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四、你也参加了“我的难忘经历”分享活动。请完成以下任务，以分享你的独特经历。
任务一：请回忆你经历过的“难忘的一天”，根据
以下提示填写表格。
任务二：请根据任务一梳理的素材，写一篇短文，讲述你“难忘的一天”。
要求：1. 文中须包含任务一中所有关键信息，按时间顺序叙述；
2. 适当使用表示时间或连接事件的词。
3. 词数为100左右。
任务一：请回忆你经历过的“难忘的一天”，根据
以下提示填写表格。
任务二：请根据任务一梳理的素材，写一篇短文，讲述你“难忘的一天”。
要求：1. 文中须包含任务一中所有关键信息，按时间顺序叙述；
2. 适当使用表示时间或连接事件的词。
3. 词数为100左右。
Last Saturday, Lily and I had a picnic in the city park. Suddenly, the rain and wind came. The wind blew away our food and drinks, and we felt worried. We ran to a shelter and saw an old man's umbrella "flying" in the wind. We helped him caught it. He thanked us with a smile.
As soon as the rain and wind stopped, we cleaned up the rubbish around the shelter. Though our picnic was not successful, we felt happy. I learned that even on a bad day, helping others can make it meaningful.
答案
One possible version
任务一
25. It's a sudden rainstorm during a picnic.
26. Last Saturday, in the city park.
27. My best friend, Lily.
28. We were having a picnic when it started to rain heavily.
The wind blew away our food and drinks.
We ran to a nearby shelter and helped an old man pick up his umbrella.
The rain stopped later, and we cleaned up the rubbish together.
29. We were a little worried, but finally happy.
30. Helping others can make a bad day better.
任务二
Last Saturday, Lily and I had a picnic in the city park. Suddenly, the rain and wind came. The wind blew away our food and drinks, and we felt worried. We ran to a shelter and saw an old man's umbrella "flying" in the wind. We helped him caught it. He thanked us with a smile.
As soon as the rain and wind stopped, we cleaned up the rubbish around the shelter. Though our picnic was not successful, we felt happy. I learned that even on a bad day, helping others can make it meaningful.
任务一
25. It's a sudden rainstorm during a picnic.
26. Last Saturday, in the city park.
27. My best friend, Lily.
28. We were having a picnic when it started to rain heavily.
The wind blew away our food and drinks.
We ran to a nearby shelter and helped an old man pick up his umbrella.
The rain stopped later, and we cleaned up the rubbish together.
29. We were a little worried, but finally happy.
30. Helping others can make a bad day better.
任务二
Last Saturday, Lily and I had a picnic in the city park. Suddenly, the rain and wind came. The wind blew away our food and drinks, and we felt worried. We ran to a shelter and saw an old man's umbrella "flying" in the wind. We helped him caught it. He thanked us with a smile.
As soon as the rain and wind stopped, we cleaned up the rubbish around the shelter. Though our picnic was not successful, we felt happy. I learned that even on a bad day, helping others can make it meaningful.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，分为两个任务：任务一需围绕“难忘的经历”，对应表格中5个问题（难忘的事、时间地点、同行人、关键事件、感受、收获）填写内容，答案需贴合真实经历且逻辑连贯；任务二需将任务一的素材按时间顺序组织成短文，要求包含所有关键信息、使用连接词、词数约100词。解题时，先确定贴近学生生活的难忘经历（如野餐遇突发暴雨），再对应表格问题填写内容，最后将素材按时间顺序串联，加入合适连接词使行文流畅。
【解析】
任务一：根据确定的“野餐遇暴雨”经历，依次填写表格：25. 明确难忘的事为野餐时突发暴雨；26. 确定时间地点为上周六城市公园；27. 明确同行人为好友Lily；28. 梳理3-4个关键事件：野餐时突降大雨、风吹走食物饮料、跑至附近避雨处帮老人捡伞、雨停后一起清理垃圾；29. 明确感受为起初担心但最终开心；30. 明确收获为帮助他人能让糟糕的日子变好。任务二：将表格信息按时间顺序排列，使用suddenly、as soon as、though等连接词串联，确保包含所有关键信息，控制词数在100左右，行文自然流畅。
【答案】
任务一：25. It's a sudden rainstorm during a picnic. 26. Last Saturday, in the city park. 27. My best friend, Lily. 28. We were having a picnic when it started to rain heavily. The wind blew away our food and drinks. We ran to a nearby shelter and helped an old man pick up his umbrella. The rain stopped later, and we cleaned up the rubbish together. 29. We were a little worried, but finally happy. 30. Helping others can make a bad day better. 任务二：Last Saturday, Lily and I had a picnic in the city park. Suddenly, the rain and wind came. The wind blew away our food and drinks, and we felt worried. We ran to a shelter and saw an old man's umbrella "flying" in the wind. We helped him catch it. He thanked us with a smile. As soon as the rain and wind stopped, we cleaned up the rubbish around the shelter. Though our picnic was not successful, we felt happy. I learned that even on a bad day, helping others can make it meaningful.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、叙事类写作、英语信息整理
【点评】
本题结合学生生活实际，考查素材整理与英语叙事写作能力，要求学生先梳理经历再组织成文，注重内容完整性与行文逻辑，难度适中，贴近学生学习与生活场景。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书面表达题，分为两个任务：任务一需围绕“难忘的经历”，对应表格中5个问题（难忘的事、时间地点、同行人、关键事件、感受、收获）填写内容，答案需贴合真实经历且逻辑连贯；任务二需将任务一的素材按时间顺序组织成短文，要求包含所有关键信息、使用连接词、词数约100词。解题时，先确定贴近学生生活的难忘经历（如野餐遇突发暴雨），再对应表格问题填写内容，最后将素材按时间顺序串联，加入合适连接词使行文流畅。
【解析】
任务一：根据确定的“野餐遇暴雨”经历，依次填写表格：25. 明确难忘的事为野餐时突发暴雨；26. 确定时间地点为上周六城市公园；27. 明确同行人为好友Lily；28. 梳理3-4个关键事件：野餐时突降大雨、风吹走食物饮料、跑至附近避雨处帮老人捡伞、雨停后一起清理垃圾；29. 明确感受为起初担心但最终开心；30. 明确收获为帮助他人能让糟糕的日子变好。任务二：将表格信息按时间顺序排列，使用suddenly、as soon as、though等连接词串联，确保包含所有关键信息，控制词数在100左右，行文自然流畅。
【答案】
任务一：25. It's a sudden rainstorm during a picnic. 26. Last Saturday, in the city park. 27. My best friend, Lily. 28. We were having a picnic when it started to rain heavily. The wind blew away our food and drinks. We ran to a nearby shelter and helped an old man pick up his umbrella. The rain stopped later, and we cleaned up the rubbish together. 29. We were a little worried, but finally happy. 30. Helping others can make a bad day better. 任务二：Last Saturday, Lily and I had a picnic in the city park. Suddenly, the rain and wind came. The wind blew away our food and drinks, and we felt worried. We ran to a shelter and saw an old man's umbrella "flying" in the wind. We helped him catch it. He thanked us with a smile. As soon as the rain and wind stopped, we cleaned up the rubbish around the shelter. Though our picnic was not successful, we felt happy. I learned that even on a bad day, helping others can make it meaningful.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、叙事类写作、英语信息整理
【点评】
本题结合学生生活实际，考查素材整理与英语叙事写作能力，要求学生先梳理经历再组织成文，注重内容完整性与行文逻辑，难度适中，贴近学生学习与生活场景。
【难度系数】
0.5
