possible version:
Different places, different houses
There are different types of houses in different places. In a town, many people live in the modern
house with a garden. They can have fun with their friends in the garden. In a village, there are
farmhouses with a yard. People keep hens and collect the eggs in the yard. And in a big city, most
people live in the flat with a nice balcony. They can enjoy the nice view of the city on the balcony.
I like the farmhouse most, because I like keeping animals and playing with them.
Different places, different houses
There are different types of houses in different places. In a town, many people live in the modern
house with a garden. They can have fun with their friends in the garden. In a village, there are
farmhouses with a yard. People keep hens and collect the eggs in the yard. And in a big city, most
people live in the flat with a nice balcony. They can enjoy the nice view of the city on the balcony.
I like the farmhouse most, because I like keeping animals and playing with them.
解析
【分析】
首先，我们需要明确本次书面表达的核心要求：围绕“Different places, different houses”主题，结合思维导图的三个模块，即地点、房屋类型、可进行的活动，补充内容，还要说明自己的选择及理由，词数控制在80左右。
解题思路：
1. 依据思维导图的地点，即城镇、乡村、大城市，对应补充缺失的房屋类型，城镇对应modern house，乡村对应farmhouse，大城市对应flat；
2. 为每种房屋匹配对应的活动：城镇的现代住宅带花园，可以和朋友在花园玩乐；乡村的农舍带院子，能养鸡收蛋；大城市的公寓带阳台，可欣赏城市风景；
3. 最后点明自己最喜爱的房屋类型，并给出合理理由，确保内容完整，语句连贯。
【解析】
1. 开篇已给出，接着分地点展开：
描写城镇：点明城镇的房屋是带花园的现代住宅，补充活动“和朋友在花园玩乐”；
描写乡村：说明乡村的农舍带院子，对应活动“养鸡、收鸡蛋”；
描写大城市：指出大城市的公寓带阳台，对应活动“在阳台欣赏城市美景”；
2. 结尾部分，明确自己最喜欢农舍，给出理由“喜欢养动物并和它们玩耍”；
3. 整体语言简洁，符合词数要求，覆盖所有思维导图要点，逻辑清晰。
【答案】
One possible version:
Different places, different houses
There are different types of houses in different places. In a town, many people live in the modern house with a garden. They can have fun with their friends in the garden. In a village, there are farmhouses with a yard. People keep hens and collect the eggs in the yard. And in a big city, most people live in the flat with a nice balcony. They can enjoy the nice view of the city on the balcony.
I like the farmhouse most, because I like keeping animals and playing with them.
(83 words)
【知识点】
1. 居住场景描述
2. 英语应用文写作
3. 住房类词汇运用
【点评】
本文结构清晰，按照“总-分-总”的逻辑展开，完整覆盖思维导图的所有要点，补充内容合理自然；语言简洁地道，符合征文的写作要求，结尾的个人选择及理由也贴合主题，内容饱满，词数达标。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先，我们需要明确本次书面表达的核心要求：围绕“Different places, different houses”主题，结合思维导图的三个模块，即地点、房屋类型、可进行的活动，补充内容，还要说明自己的选择及理由，词数控制在80左右。
解题思路：
1. 依据思维导图的地点，即城镇、乡村、大城市，对应补充缺失的房屋类型，城镇对应modern house，乡村对应farmhouse，大城市对应flat；
2. 为每种房屋匹配对应的活动：城镇的现代住宅带花园，可以和朋友在花园玩乐；乡村的农舍带院子，能养鸡收蛋；大城市的公寓带阳台，可欣赏城市风景；
3. 最后点明自己最喜爱的房屋类型，并给出合理理由，确保内容完整，语句连贯。
【解析】
1. 开篇已给出，接着分地点展开：
描写城镇：点明城镇的房屋是带花园的现代住宅，补充活动“和朋友在花园玩乐”；
描写乡村：说明乡村的农舍带院子，对应活动“养鸡、收鸡蛋”；
描写大城市：指出大城市的公寓带阳台，对应活动“在阳台欣赏城市美景”；
2. 结尾部分，明确自己最喜欢农舍，给出理由“喜欢养动物并和它们玩耍”；
3. 整体语言简洁，符合词数要求，覆盖所有思维导图要点，逻辑清晰。
【答案】
One possible version:
Different places, different houses
There are different types of houses in different places. In a town, many people live in the modern house with a garden. They can have fun with their friends in the garden. In a village, there are farmhouses with a yard. People keep hens and collect the eggs in the yard. And in a big city, most people live in the flat with a nice balcony. They can enjoy the nice view of the city on the balcony.
I like the farmhouse most, because I like keeping animals and playing with them.
(83 words)
【知识点】
1. 居住场景描述
2. 英语应用文写作
3. 住房类词汇运用
【点评】
本文结构清晰，按照“总-分-总”的逻辑展开，完整覆盖思维导图的所有要点，补充内容合理自然；语言简洁地道，符合征文的写作要求，结尾的个人选择及理由也贴合主题，内容饱满，词数达标。
【难度系数】
0.6
