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八、书面表达(满分25分)
古人云："读万卷书，行万里路。"阅读和旅行都是学习和成长的重要方式。请以"Reading and travelling：paths to growth(阅读与旅行：成长之路)"为题，写一篇短文，谈谈你对"读万卷书"和"行万里路"的理解。
要点：
1. 你的阅读习惯(阅读时间、书籍类型、阅读感悟)；
2. 记忆深刻的一次旅行(时间、地点、活动、意义)；
3. 结合两者，谈谈你的看法。
注意事项：
1. 词数90左右，开头已给出不计入总词数；
2. 必须包含给出的要点，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实的校名、人名等信息。
Reading and travelling: paths to growth
Just as the saying goes，"Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles."
古人云："读万卷书，行万里路。"阅读和旅行都是学习和成长的重要方式。请以"Reading and travelling：paths to growth(阅读与旅行：成长之路)"为题，写一篇短文，谈谈你对"读万卷书"和"行万里路"的理解。
要点：
1. 你的阅读习惯(阅读时间、书籍类型、阅读感悟)；
2. 记忆深刻的一次旅行(时间、地点、活动、意义)；
3. 结合两者，谈谈你的看法。
注意事项：
1. 词数90左右，开头已给出不计入总词数；
2. 必须包含给出的要点，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实的校名、人名等信息。
Reading and travelling: paths to growth
Just as the saying goes，"Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles."
答案
One possible version:
Reading and travelling: paths to growth
Just as the saying goes, “Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles.” I enjoy reading before sleep. Storybooks and science books are my favourites. They open my eyes to different worlds and ideas.
Last summer, I travelled to Beijing with my family. We visited the Great Wall. Climbing it was tiring but amazing. Seeing it in real life made the history I read in books come alive. It was an unforgettable experience.
I think both reading and travelling are important for growth. Reading gives us knowledge, and travelling helps us experience the world. Together, they help us develop in many ways.
Reading and travelling: paths to growth
Just as the saying goes, “Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles.” I enjoy reading before sleep. Storybooks and science books are my favourites. They open my eyes to different worlds and ideas.
Last summer, I travelled to Beijing with my family. We visited the Great Wall. Climbing it was tiring but amazing. Seeing it in real life made the history I read in books come alive. It was an unforgettable experience.
I think both reading and travelling are important for growth. Reading gives us knowledge, and travelling helps us experience the world. Together, they help us develop in many ways.
解析
【分析】
首先明确本次写作主题为“Reading and travelling: paths to growth”，需覆盖三个核心要点：1. 个人阅读习惯（含阅读时间、书籍类型、阅读感悟）；2. 一次印象深刻的旅行（含时间、地点、活动、意义）；3. 结合阅读与旅行谈对成长的看法。写作时需注意：开头已给出，词数控制在90左右，不得出现真实校名、人名，语言通顺自然，结构清晰，每个要点用简洁语句表达，最后升华主题呼应“成长之路”。
【解析】
1. 写作第一部分（对应要点1）：说明自身阅读习惯——睡前阅读，喜欢故事书和科学书，感悟是阅读能开阔眼界、接触不同世界与想法；
2. 写作第二部分（对应要点2）：描述旅行经历——去年夏天和家人去北京，参观长城，爬长城虽累但震撼，实地所见让书本中的历史变得真实，是难忘的经历；
3. 写作第三部分（对应要点3）：总结看法——阅读提供知识，旅行助力体验世界，二者结合能多方面促进成长，呼应主题。
【答案】
One possible version:
Reading and travelling: paths to growth
Just as the saying goes, “Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles.” I enjoy reading before sleep. Storybooks and science books are my favourites. They open my eyes to different worlds and ideas.
Last summer, I travelled to Beijing with my family. We visited the Great Wall. Climbing it was tiring but amazing. Seeing it in real life made the history I read in books come alive. It was an unforgettable experience.
I think both reading and travelling are important for growth. Reading gives us knowledge, and travelling helps us experience the world. Together, they help us develop in many ways.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、成长类话题写作、要点式作文
【点评】
本文紧扣题目主题，完整覆盖所有写作要点，结构清晰，语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，准确诠释了“读万卷书，行万里路”的内涵，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确本次写作主题为“Reading and travelling: paths to growth”，需覆盖三个核心要点：1. 个人阅读习惯（含阅读时间、书籍类型、阅读感悟）；2. 一次印象深刻的旅行（含时间、地点、活动、意义）；3. 结合阅读与旅行谈对成长的看法。写作时需注意：开头已给出，词数控制在90左右，不得出现真实校名、人名，语言通顺自然，结构清晰，每个要点用简洁语句表达，最后升华主题呼应“成长之路”。
【解析】
1. 写作第一部分（对应要点1）：说明自身阅读习惯——睡前阅读，喜欢故事书和科学书，感悟是阅读能开阔眼界、接触不同世界与想法；
2. 写作第二部分（对应要点2）：描述旅行经历——去年夏天和家人去北京，参观长城，爬长城虽累但震撼，实地所见让书本中的历史变得真实，是难忘的经历；
3. 写作第三部分（对应要点3）：总结看法——阅读提供知识，旅行助力体验世界，二者结合能多方面促进成长，呼应主题。
【答案】
One possible version:
Reading and travelling: paths to growth
Just as the saying goes, “Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles.” I enjoy reading before sleep. Storybooks and science books are my favourites. They open my eyes to different worlds and ideas.
Last summer, I travelled to Beijing with my family. We visited the Great Wall. Climbing it was tiring but amazing. Seeing it in real life made the history I read in books come alive. It was an unforgettable experience.
I think both reading and travelling are important for growth. Reading gives us knowledge, and travelling helps us experience the world. Together, they help us develop in many ways.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、成长类话题写作、要点式作文
【点评】
本文紧扣题目主题，完整覆盖所有写作要点，结构清晰，语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，准确诠释了“读万卷书，行万里路”的内涵，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
