七、书面表达。(20分)
李强是你班上的一名同学,这学期他变化很多,学习进步很大。请你根据下表中的要点提示,完成一篇英文作文,不要逐字翻译。

注意:1. 短文须包括所有要点,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2. 80词左右。短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Li Qiang is one of my classmates. He has changed a lot this term.
李强是你班上的一名同学,这学期他变化很多,学习进步很大。请你根据下表中的要点提示,完成一篇英文作文,不要逐字翻译。
注意:1. 短文须包括所有要点,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2. 80词左右。短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Li Qiang is one of my classmates. He has changed a lot this term.
答案
One possible version:
Li Qiang is one of my classmates. He has changed a lot this term. He used to spend much time playing computer games. He didn't like reading books. But now he finds reading is fun. He reads for an hour every day. Science books are his favourite because he thinks they are interesting. Usually he borrows books from the library or downloads science stories in his iPad. Why is he interested in reading books? Because he gets fun from reading and he thinks reading can help him get much knowledge and open up a new world to him.
Li Qiang is one of my classmates. He has changed a lot this term. He used to spend much time playing computer games. He didn't like reading books. But now he finds reading is fun. He reads for an hour every day. Science books are his favourite because he thinks they are interesting. Usually he borrows books from the library or downloads science stories in his iPad. Why is he interested in reading books? Because he gets fun from reading and he thinks reading can help him get much knowledge and open up a new world to him.
解析
【分析】首先明确题目要求:根据表格中李强过去、现在的变化及原因,完成一篇80词左右的英文作文,开头已给出。解题思路:1. 确定时态:描述过去用“used to + 动词原形”结构,描述现在用一般现在时;2. 整合表格要点:过去的2个点(花时间打游戏、讨厌看书),现在的3个点(每天读1小时、喜欢科学类书、借书或下载故事),原因的3个点(乐趣、知识、打开新世界);3. 连接语句,使文章连贯,避免逐字翻译,符合字数要求。
【解析】先承接开头,用“used to”引出过去情况:He used to spend much time playing computer games and didn't like reading. 再转折讲现在变化:But now he reads for an hour every day, and science books are his favorite because they are interesting. 补充获取书籍的方式:He usually borrows books from the library or downloads science stories on his iPad. 最后说明原因:He reads because he gets fun from books, gains knowledge and reading opens up a new world to him. 确保所有要点覆盖,语句通顺,时态正确,符合字数要求。
【答案】Li Qiang is one of my classmates. He has changed a lot this term. He used to spend much time playing computer games. He didn't like reading books. But now he finds reading is fun. He reads for an hour every day. Science books are his favourite because he thinks they are interesting. Usually he borrows books from the library or downloads science stories in his iPad. Why is he interested in reading books? Because he gets fun from reading and he thinks reading can help him get much knowledge and open up a new world to him.
【知识点】英语书面表达、时态运用、语句连贯
【点评】本文完整覆盖所有要点,时态使用准确,语句通顺连贯,符合字数要求,是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】先承接开头,用“used to”引出过去情况:He used to spend much time playing computer games and didn't like reading. 再转折讲现在变化:But now he reads for an hour every day, and science books are his favorite because they are interesting. 补充获取书籍的方式:He usually borrows books from the library or downloads science stories on his iPad. 最后说明原因:He reads because he gets fun from books, gains knowledge and reading opens up a new world to him. 确保所有要点覆盖,语句通顺,时态正确,符合字数要求。
【答案】Li Qiang is one of my classmates. He has changed a lot this term. He used to spend much time playing computer games. He didn't like reading books. But now he finds reading is fun. He reads for an hour every day. Science books are his favourite because he thinks they are interesting. Usually he borrows books from the library or downloads science stories in his iPad. Why is he interested in reading books? Because he gets fun from reading and he thinks reading can help him get much knowledge and open up a new world to him.
【知识点】英语书面表达、时态运用、语句连贯
【点评】本文完整覆盖所有要点,时态使用准确,语句通顺连贯,符合字数要求,是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】0.5
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