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请以“My school subjects”为题，写一篇不少于5句话的短文，介绍你在学校学习的科目和最喜欢的科目。
My school subjects
I have many subjects at school.
They are Chinese, English, Maths, PE, Art and Music. I like PE best. It is very fun. What subject do you like best? Why?
小试身手
请以“My school subjects”为题，写一篇不少于5句话的短文，介绍你在学校学习的科目和最喜欢的科目。
My school subjects
I have many subjects at school.
They are Chinese, English, Maths, PE, Art and Music. I like PE best. It is very fun. What subject do you like best? Why?
小试身手
答案
My school subjects
I have many subjects at school.
They are Chinese, Maths, English, PE, Art and Music.
My favourite subject is English.
I can learn many new English songs and talk with my foreign teacher in English class.
It is very interesting.
What subject do you like best?
I have many subjects at school.
They are Chinese, Maths, English, PE, Art and Music.
My favourite subject is English.
I can learn many new English songs and talk with my foreign teacher in English class.
It is very interesting.
What subject do you like best?
解析
【分析】本题要求以“My school subjects”为题写短文，需包含介绍学校所学科目、说明最喜欢的科目及原因，且不少于5句话。解题思路：1. 开篇点明学校有很多科目；2. 列举具体的学校科目；3. 明确自己最喜欢的科目；4. 阐述喜欢该科目的具体原因；5. 结尾可反问对方，确保句子数量达标，内容紧扣主题。
【解析】按照写作要求依次组织语句：1. 开头说明有很多科目：I have many subjects at school.；2. 列举科目：They are Chinese, Maths, English, PE, Art and Music.；3. 说明最喜欢的科目：My favourite subject is English.；4. 阐述喜欢的原因：I can learn many new English songs and talk with my foreign teacher in English class.；5. 补充感受：It is very interesting.；6. 结尾反问：What subject do you like best?，满足不少于5句话的要求，内容完整贴合主题。
【答案】My school subjects
I have many subjects at school.
They are Chinese, Maths, English, PE, Art and Music.
My favourite subject is English.
I can learn many new English songs and talk with my foreign teacher in English class.
It is very interesting.
What subject do you like best?
【知识点】英语话题写作、科目英语表达
【点评】本题考查学生围绕“学校科目”话题的英语写作能力，要求内容完整、语句通顺，是基础英语写作练习，符合小学阶段英语写作的考查方向。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照写作要求依次组织语句：1. 开头说明有很多科目：I have many subjects at school.；2. 列举科目：They are Chinese, Maths, English, PE, Art and Music.；3. 说明最喜欢的科目：My favourite subject is English.；4. 阐述喜欢的原因：I can learn many new English songs and talk with my foreign teacher in English class.；5. 补充感受：It is very interesting.；6. 结尾反问：What subject do you like best?，满足不少于5句话的要求，内容完整贴合主题。
【答案】My school subjects
I have many subjects at school.
They are Chinese, Maths, English, PE, Art and Music.
My favourite subject is English.
I can learn many new English songs and talk with my foreign teacher in English class.
It is very interesting.
What subject do you like best?
【知识点】英语话题写作、科目英语表达
【点评】本题考查学生围绕“学校科目”话题的英语写作能力，要求内容完整、语句通顺，是基础英语写作练习，符合小学阶段英语写作的考查方向。
【难度系数】0.6
请根据下面的表格，以“My school subjects”为题，帮助 May 写一篇短文。
要求:1. 语法、时态正确;2. 内容全面,句子连贯、通顺;3. 书写规范、工整,不少于5句话。
My school subjects
要求:1. 语法、时态正确;2. 内容全面,句子连贯、通顺;3. 书写规范、工整,不少于5句话。
My school subjects
I have many subjects at school.
They are Chinese, Maths, English, Science, PE, Music, Art and IT.
I like Art best.
It is very interesting.
I am good at it.
What subject do you like best?
Why?
答案
（三）写作专项训练
One possible version:
My school subjects
I have many subjects at school. They are Chinese, Maths, English, Science, PE, Music, Art and IT. I like Art best. It is very interesting. I am good at it.
What subject do you like best? Why?
One possible version:
My school subjects
I have many subjects at school. They are Chinese, Maths, English, Science, PE, Music, Art and IT. I like Art best. It is very interesting. I am good at it.
What subject do you like best? Why?
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求：以“My school subjects”为题，结合表格里的8门科目，写一篇不少于5句的短文，需语法正确、内容连贯。解题思路：1. 开篇总述自己有很多学校科目；2. 列出表格中所有科目，保证内容全面；3. 说明最喜欢的科目是Art，阐述喜欢的原因；4. 结尾添加相关问题，让文章完整通顺。
【解析】
按照写作要求分步完成：
1. 开头点明主题，说明自己有很多学校科目；
2. 依次列出表格中的全部科目，覆盖所有内容；
3. 指出最喜欢的科目是Art，说明其有趣的特点，体现个人喜好；
4. 结尾添加相关问题，满足不少于5句的要求，使文章连贯完整。
【答案】
My school subjects
I have many subjects at school. They are Chinese, Maths, English, Science, PE, Music, Art and IT. I like Art best. It is very interesting. I am good at it.
What subject do you like best? Why?
【知识点】
英语写作；学校科目词汇；一般现在时
【点评】
本题是英语基础写作题，考察学生对学校科目的词汇掌握和简单语篇组织能力，要求内容全面、语句通顺，符合初中低年级英语写作的基础要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确题目要求：以“My school subjects”为题，结合表格里的8门科目，写一篇不少于5句的短文，需语法正确、内容连贯。解题思路：1. 开篇总述自己有很多学校科目；2. 列出表格中所有科目，保证内容全面；3. 说明最喜欢的科目是Art，阐述喜欢的原因；4. 结尾添加相关问题，让文章完整通顺。
【解析】
按照写作要求分步完成：
1. 开头点明主题，说明自己有很多学校科目；
2. 依次列出表格中的全部科目，覆盖所有内容；
3. 指出最喜欢的科目是Art，说明其有趣的特点，体现个人喜好；
4. 结尾添加相关问题，满足不少于5句的要求，使文章连贯完整。
【答案】
My school subjects
I have many subjects at school. They are Chinese, Maths, English, Science, PE, Music, Art and IT. I like Art best. It is very interesting. I am good at it.
What subject do you like best? Why?
【知识点】
英语写作；学校科目词汇；一般现在时
【点评】
本题是英语基础写作题，考察学生对学校科目的词汇掌握和简单语篇组织能力，要求内容全面、语句通顺，符合初中低年级英语写作的基础要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
